Hurry, hurry, please come in

I think since it's poetry, it should be refined, and the number of words can be as few as possibleOf course, the center should be clear and catchy to read.

If I were it (I thought I could do without, then some of the space for association would not be bound to me, so that there would be a wider space later).

A yellow leaf ("one", "fall" should not be).

It doesn't feel good to have "no" (but I can't think of a better substitute for it, and "big" doesn't make sense and shouldn't exist).

No Sunshine Caressing (Seeing this, I suddenly thought if I could replace "no" with "don't expect" to cater to your style).

But I still carry my dreams (obviously "I" is redundant, "may" is used to coherently the next sentence with some problems, consider "that" - that still carries the dream...

In the ruthlessness of the autumn wind (don't use all unnecessary words "wind", you can consider deleting it, wouldn't it be better to replace "ruthless" with other words?For example, "bleak" or "cold").

Free fall (this sentence is really inappropriate, I think, this is off topic at all, it's obviously a very lyrical poem, you come to a free fall, such a rational text, not good, what is the highest level of prose articles?Write whatever you want to write and don't write anything. To put it simply, if you want to write "rain", you can't use words with "rain" or words that are directly linked, which has charm.

The poem should have more charm: suddenly like a night of spring breeze, thousands of trees and pear blossoms;Why is this a famous sentence for the ages?Because he sings "snow".

Even if you use only one word and a symbol in this sentence, "fall!"."It's better than that, you think about the rest, I'll think of it. ）

Leave it to passers-by ("Passers-by" OK?).Don't deliberately let the value of the text decrease for the sake of word consistency... You use one more word, and the average value of each word goes down, you have to understand. ）

Beautiful picture (to use contrast, why not exaggerate a little "colorful"?)So how about exaggerating a little more "gorgeous"?Try it, huh. ）

I was originally a fallen leaf (redundancy, your biggest problem, if you want to cooperate with the previous paragraph, then the word "leaf").

Why do you need to be a big tree ("Why" is not very suitable, I feel that "big" is redundant, if you use "?Replace "why do you need to?"--Need mercy? ）

I only have dreams (not in "me" "my" anymore, poetry, not reality, although relying on reality, but... Think for yourself. ）

In the mockery of fate (from here, messed up, the center is not even clear...) I don't want to change it).

Drop Fall.

It's because I haven't had success.

Time is seesawing.

I still don't stop fighting.

With a dream, kissing the dirt.

with what I covet and what I spurn.

Turn it into fertilizer and do your last part.

For what I love.

Concentrated as nutrients.

Although it never saved my ......

I've only changed more than 1 paragraph, and I don't want to continue to change it, do you want to try it yourself, otherwise it's your own? A little opinion: Jane, pick, check.

Finally, I would like to send you a word: the road is long, and I will go up and down to seek.

Are you trying to say that fallen leaves have a role? Is it useful to allude to yourself?

Who thinks you're useless?

Your poems seem to be swearing that they are useful, but in fact they are complaining that they are not writing the freedom you want.

A lot of things you don't see yourself. But that doesn't mean it doesn't exist. Is the last paragraph written about love?

The first paragraph is still good.

Inspired me.

A yellowing leaf.

Finally finished this life.

Lose the support of the tree.

Say goodbye to the caress of the sun.

With dreams of the afterlife.

Under the breeze.

From homecoming, it thought.

This is the end of this life.

I don't know. We.

I saw the coming of autumn.

If I were it, a withered yellow leaf, without the support of a tree, without the caress of the sun, but I still carry my dreams. In the merciless autumn wind, free fall, leaving a beautiful picture for passers-by. I am a fallen leaf, why should I be pitied, I can only fall and fall with dreams in the ridicule of fate, because I have never had success.

Time tugs at me and I still don't stop fighting, kissing the soil with my dreams, turning what I covet and what I spurn into fertilizer, and doing my best to condense what I love into nutrients. Although it never saved my ......

Is this poetry? Prose is defined as prose.

If I were it.

If I were it.

A withered yellow fallen leaf.

The relentlessness of the autumn wind.

Let me drift alone.

There is no support for the branches.

There is no support for packing.

Fate laughed.

It's because I haven't embraced success.

If I were it.

A withered yellow fallen leaf.

And why should the tree have mercy?

With dreams. Dancing in the air.

One last look.

Once upon a time, love. If I were it.

A withered yellow fallen leaf.

Time. Tug-of-war.

The pace of chasing dreams never stops.

