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How to keep an observation diary.
1。Determine who to observe. Is it a thing, a scene, or a process.
2。Determine the order of observation. An object or a scene can be observed in spatial order such as top to bottom, front to back, and exterior to interior. A process can be observed in a sequential order (chronological order) and in a logical order.
3。Write about the characteristics of things, or the characteristics of processes.
4。Plain language is generally used, and in order to facilitate expression, rhetorical devices such as contrasts and metaphors can be used.
To put it in more general terms. Take a look at an example:
Example 1: "An Observation Diary".
Night fell on the earth. I stood in front of a wooden fence and looked up at the sky. I saw that in the semicircle of the moon, one was bright and one was dark.
There is a blue halo tightly around the moon. When I looked away from the bright moon, I realized that there were countless stars in the sky far away from the bright moon. They resemble sparkling diamonds, some radiating a dazzling golden glow, while others emit a faint white glow.
Some of them are scattered in all directions, some are densely clustered, and the sky is so beautiful and magnificent that the sky is decorated with them! The moonlight covered the earth with a layer of silver armor, and my figure standing silently seemed tall. Behind me, long green vines coiled around the fence, pulling on many trumpet flowers.
Under the wooden fence, an unknown small flower blooms freely, red, yellow, pink, and white, reflecting the moonlight, which looks even more delicate and lovely. The autumn wind blows, the fragrance of flowers overflows, and the nose is bursting. Everything was in the silence of the night.
However, I seemed to hear a faint sound of wind music,......Could it be that the trumpet flowers on the green vines are praising this enchanting moonlit night?
This is a diary of scene observation written by a junior high school student.
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Describe the appearance of what you observe, compare it with the last time you wrote it, and add a few thoughts at the end.
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Just write about the results you observe, and give a testimonial.
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How to observe writing a diary is as follows:
Observation diary refers to the things seen in life to write down, whether it is mountains and rivers, wonders, animals, plants, anecdotes, etc.
The steps (methods) to write an observation diary are as follows:
1. We must first determine the object of observation, whether it is a thing, a sports meeting, or a thing.
2. Write an observation diary with a face. No matter what we observe, we have to start from the whole, write a diary of observation, we must first grasp our observation of the whole, for example, if we observe a table, we have to see whether the table is round or square, first write about the table from the big side.
3. Keep an observation diary. We observe from the surface to the inside, we observe its surface after we have observed its point, we still take the table as an example, after we know what shape it is, we have to observe whether it has drawers, how many drawers there are, what the drawers are, or what material the table is made of, these can be points.
4. Writing an observation diary should grasp the characteristics and highlight the key points. Observing the scenery must be seen clearly, look carefully, and write down the special places, so as to be impressive and attractive, and the focus is on the basis of characteristics.
5. Keep an observation diary in order. No matter what we observe, what we want to write, we have to have an order of observation, such as from top to bottom, from left to right, from far to near or from inside to outside, no matter what it is, we should have an order, so that it does not appear disorganized. <>
6. Write an observation diary with an angle. Before we write, we must determine our viewing angle, to know whether we are looking up or looking down.
7. There are some techniques to use in writing an observation diary. No matter what kind of essay, writing technique is indispensable, and when we write an observation diary, we use some rhetorical devices such as metaphors and contrasts, which will add a lot of literary brilliance to our essay.
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Tadpole writing can make people more clear and rational to continue writing.