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Updated on educate 2024-06-28
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-12

    The title of the essay is novel, the beginning of the article is set off by the scene, playing the role of foreshadowing, there is foreshadowing in the front, and there is a response in the back, so that the structure of the article is complete, and it leaves the reader with an aftertaste, the content is a combination of virtual and real, and the ending is warm and sweet, which not only points out the center, but also deepens the theme, which is a rare good article.

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-11

    I digress, when you give the example of a scavenger, you want to show that there is a reward for hard work, but Xiaole works hard but there is no return, isn't it contradictory?

  3. Anonymous users2024-02-10

    After reading Gorky's "Childhood", I couldn't calm down for a long time.

    The living environment of the protagonist Alyosha is poignant, his father died of illness when he was three years old, and he followed his mother to his grandmother's house. My grandfather was a rough and selfish little dyer. Both uncles were just as rough and selfish, even their children.

    Alyosha was abused in such a family: her grandfather often beat her grandmother and children, and once beat Alyosha to the point of losing consciousness and becoming seriously ill. Who can not feel panic and uneasiness in such a dark environment?!

    I was very depressed after reading it. Living in such a family, will Alyosha's soul also be defiled? But fortunately, the world is not all ugly, and he is surrounded by good and upright people such as his grandmother, who give Alyosha confidence and strength, so that he can see light and hope, and believe that the darkness will eventually pass and the future will belong to the light.

    Among them, his grandmother is his sun. Grandma always gave Alyosha the seeds of love with her warmth and her tolerance, and the seeds germinated and grew into towering trees, and with the protection of her wings, Alyosha's world would no longer be left to the wind and rain. His grandmother soothed his wounds with her love, and it was the elder worker Grigori who really taught him to be an upright person, and of course the kind, optimistic, and compassionate "Little Tskgang" also taught Alyosha how to face the difficulties of life.

    But he was killed by two uncles.

    Gorky begins his work with the words: "Sometimes even I find it hard to believe that such a thing could happen." There are many things that I would like to argue and deny, because there are so many cruel things in the dark life of that 'family fool'.

    But, at the same time, we can also see that on the other side of this darkness, there is something called light that is faintly shining there. So Gorky said with emotion: "As soon as she (my grandmother) appeared, she woke me up, led me to the light, and connected everything around me with a constant thread, weaving it into a colorful lace ,......."It was her selfless love for the world that enriched me and filled me with the strength to cope with the hardships of life.

    As long as there is hope for the light, then this little bit of fire can be put into infinity, until it spills into every dark corner! And what I want to say is not to lose faith in any unbearable reality, there will inevitably be some people and things that make you feel pain and even despair, but please believe that after the darkness passes, the sun will always come out! As long as you can maintain your unquenchable faith, that is, there may still be darkness in front of you, that is, there is still sadness in your life, but you insist on being a kind, optimistic, and compassionate person, then you will definitely usher in the glory of life.

  4. Anonymous users2024-02-09

    Faith leads me to grow.

    There is faith there is hope, there is the power of self-improvement, as long as the faith is not extinguished, will eventually break through adversity and tenacious growth.

    Inscription. Birth.

    I, an ordinary tree species, always hope to take root and grow healthy and strong in a comfortable environment. But it always backfires. On that day, the bitter autumn wind rolled tirelessly, and led me to a wasteland.

    The soil of the wasteland, dry and hard; The night of the moor, dark and long; The winter of the wasteland, cold and persistent.

    I left my dear homeland, I left my lovely friends and was left alone in a dark, cold place. Looking up at the night sky, a few dazzling stars pierced the silent night, so bright.

    Hopefully. When nothing can be changed, I think I will be able to survive the harsh winter and stand on this wasteland. So, I had the belief that I wanted to live.

    Let the sand strike me, let the sand cover me, and I will not complain; Let the snow cover me, let the ice freeze me, I no longer fear.

    Because I firmly believe in that belief.

    I'm waiting for the geese to come in the warm spring of the coming year, and I'm looking forward to the sunshine that will melt the snow and ice in the coming year. Nowadays, pain is no longer a harm to me, but a necessary process of growth.

    Rebirth. In the haze, I felt that there was water flowing around my body. I suddenly came to my senses, stretched out my feet, and the roots were stuck in the snow-soaked soil. Ah, the spring I've been waiting for for so long has come!

    I greedily sucked the sweet snow water, stretched my soft body upward, the soil had become soft and soft, and the pests frozen in the soil had become nourishment for my growth.

    Finally, I broke through the soil, poked my head out, a bright light fascinated my eyes, and when I opened my eyes, it turned out to be a red sun leaping from the purple mountain, and I happily stretched my buds to accept the baptism of spring.

    Faith. Now I am deeply rooted in this wilderness.

    Although the land here is still dry and hard, I am nourished by the underground river; Although the nights here are still dark and long, I am accompanied by flowers and plants; Although the winter here is still long-lasting, he always puts a snow blanket on me.

    Now, I am most afraid of wind, rain, thunder and lightning.

    Therefore, I have a new belief - to overcome all adversity and thrive.

    Postscript: Only when faith is immortal can there be immortal power. And I'm deeply rooted in my faith. On the road of growth in the future, I will grow stronger and stronger in the company of faith!

  5. Anonymous users2024-02-08

    My homework is the same as yours...

  6. Anonymous users2024-02-07

    I'm also a freshman in junior high school, but I don't want to tell you that my essay is too long, and you may not be able to use it, I can only write you a short biography of Hans Christian Andersen of no more than 200 words, which will be ordered...

    Andersen was plagued by poverty from an early age, and worked as an apprentice in several shops without a very formal education. As a teenager, he was interested in the stage and fantasized about becoming a singer, actor or playwright. In 1819 he played a supporting role at the Royal Theatre in Copenhagen.

    In 1822, he received a grant from the theater director Jonas Colin and attended a grammar school in Sleiersel. His books include "The Ugly Duckling", "The Daughter of the Sea", "The Nightingale" and so on.

  7. Anonymous users2024-02-06

    It's all winter vacation homework, it's too lazy.

  8. Anonymous users2024-02-05

    Childhood me and my little friends.

    Write about one thing that you remember as a child, the more meaningful it is, the better.

  9. Anonymous users2024-02-04

    Forehead... Shouldn't you write this yourself?

  10. Anonymous users2024-02-03

    It's not good for you to do this.

    Girl. That's what you should have written. It doesn't make sense for someone else to write.

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