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Knowing that the court is falling today, it is suspected that the forest flowers bloomed last night.

Garden: Snowflakes that fall on the courtyard.

Tang Song Zhi asked "The Snow in the Garden".

The sound of water is swallowed by ice, and the sand road is flat in the snow.

Tang Liu Changqing, "Rewarding Zhang Xia Xue's Night to the State on the Way to Farewell to the Bitter Cold".

A vine path is green, and the snow peaks are clear.

Don Li Bai "Winter Returns to the Old Mountain".

The ground is white and the wind is cold, and the snowflakes are as big as hands.

Don Li Bai "Mocking Wang Liyang Refuses to Drink".

The snowflakes in Yanshan are as big as a seat, and they have blown down Xuanyuan Terrace.

Xuanyuan Terrace: According to legend, it is the place where the Yellow Emperor captured the dragon.

Don Li Bai "North Wind Traveling".

The clouds are low and twilight, and the snow is dancing back to the wind.

Return Wind: The wind that swirls.

Tang Du Fu "To the Snow".

The frost is tight, and the clothes are broken, and the fingers are not knotted.

Straight fingers: Stiff fingers.

Tang Du Fu "Five Hundred Words of Yonghuai from Beijing to Fengxian County".

The clouds and gulls are more dancing, and the wind is against the geese.

No line: Not in a row.

Tang Du Fu "Winter Evening Sending the Eldest Grandson to Return to the State".

The cold weather is short, and the wind and waves are flat.

Tang Du Fu, "Nostalgia for Gong'an County".

The slanting sun is sparse on the bamboo, and the residual snow is chaotic in the mountains.

Tang Han Hong, "Chu Master Book House Meeting, Bi Shuzi, Qian Yuan, Wailang Envoy Jun" (a poem by Zhang Ji).

Who will level the ground with ten thousand piles of snow, cut and carved into this even the ceiling.

Tang Hanyu's "Two Plum Flowers": "When the spring land competes for luxury, Luoyang Gardens are especially diverse. Who will level the ground with ten thousand piles of snow, cut and carved into this even the ceiling. ”

Thousands of mountains and birds fly away, and thousands of people disappear. Lonely boat, fishing alone in the cold river and snow.

Tang Liu Zongyuan's "Jiang Xue".

If you don't kill in the harsh winter, how can you see spring.

Slaughter: A grim and bleak look.

Don Lü Wen, "Mengdong Pujin Guanhe Pavilion".

The weather is cold and green, and the north wind is called dry mulberry. There is no crack in the thick ice, and there is a cold light in the short day.

Screaming: The wind roars.

Tang Mengjiao's "Bitter Cold Groan".

Only then did I see that the clouds at the head of the ridge were like covers, and the snow was like dust on the rocks. Thousands of peaks, bamboo shoots, thousands of jade, thousands of trees, pineapples, and thousands of clouds.

Tang Yuanzhi "Southern Qin Snow".

When the six flying flowers enter the house, sit and watch the green bamboo turn into Qiongzhi.

Six: The snowflakes are hexagonal, so they are called snowflakes with "six outs". Qiongzhi: The bamboo branches are covered with snow like white jade.

Don Gao Biao, "To the Snow".

I know that the snow is heavy at night, and I hear the sound of breaking bamboo.

Don Bai Juyi's "Night Snow": "I have been surprised that the pillow is cold, and I can see the window bright again." I know that the snow is heavy at night, and I hear the sound of breaking bamboo. ”

The swirling bead curtain is over the powder wall, lighter than catkins and heavier than frost.

Two sentences to write about the scene of snowflakes.

Tang Li Shangyin's "Two Songs to the Snow".

All the springs are frozen, and I am more cold.

Pharyngeal: The spring water does not flow smoothly due to freezing, so it is described as a whimper. Singing: Singing.

Tang Liu's "Bitter Cold Yin": "All the springs are frozen, and I am more eager to cry the cold." Leaning on Qiao Song in the middle of the night, I don't feel that my clothes are full of snow. ”

Three million jade dragons were retreated, and the scales and remnants of armor flew all over the sky.

Jade Dragon: Describe flying snow. Broken Scales and Broken Armor: Describes the snowflakes dancing like the scales of the armor falling one after another.

Song Hu Zai's "Tiaoxi Yuyin Cong Words" first volume 54 quotes "Western Qing Poems", which contains Zhang Yuan's poem "Snow".

The country never sleeps and the moon is thousands of miles, and the world is selfless and jade.

Jade: Yu Baixue.