With dreams. Kiss the dirt.

with what I covet and what I spurn.

Turned into spring mud. For what I love.

Use the last of my strength.

Even if it never holds me ...

There is a center.

There is a tone.

If I were it (poetry).

If I were it.

A withered yellow fallen leaf.

There is no big tree to rely on.

No caress of sunlight (sunlight is everywhere).

But I still have my dreams with me.

In the mercilessness of the autumn wind.

Free Drop is left to those who pass by.

Beautiful picture.

I was a fallen leaf.

Why do you need to be merciful (just reincarnation, why not pity).

I only have dreams.

Mockery in fate.

Drop Fall.

Just because I haven't had success (and it's been brilliantly green, it's success) time has been tugging.

I still don't stop fighting.

With a dream, kissing the dirt.

with what I covet and what I spurn.

Turn it into fertilizer and do your last part.

For what I love.

Concentrated as nutrients.

Although it never saved my ......(You're still with it, and the year after that, you'll laugh in the treetops again).

The artistic conception of this poem is probably a little clear, it seems to be a little sad, and I encourage myself, but there are too many embellishments in this poem, and the center is unclear.

It's okay, it's just a little less of a feeling of echoing back and forth, and in addition, the feeling is not deep enough.

Agree upstairs, please study hard and make achievements in the future.

Now your work is not enough to be called a poem.

What do you mean by that?

Agree upstairs, since you have started to have some things on your own, there will definitely be a harvest.

Let's work together!

It's not good, but if you work hard, I'm sure you'll succeed.

Is the pear blossom body of any practical significance?

Why don't you learn ancient Chinese poetry?

What is the use of learning this kind of "poetry" that separates a sentence into several paragraphs?

Agree upstairs, please study hard and make achievements in the future.

The word "integrity" is not unfamiliar to everyone. In life, people often say: "Businessmen do business, but also pay attention to a word of sincerity, but the buyer is not at ease, often ask this thing is fake, did not lie to me, such words, what does it mean, integrity has become what people say verbally, but can not do it."

In the minds of our primary school students, honesty is honesty and not deceiving people.

I remember one time, when I was in the second grade, I took an exam. When the teacher sent down the exam papers, I looked at it and only scored 75 points, and I thought to myself: If my mother knows about it when I go home, I must have a meal of "fried shredded pork on a bamboo board", and if I don't tell it, I feel that I am dishonest.

My heart is like two little ghosts babbling and arguing. What's even more annoying is that they each have their own reasons, and I can't choose between them, and in the end I choose the latter. I secretly folded the exam papers into a ball of paper and threw them into a drawer.

When I got home, my heart was like fifteen buckets going up and down. The next day, during the class, the teacher told us a story about integrity. There is a story of Zengzi killing a pig, and there was a man named Zengzi in ancient times.

One day his wife was going to the market, but his son wanted to go too, so his wife coaxed him and said, "As long as you don't cry, mother will come back and kill a pig for you to eat." When his wife returned, she was about to put the meat down in the pot, when her saw it, she immediately stopped him and said to him, "I'm just coaxing my son, don't take it seriously!"

Zeng Zi said: "You lie to your son now, and he will deceive others when he grows up in the future!" "I think the ancients also had integrity, so I shouldn't have deceived my mother!

I took out the test paper from the drawer, and when I came home nervously, my mother seemed to see through my thoughts, and while reaching for my school bag, she asked me, "Daughter, what's wrong?" I slowly took out the crumpled test paper from my pocket and handed it to my mother, not daring to look at my mother's face, and timidly lowered my head and said to my mother

I didn't do well in the exam, I didn't tell you. My mother touched my head, and instead of criticizing me, she said to me meaningfully: "Daughter, scores are important, but integrity is even more important!"

Integrity is golden! As the saying goes, "No one can stand in the world without faithfulness"! Therefore, people should be honest people.

After listening to my mother's words, I lowered my head in shame.

Through this incident, I learned that integrity starts from small things. No matter in life or study, let integrity take root in our hearts and spread in every corner of the world.

Junior High School Exams Hehe I specialize in catching students who cheat in class.

15-1) (1-third) 21

21+1) (1-half) 44

Set the whole journey to x meters.

Then there is x*2 3 - x*3 5 = 500x 15 =500

x=7500

That is, the whole journey is 7500 meters.

500 (2 3 - 3 5) = 500 * 15 = 7500 m It's as simple as that.

If the whole journey is x meters long, then there are 2 3x-3 5x=200, and the solution is x=3000 meters.