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Interpersonal communication teachers often hear many elementary school students complain after class that writing an essay is a distressing thing, so how to write a good character description essay for elementary school? The following teacher will teach the experience of writing good essays to the children, the character description skills of the primary school composition writing skills, and the little students come to learn the knowledge with the teacher.
Generally speaking, the narrative mainly focuses on the character's appearance, language, actions, and psychological activities, and through the description of typical cases and typical characteristics to reflect the characteristics of the protagonist's thoughts, character, quality, and style. So, what are some of the best techniques for writing character description essays? The teacher summed it up in the formula:
Writing a person essay = appearance + events.
Finally, the teacher also suggested that the young students learn how to write excellent essays from others, so that they can find the shortcomings of their own assignments! Next, the teacher will organize the primary school Chinese: how to write character descriptions?
Master the four skills, and the characters are vividly described! Share it, little students, come and learn.
Message at the end of the article] The above is part of the content (primary school Chinese composition character description knowledge points), today the teacher will share it here, if you like it, pay more attention to it!
Character depiction refers to the description of a character's appearance, language, movements, demeanor, and inner world. If you want to write the characters well, you must observe them carefully. In our daily life, we will communicate with many people every day, and we can meet many people at home, school, and even on the street, so we can go deep into their inner world by carefully observing the characteristic manifestations of their external modality, understand their thoughts and character, learn their strengths, and gain inspiration.
It is necessary to record the results of observation and the experience obtained to motivate yourself, and then reproduce the voice and smile of the characters in the form of articles to infect others. An article can reflect the real society, and the core of social life is people, so the focus of writing a good article is the description of the characters.
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On that day, Xiao K, an old author with a lot of writing experience, came to me to revise the manuscript, Xiao K's past results are very good, and he has a history of copyright adaptation, for this kind of author, I have great expectations, but the result is not satisfactory.
Little K's book is a rebirth statement, the heroine was a crying wreck in her previous life, chasing the man 2, ignoring the man 1 who loved her deeply, and finally ended up dead without a body. After being reborn, the heroine changed her past and decided to take revenge on Male 2, protect Male 1, and then live a shameless life with Male 1.
Xiao K's routine,It's also very simple.,It's to write how miserable before rebirth first.,How to chase men after rebirth 1.,It stands to reason that if you write according to all the routines of rebirth.,Basically there won't be a big problem.,At the same time,Little K is still an old author.,Story arrangement,It should also be brilliant.,But I just frowned when I looked at it.。
I read the beginning of Xiao K three times, and finally put forward the following revisions:
Before the rebirth, it was too long (up to 3,000 words), but it was reduced to less than 1,000 words.
The portrayal of the male and female protagonists is insufficient, and there is a lack of character memory points.
There are too many irrelevant characters, and all unimportant characters are anonymous or cut off.
Little K immediately went to change it, and after half an hour, the problems of 1 and 3 were all solved, and 2 hardly changed.
After that, I asked Xiao K to revise it five times, but it still didn't improve, and Xiao K couldn't bear it anymore and asked me: In the end, how to portray the characters? What is a character memory point? I've tried really hard to think about it, but I still can't.
The problem of Xiao K is believed to be a problem that many new authors have been troubled by.
Everyone knows that characters have to be portrayed, but if they don't know how to portray them, they still grab a lot of ......
Regarding several major elements of character portrayal, the encyclopedia lists these aspects: portrait description, language description, action description, psychological description, and modal description.
This element can be understood at a glance, but I think it can't effectively solve the fundamental problem of character portrayal.
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There are five methods of character description: portrait description, action description, language description, psychological description, and demeanor description.
1. Portrait description: also known as appearance description, it is a description method to reveal the character of the character through the description of appearance, expression, posture, clothing and tone. For example, she has jet-black hair and a pink coat that accentuates her watery face.
2. Action description: also known as action description, is a description method that reveals the character's personality through the description of the character's personalized actions and actions. For example: he walks with steps, step by step.
3. Language description: It is a method of describing the character of the character through the personalized language of the character, such as the dialogue with others. For example: He said sincerely, I'm sorry, teacher, I was wrong. Wide grinding tremor.