Yuan Huang Geng "Snow".

The deep stream is unbearable for snow, and the mountains are frozen and the clouds are not flowing.

Qing Hongsheng "Snow Hope".

These two sentences are from the story of "Yongxue" by Liu Yiqing in the Southern Dynasty's "The World Speaks New Language", which depicts the scene of the Xie family's son and daughter composing poems comparing snowflakes on a snowy day.

1. Original sentence: The difference between sprinkling salt and air can be simulated.

Translation: (snowflakes) It's almost like sprinkling salt in the air.

2. Original sentence: and if the catkins rise because of the wind.

Translation: It's better to compare (snowflakes) to the wind blowing catkins flying all over the sky.

If the catkins are not because of the wind, it is better to resist the snow with catkins, both are white and light, and take advantage of the wind to rise, depicting the situation of heavy snowfall, which has a profound meaning, giving people the feeling that spring is coming. This metaphor reveals Xie Daoyun's love for life and nature.

In addition, at the end of the article, Xie Daoyun's identity is named, which is a powerful hint that the author appreciates Xie Daoyun's answer, and "sprinkling salt in the air can be imitated" is like salt, only pay attention to the fact that both are white, ignoring that salt is granular and must not flutter, and there are objects and images without intention.

It is better if the catkins are raised by the wind, because the catkins can bring people the feeling of spring, and make people feel that spring is coming soon; Although the color of the salt is white, the salt is very heavy and cannot float, and there is no feeling of snow blowing in the sky.

"If the catkins rise because of the wind" is better, because Mrs. Xie smiled happily after hearing it. (according to the original text).

The catkins are light, like snow; Salt is heavy, not quite like snow, and there is no feeling of snow floating in the sky (my own opinion).

It is better to sprinkle salt in the air, salt is similar to snow, both are light. And the catkins are floating upwards, which is inappropriate.

"Scattering salt in the air can be imitated" is just like snow, but "faint catkins rise because of the wind" is different, very meaningful, not only wrote that the catkins are shaped like snow, but also have a feeling that spring is coming, Shelley once said: "Winter is coming, will spring be far away?" And according to the context, it can be seen that Mrs. Xie also agrees with this sentence, and the introduction of Xie Daoyun later shows that Xie Daoyun is very talented, and it also shows the incisiveness of this sentence.

Pay attention to the semantics of the dictionary: "sprinkling salt in the air can be imitated" appears to be more negative, poor: unsatisfactory; Proposed:

Regard as. It means "it can almost be seen as sprinkling salt into the air", and if you don't feel the wonder of snowfall, of course, it's better than "if the catkins are raised by the wind" - "Yo, isn't this like the poplar catkins that flutter around when the wind blows in summer?" ”

It is better if the catkins are better because of the wind, because this sentence vividly depicts the appearance of snowflakes.

Because, metaphors should not only be written truthfully and similarly, but also have an inner charm.

"Scattering salt in the air can be imitated" only grasps the shape of the snow, although the shape is similar, but it lacks a sense of beauty.

On the other hand, "if the catkins rise because of the wind", the beautiful metaphor vividly interprets the god-likeness, and has a beautiful realm: winter is coming, will spring be far away?

Like the catkins in spring, fluttering with the wind, it seems to feel warm, full of vitality, light, and the image of snow is beautiful and lovely, isn't this good? It's better than comparing it to a salty, dry, hard-working, dead-gang, lifeless feeling.

There are two ways to think about it

The first is that it is better to spread salt in the air. It is because the appearance of salt and snow is similar, and it is indeed almost comparable;

The second is that it is better to think that it is better if the catkins are not raised by the wind. It is because the metaphor of catkins flying in the sky is more meaningful, giving people a feeling that spring is coming.

Personally, I prefer the second one

The imitation is as follows: 1. It is difficult to fall flowers in the sky, and it is difficult to be a peach blossom for the rain.

2. Flowing water can't come up from the sky, and it used to be a peach blossom for the rain to bloom.

3. Sauvignon Blanc at sunset, it is better to wait for the moon to come.

4. There is acacia in flying flowers, just like plum blossoms blooming for snow.

5. I don't know after flying thousands of miles, it is better to come to spring flowers for the moon.

1. Cotton dust is exhausted.

2. (Broken ash) air difference can be simulated. Weiruo (pear cherry) rose because of the wind.

Pear cherry blossom = pear blossom, this word is used for good sound.

1 The grass is withered, and the eagle's eyes are anxious, and the snow is light. (Wang Wei: "Watching the Hunt") 2 wants to chase away the light horseman, and the snow is full of bows and knives.

