The difference between the two news items in the first lesson of the second year of junior high scho

The specific time is different: "The People's Liberation Army's Million Army Crossing the Yangtze River" was written on April 22, 1949, the day before the People's Liberation Army liberated Nanjing; "The Liberation of Nanyang by Our Army in the Central Plains" was written on November 5, 1948, the end of the Liaoshen Campaign and the eve of the Huaihai Campaign.

The specific writing is different: "The People's Liberation Army's Million Army Crossing the Yangtze River" skillfully uses contrast, the heroic and good fighting of the Chinese People's Liberation Army contrasts with the enemy's successive defeats; "The Liberation of Nanyang by Our Army in the Central Plains" uses clever hints to introduce the important battles that took place in Nanyang in history, point out the importance of Nanyang's location, and hint at the great significance of the liberation of Nanyang and the bleak future of Chiang Kai-shek.

The characteristics of the conception are different: "The People's Liberation Army's Million Army Crossing the Yangtze River" summarizes the thousand-mile front, and is written step by step, many but not mixed; "The Liberation of Nanyang by Our Army in the Central Plains" connects history and the present, writing vertically and horizontally, and attracting a degree.

The language style is different: "The People's Liberation Army's Million Army Crossing the Yangtze River" is magnificent, such as "million", "all", "occupy", "control", "cut off", etc.; "The Liberation of Nanyang by Our Army in the Central Plains" is broad and elegant, and the language is subtle, such as "We are in all the Jianghuai River and Han regions, not only trees, but also forests", "If Wang Lingyun no longer escapes, Kang Ze's fate is waiting for him".

Campus News. There is a humorist in our class, he has a small head, black hair, thick eyebrows and big eyes, a thin figure, he is happy all day long, everyone calls him "pistachio".Although his results are not ideal, he also has his strengths, such as:

He likes to play basketball, play computer and other .......In fact, his head is very smart, but he uses it inappropriately.

He always takes the teacher's words as if he is in his ears, and he likes to tell jokes and funny in classOnce, when he was in class, when the English teacher was in A, he interjected in passing: "In an instant, there was a burst of laughter in the classroom, and bursts flew past my ears." But he was miserable.

To be honest, although the holiday was only two days, it seemed like I hadn't seen him for a long time, and I missed him in my heart. However, not all of his classmates liked him, especially the arrogant ones who loved to bully their little classmates. Because they always bully the weak and help some of the strong.

No, I submitted a manuscript on the last day and got 100 yuan. Teacher Zhao also praised him. I think that submitting a post will bring you a lot of fun, and it will also make your writing level gradually improve. I recommend that you submit more manuscripts and improve your composition!

I don't think he submitted to get money, but to win glory for the class Jian Yingxun, his quality is what we should learn, if everyone is like him, our class can become a "civilized class" every time, but there are only a few people like him. We want to carry forward this quality.

There are many such people on campus, but they will not be praised one by one, people should live meaningfully in the world, do something for friends or classes, don't pay too much, as long as they can express their blessings!

1."The People's Liberation Army's Million Army Crossing the Yangtze River" reports on the time, place, and battle situation of the People's Liberation Army's crossing of the Yangtze River, points out the development trend of the war situation, and analyzes the reasons for the enemy's defeat and victory. It shows the heroic spirit of our soldiers who are brave and good at fighting, unstoppable, and invincible.

2."The Liberation of Nanyang by Our Army in the Central Plains" reported on the liberation of Nanyang by the People's Liberation Army and its great military significance: it marked that Chiang Kai-shek's army had embarked on the road of defeat and retreat, while our army had embarked on a good form of successive victories, and had inspired the fighting spirit of the army and people in the liberated areas to take advantage of the victory.

The People's Liberation Army's million-strong army crossed the Yangtze River

Part II: ("From the Twenty Days and Nights" to the end). The battle situation in the area of crossing the river is described in detail.

Level 1: ("Rising from the night of the twentieth......Within 24 hours, 300,000 people had been crossed. Describe the crossing of the river by the Middle Route Army.

Level 2: ("From 5 p.m. on the 21st......Doesn't work in the slightest. Write about the crossing of the river by the Western Route Army.

The third layer: ("Tang Enbo thinks" to the end), describing the combat situation of the Eastern Route Army.

The Central Plains Our Army Liberated Nanyang".

The second layer: ("Nanyang is Guwan County.......)Most of them were born in the Nanyang area"). Two historical materials are used to show that Nanyang has an important strategic position in military affairs since ancient times.

Third layer: ("...... in the past year.)Existing abandoned Nanyang. Looking back at the change of Chiang Kai-shek in the past year from attaching importance to Nanyang to abandoning Nanyang, it points out the trend of the overall collapse of Chiang Kai-shek's army.

Level 4: ("From now on.......)fled to Huludao again. From the basic liberation of Henan Province to the great victory of the People's Liberation Army on the southern front over the past year or so.

Fifth layer: ("Wang Lingyun to Xiangyang" to the end.) ), predicting that Nanyang would flee the enemy Wang Lingyun's future would be dark.

9) Writing Characteristics:

1.The structure is rigorous and hierarchical.

2.The language is concise and imposing.

That's about it, hehe.

The main body should be: the Central Route Army, the Western Route Army and the Eastern Route Army.

1. The main body of this news, three ways and three levels, and looking at the connection of the three levels, you can understand the truth that the whole text is completed in one go. The beginning of the first floor of the middle road is "from the night of the 20th", and the beginning of the first floor of the west road is "from 5 pm on the 21st". After talking about the battle situation on the West Road, they discussed it together, and the last sentence of the discussion was: "Tang Enbo believes that the defense line of the Jiangyin section of Nanjing is very solid, and the weakness only exists on the line of the Jiujiang River in Nanjing."

Unexpectedly, on the day Tang Enbo arrived in Wuhu, the eastern defense line was broken through by our army again." The topic shifted from "west" to "east", and it was clever and natural to move on to the next level. It can be seen that the author pays great attention to the connection between the first layer, so the whole text flows smoothly and in one go.

He praised the command ability of the Chinese People's Liberation Army Headquarters and the command headquarters of various armies in strategizing and winning decisive victories thousands of miles away, and demonstrated the great and fearless spirit of the whole party and the whole army uniting as one, hating the same enemy, and being invincible.

The People's Liberation Army's million-strong army crossed the Yangtze River

Character: The people's empty ode to the million-strong army of the People's Liberation Army.

Location: More than 1,000 fronts digging Zen Huali.

Reason: The People's Liberation Army wants to cross the Yangtze River, and then liberate the whole of China: cross the Yangtze River in three ways, and it can be completed on the 23rd.

Result: The People's Liberation Army won on all fronts.

The Central Plains Our Army Liberated Nanyang".

Character: People's Liberation Army million-strong army Time: From the night of April 20, 1949 to 22 o'clock on April 22, 1949 Place: Jiujiang (exclusive) in the west, more than 1,000 miles to Jiangyin in the east.