Diary reviews are short, and reading notes are short

1. The font is written beautifully and neatly, and the content is rich and substantial.

2. Write scenes and write delicately Delicate and agile writing.

3 The beginning is novel and vivid, and the end echoes before and after.

4 The text is smooth and the beginning and end echo completely.

5. The content is clearly expressed and remarkable.

6 Sentences are fluent and vivid, and the words are just right.

7 The opinion is very correct Clear-cut paragraphs are desirable.

8 The content is on topic The paragraphs are well organized.

9 Rich and vivid descriptions The words are beautiful and fluent.

10 Be full of creative imagination Write carefully and attentively.

11 Passages are clear and layered, and idioms are used excellently.

12. Aim to innovate and be ambitious, full of content, and life-like.

13 Be able to think positively Good ideas.

14 Grasp the essentials of segmentation.

15 Learn to use punctuation correctly.

16 More examples could be added.

17 Use idioms or figures of speech appropriately.

18 Typos should be corrected and not made again.

19 The beginning should lead people to think in a positive way.

20 Lack of Thoughtfulness Words and phrases should be kept in clichés.

It reads as follows:

1. You are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with a lot of potential.

2 The language of the essay is very fluent, and it also writes about the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend, and I hope we can learn together and pick a fragrant bouquet in the garden of literature.

3 I'm sorry that the teacher didn't understand this paragraph, would you like to explain it to the teacher again? Thank you.

4 Your handwriting is neat and your writing is beautiful, and your teacher will learn from you. If the material of the article is more original, it will definitely complement the writing. What do you think?

5 Great! Your article reproduces the straightforwardness and heartiness of the Northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, synaesthesia.

The use is particularly ingenious. Your pen is conquesting and contagious. Work hard and create brilliance again!

Diary Comment Short Teacher Comment:

1. Learning is like driving a mountain, if you don't advance, you will retreat, the reason why you are not as we hope in learning is because you still lack initiative, only the enthusiasm for learning, only down-to-earth.

Keep accumulating, so as not to bury your good talents.

2. There is a famous saying circulating in American society: If you don't even believe in yourself, who will trust you? The teacher wants to give you this sentence, hoping to inspire you, in fact, you are a very good child, you must have confidence in yourself, show yourself boldly, and constantly exercise yourself.

Meaning:

A diary refers to a medium used to record content, and a diary also refers to a notebook of daily notes or a record of what you encounter and do every day. As a genre, diary belongs to narrative.

Applied essays on the nature of the text.

The content of the diary comes from our observation of life, therefore, it can narrate, it can write about people, it can be about things, it can write about scenes, and it can also describe activities.

Observation diary comments are short, and the teacher's comments are as follows:

1. The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people willing to read and love to read, and can't bear to let go.

2. Although the events in life with certain narrative value were selected, due to the lack of thorough analysis and deep excavation, the underlying truth of the events could not be deeply reflected at this age.

3. At the end, the emotions are expressed in a concentrated manner, which not only corresponds to the beginning but also summarizes the whole text. Coherent from beginning to end, all in one go. The portrayal of detail, on the contrary, reveals the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this article.

4. Your article is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your literary skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term training. I hope that in the future learning process, you will feel and appreciate life with your heart, and write more touching and good articles.

5. The beginning of the article is engaging and engages the reader. The plot is closely interlocked, rarely disjointed, the language is easy to understand, close to the reality of life, and the reading makes Sen Yun feel more intimate. This is an unpretentious but sincere article that is impressive.

6. The article is reasonable, persuasive, highlights the personality of the characters, the context transition is natural, the organization is clear, the beginning and the end are taken care of, and the end is pointed, highlighting the central idea.

7. You have always been tireless in studying seriously, working actively, and doing your best to do a good job in study and work. Because of the clear goals and serious attitude, the results are also good. But pay attention to the method when working, and be persistent, start and finish, and lead by example, so that more students will trust you and support you.

8. You put your enthusiasm into hard study, into various activities in the class, and ...... in sportsSee your talent in every way. You are generous, good at getting along with your classmates, and have been trusted by your classmates. I hope that in the future, I can persevere in all aspects of training myself and grasp my own today and tomorrow.