Lu Lun: "Stopper") 3 I know that it is not snow, but there is a dark fragrance. (Wang Anshi:.)

Plum blossoms") 4 Lonely boat, fishing alone in the cold river and snow. (Liu Zongyuan: "Jiang Xue") 5 Chaimen heard the dog barking, and returned to the people on a snowy night.

Liu Changqing: "The Master of Furong Mountain in the Snow)) 6 Qinghai Changyun Dark Snow Mountain, the lonely city looks at Yumen Pass. (Wang Changling:

From the military march seven to the fourth)7 If you want to cross the Yellow River and ice Sichuan, you will climb the snow-covered mountains in Taihang. (Li Bai: "Difficult to Travel)") 8 thousand miles of yellow clouds and daylight, the north wind blows geese and snow.

Gao Shi: "Don't Dong Da)) 9 The window contains a thousand autumn snow in Xiling, and the door is berthed in the Dongwu Wanli ship. (Du Fu:.)

Quatrain") 10 The north wind swept the white grass and folded, and the snow flew in August. (Cen Shen: (Bai Xuege sent the military judge back to Beijing)).

In the past, flowers were like snow, and now snow is like flowers!

From the shape.

Bai angle to talk about the color of the snow, closer than du posture, salt and zhi falling, catkins are pale and weak back, fluttering in the wind answered.

It is the state of rise, flying in the snow, so it looks better to "sprinkle salt in the air".

catkins "are better because this metaphor gives the feeling, meaning and beauty of spring, lacking salty air.

Like goose snow falling down a mountain into a valley and landing on a pine branch, if dragging a piece of white clouds.

Huge snowflakes? , from the sky of the silver-gray lying floating in the wind, like a sky full of white butterflies dance.

Salt and snow are good, but they do not describe the fundamental characteristics of snowflakes with six petals, fluttering in the wind, one after another, and boundless. So, in response to her brother's original sentence, she made a bold correction: "If the catkins are not raised by the wind." ”

Catkins, as a spring scene, have the characteristics of flowers and non-flowers, rising because of the wind, drifting without roots, and flying all over the sky. Jin Wuji's "Willow Flower Fu" once described: "Scattered flowers and snow flying, or the wind returns and swims thin, or the fog is chaotic and soars, the wild is pure and filthy and falls together, and the things are uniform and bright."

Xie Daoyun compared this to the north wind blowing snow in the sky, which can be called a perfect fit. Taking catkins can be larger than its shape, pointing out the scene of "snow burst" at that time, and "rising because of the wind" points out its natural characteristics of fluttering with the wind and diffuse. (He Zhu's "Qingyu Case" in the Song Dynasty has the sentence "full of wind and flocculents".)

Compared with this, snowflakes catkins can be said to be different and interesting. If you look at the analogy of "sprinkling salt in the air" in this way, it is inevitably cramped.

Shen Deqian, a Qing man, said: "It is difficult to show things, and it is difficult to explain everything. Metaphor is the basic rhetorical device of poetry. It's all about being intimate, new and subtle. This is where Xie Daoyun's sentence is higher than his brother.

If the catkins are better and more vivid because of the wind.

"Sprinkle salt" sentence: to the effect that sprinkling salt into the sky is almost comparable. Poor: almost comparable. Poor, roughly, almost. Compare, compare.

The sentence "is not if": to the effect, it is better to compare it to catkins flying in the air. Press: The above three sentences are modeled after Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty's "Bailiang style" song sentences, seven words, each sentence rhymes.

If the catkins are raised by the wind (ride, take advantage of).

The first sentence is too straightforward, and the second sentence is much more euphemistic, and the analogy is more subtle, so it is better than the second sentence.

The sentence "sprinkle salt": the effect is almost comparable to that of salt sprinkled into heaven. This difference may be considered: almost comparable. Poor, roughly, almost. Consider comparisons.

If not" in a word: compare it to catkins flying in the air, the effect is better. Press: The above three imitate Emperor Wu's "Bailiang sentences, seven, each sentence with rhyme songs.

Wind blowing catkins (horseback riding, utilization).

Too simple a sentence and a second sentence euphemism many similar to physical and more subtle, so like in the latter one.

A sentence of sprinkling salt can only write the morphological characteristics of bleeding, while a sentence of catkins can not only write the form, but also the rhyme of the poem, which is more beautiful.

To put it simply, catkins are more elegant than sprinkling salt in the air because of the wind ps: personal understanding.