Write an essay on a cave, 300 400 words, don t copy it.

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I didn't study well in junior high school I plagiarized everywhere, and I couldn't write a 300-word essay Hey, what kind of education.

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When I was very young, my mother once took me to the Kaiyuan Cave, but I don't remember it for a long time. Mom said that Kaiyuan Cave is like a fairyland on earth, once you go in, you don't want to come out. I've always wanted to go there and see it, and today, my wish has finally come true!

With **, I couldn't wait to squeeze into the gate, down the steps, came to a beautiful and strange place, first look at Qi Mao saw a small fountain pool, the water in it for some reason, the color is colorful, very beautiful, I circled around the fountain, only to find that there were several colored lights around, under the cover of the stone into the small waterfall, so that the water changed color, it felt like being in a magic world.

The stones buried around me were like bunches of purple grapes and beautiful pearls, and a question suddenly popped into my mind, how did these stone walls form? I asked my mother, and she didn't know. I looked up, and some of the stones were supported by another stone, and I felt that they were about to fall, so I took a small stone and hit it, and it was still motionless, and it didn't look like it was about to fall.

Unconsciously, I came to a small hall, saw a caryophyllus, the tour guide said, this is the Dinghai God Needle, it supports this stone, continue to extend forward, I seem to see a turtle is moving slowly, look at it, it turns out to be a stone that looks like a turtle!

I walked in front of a stone, and the tour guide said, this is the place where Sun Wukong and Erlang God fought, Sun Wukong became a snake, Erlang God became an eagle, chasing Sun Wukong, hey, it's really like it! On the right, there is a stone grandfather boiling medicine, that old man is Taishang Laojun, and a big sister next to him said: "Isn't Taishang Laojun refining pills?"

How did you become a person who boils medicine? When I heard that, I laughed.

I saw a small hill in front of me, I climbed up, and found that there were some stones on it that looked like fish bones, and there were a few drops of water on it, and there were also sharp Shiling Elementary School on it, and some of them were cut off, probably because I was afraid of piercing people!

Walking through a long and cold tunnel, I saw a dazzling light, it turned out that my cave journey was over, but I didn't want to go yet, it was really like my mother said, once I went in, I didn't want to come out!

, "Composition Network" Zhengchun updates more excellent "first-grade essay staring" for you every day, please feel free to pay attention! On Saturday, my family and I went to the Zhashui Cave to play, and we passed through the longest tunnel in Asia, the Zhongnanshan Tunnel, which is 18km, which is so long!

As soon as we got off the bus, we ran to the ticket office with my mother, and we walked up the steps, and the tour guide said that there were still 281 steps, and I was almost exhausted.

As soon as I entered the cave, I felt that it was cold. We first went to the "Dragon Palace", where there is a stone that looks like a dragon, and the light is beautiful.

We went to the "Heavenly Palace" again, and there were a lot of "villains" sitting on the stones, as well as a stone like a Buddha in Kaiqing.

I also went to the "maze", the maze almost dizzy me, the maze is too big to get out, but the maze is very fun.

We went out, worshiped the Buddha and left. It's really fun today, I'm going to come out and play in the future and see more of the beauty of nature. "A Day Tour of Zhashui Cave" This excellent "first-grade essay" is collected by the essay network, **submitted on the Internet and members, for reference and learning only, **please indicate the source.

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Shuijian Shendong Park is located in the southeast of the center of Panxian County, Guizhou Province, and my home is nearby. After lunch, my sister and I each took 15 yuan and set off happily, came to the park to see, usually the park has always been deserted, today the stall is set up a few hundred meters outside the park gate. There are a variety of small commodities, including darts, rings, snacks, and gifts for intellectual games.

It simply dazzled us. We bought lamb skewers, wraps, drinks, flutes, and trinkets along the way. It was time for dinner while eating and playing, and before we knew it, we had spent all the 30 yuan we brought, and in the end we didn't even have the money to play.

Fortunately, it's not far away, otherwise we wouldn't be able to go back, and we must have a plan for spending money next time. I had a great time today, and I gained a lot!

Famous teacher's comments: The article gets straight to the point, first of all, the author talks about the cause of the story, and then describes the process of playing in detail, and finally summarizes. The context of the article is clear and hierarchical.

The little author introduced what he saw and heard in the water cave, so that the reader could feel the excitement of the water cave on this day. The goods are dazzling, and there must be a lot of people shopping. The little author has introduced the process of swimming in the water cave with his sister, but the introduction is not detailed enough to show the fun of visiting the water cave.

Moreover, since the water cave is a park, it is recommended that the author describe the scenery of the water cave park. (Scholastic China Distinguished Teacher: Ms. Wang Yunlian)2010-3-14 12: