Touching examples Impressions, how to write touching examples?

Take a look at it in the news, there should be many touching examples of the catastrophe and catastrophe, close to life and close to us. A bus driver saw that there were thieves stealing passengers' things on the public delivery bus, and the driver kindly reminded him that he was seriously injured by the thief with a knife and finally died. It's true, I saw it on the Internet.

I usually like to write something, and my friends think it's good, hehe. Let me tell you about my experience.

First of all, you must have a 10-point understanding of the example you are going to write. Including the content of the event, the development process (the focus is on the details, such as the characters' expressions, language, etc.), the main characters, etc., which is the basis of the content of the writing.

Second, identify your emotions about the event. If an event wants to move others, you must first move yourself. In this way, you will be able to pass on your impressions to others through what you have written.

That is, the event itself is important, and if the event itself is indifferent, then it is difficult for us to write it movingly. What's the point of rewriting events regardless of the facts, right?

Third, writing skills. Personally, what I like more is the detailed description and the rendering of the environment. Through the depiction of the characters' expressions, words, movements, etc., the characteristics of the characters are expressed.

Through the depiction of the environment at that time, the reader can be immersed in the scene and have associations. In addition, when writing some descriptive sentences, try to use short sentences, concise, but profound, and the reader does not have to endure the pain of reading a lot of words, and will naturally read on.

The above is just an overview of my method, if the landlord does not understand anything, you can communicate again hope (n n).

Actually, it really has to be touching. Be real. It doesn't have to be that things really happen to you.

But to be possible. And it needs a lot of detail. The truly touching text is not a flowery algae.

Create realistic scenes and images. It's enough to make the reader empathize.

1: A rose.

A gentleman parked his car in front of the flower shop, and he was going to order a bouquet of flowers from the flower shop and ask them to deliver it to his mother, who was far away.

When the gentleman was about to enter the store, he found a little girl sitting on the road crying, and the gentleman walked up to the little girl and asked her

Child, why are you sitting here crying? 」

I want to buy a rose for my mother, but I don't have enough money. The child said. The gentleman was distressed when he heard this.

That's right. So the gentleman took the little girl by the hand and went into the flower shop, ordered a bouquet for her mother, and then bought a rose for the little girl. When he walked out of the flower shop, the gentleman proposed to the little girl that he should drive her home.

Are you really going to send me home? 」

Absolutely! Then you can take me to my mother's. But uncle, my mother's place is far from here. 」

If I had known, I wouldn't have carried you. The gentleman said jokingly.

The gentleman drove all the way as the little girl said, but he didn't expect that after walking out of the main road in the city, he followed the winding mountain road and came to the cemetery. The little girl placed flowers next to a new grave for her mother, who had passed away a month earlier.

Dear, offer a rose, and walk a long way. The gentleman sent the little girl home and then turned back to the flower shop. He canceled the bouquet he had to send to his mother, bought a large bouquet instead, and went straight to his mother's house, a five-hour drive away, where he wanted to present the flowers himself.

A rose.

Holding a grand funeral for the deceased is better than fulfilling filial piety while he is alive.