4. Psychological description: It is through the analysis of the psychological activities of the characters (such as inner feelings, intentions, wishes, thoughts, and ideological struggles?). It is a depiction method that excavates the thoughts and feelings of the characters to portray the inner character traits of the characters.
For example, he thought to himself, if I have an ideal, then I can fight for it!
5. Demeanor description: It is different from the appearance description, which is a portrayal of people's facial expressions, which can highlight the character traits of the characters. For example: he frowned, a look of disgust. Expression description is also called expression description.
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Character description is a very important part of literary works, which can enable readers to have a more frank and in-depth understanding of the character's personality, appearance and social background, and get more pleasure from reading. Here are some of the most common ways to describe characters in writing:
Descriptions of appearance: including descriptions of body shape, facial features, clothing, etc., can highlight the character's personality characteristics and social status.
Behavior depiction: Character's personality traits are shown through daily behavior, such as attitude, habits, and interests.
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Psychological depiction: By describing the thinking, emotion, and mental state of the character, it expresses its inner activities such as thinking, feelings, and desires.
Environmental description: Give the reader a visual and psychological impression by describing the environment in which the characters live, so as to set off the image and social status of the characters.
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Dialogue description: Through the form of dialogue, the characters communicate and interact, and express their understanding of the characters' personalities and positions.
These methods do not exist in isolation, but are intertwined and intertwined in literary works. Through the skillful use of these methods, the characters are created to be vivid and deeply rooted in the bone marrow, so that readers can feel deep and unforgettable.
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Xiaoli pursed her lips, hunched her waist, tiptoed to the ground, and slowly approached it step by step. Closer, closer, and saw her quietly stretch out her right hand to the butterfly, and the two open fingers closed together, clamping the pink butterfly's wings. Xiaoli jumped and jumped with joy.
He bent over, the basketball clapping back and forth, left and right under his hands, his eyes rolling around, looking for an opportunity to "break through". Suddenly, he quickened his pace, turned left and right, rushed through two layers of defense, came to the basket, jumped with a tiger, turned and shot, and the basketball made a beautiful arc in the air and landed in the basket impartially.
The classroom was smoky. Teacher Mao stood at the door angrily, his head was steaming, there were a few shiny beads of sweat on the tip of his nose, his eyebrows were raised angrily, but his mouth was grinning downward. When he saw us, he blinked in shock, and the muscles on his face froze all of a sudden, not moving at all, just like the "freeze frame" in the movie.
A few of us were nailed there like wood.
The old man's hands were dexterous. A clay figure was born in his hands, and it only took a few minutes. I watched him pick up another lump of mud, first knead it into a circle, and then gently rub it with his hands to make it soft and smooth.
Then, rubbing on it again, gradually distinguishing the head, body, and legs of the person. He held the clay figure with his left hand, fiddled with it with his right hand, and after a while, the clay figure put on a partial hat.
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The basic methods of character description are portrait description, language description, action description, psychological description, and demeanor description.
The character description method is a technique that uses vivid language to depict characters, events, and scenes, giving readers an immersive feeling.
1. Portrait depiction.
Through the description of the character's appearance, expression, clothing, posture, intonation, and physical features.
2. Language description.
A conversation is a conversation between two or several people; A monologue is a character's self-talk.
3. Action description.
The actions and actions of the characters are a method to express the thoughts and characters of the characters.
4. Psychological description.
Psychology refers to the inner activity of the characters and is the silent language.
5. Descriptive demeanor.
Depiction of demeanor is the portrayal of a person's facial expressions, which can highlight the character's personality traits.
Character Description:
The activities of the characters include external modality (psychology, portraiture, action, language) and the inner world, which are an organic unity.
To write characters well, you must focus on observation. In real life, we have to interact with many people every day: in the family, there are parents and other relatives; At school, there are teachers and classmates; On the street, you meet more people.
We should all carefully observe the characteristic manifestations of their external modality, and then go deep into their hearts, understand their thoughts and characters, learn their strengths, and obtain enlightenment.
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Descriptions of psychology, movements, demeanor, language, and appearance.
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Language description, action description, psychological description, appearance description, demeanor description, these are the commonly used.
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