Ending how I felt through this event

Love is not to love to suffocate, nor to love to increase the burden on a person. True love should be a pleasant thing.

Love should be a very wonderful thing, so there are so many people who continue to pursue and yearn for it. Love should also be the most beautiful emotion in the world, so it will make people taste an indescribable happiness. Love should have a super magnetic force, so people do not hesitate to exhaust their life's energy to pursue this pure and beautiful love.

In fact, love should be naturally conceived by all things in the world, and it is intangible, so it cannot be deliberately summarized as an answer. Because of the naturalness of love, it is determined that love must first be based on relaxation, and then it will be happy.

Love originates from nature, and only this natural love will last longer. Love will hide in the depths of our hearts, and only love that is integrated into the depths of our hearts is the most beautiful thing ......

Therefore, when love comes, we don't want to love blindly, and we don't want to love stupidly, we must try to let go of our hands slowly.

When I let go of my hands, I realized that the more natural and casual emotions are, the more relaxed will make people feel relaxed. The mood is born from the heart, and the more relaxed the mood, the happier it will be. Only such beautiful emotions can be called true love, and when you taste the sweetness of love, you can be regarded as playing with your love.

Instead: Through this activity, I was educated. Or this experiential activity, which gave me a profound education.

** is missing subject. There are two changes:

1. Remove "pass" and replace it with "This experience activity has given me a profound education." ”

2. Remove "make." Analysis: The subject of "make" should be "learn", because of the preposition "pass", the subject is lost.

Sentence: Through this activity, I have been educated.

**: Missing component, missing subject.

Instead: Through this activity, I was educated.

Or: This activity, I was educated.

Through this comprehensive event, we learned about the charm of language. Modify the sentence to:

1. This comprehensive activity made us feel the charm of language.

2. Through this comprehensive activity, we have experienced the charm of language.

Participating in public welfare activities, we have helped the people who should be helped, and we will be very happy in our hearts and happy to help others.

One day, Ms. Feng came to our classroom to teach us.

Teacher Feng told us to blow bubbles. We were overjoyed when we heard it. Some of the students shouted loudly despite the fact that they were in class.

The eight language group leaders were called up by the teacher. Oh, so the teacher told them to go up and give us a bubble blowing show. They got a bottle and blew bubbles.

The bubbles blown out by these classmates are colorful, and they are really beautiful. Some of these bubbles are purple, some are red, some are green, and some are other colors. The bubbles come in different shapes, from big ones to small ones, to fat ones, to thin ones.

The skill level of the people who blow bubbles is very different, and some can blow, so there are many bubbles blown out, one after another, and soon they become a large piece. Some can't blow, and there are fewer bubbles blown out, only one or two, and the bubbles burst before they even blow out. There are students below who are saying:

Blow slowly! When the students above blew the bubbles, Teacher Feng called the two students who were talking. The two classmates who had been called walked up in fear.

Hey, the teacher didn't criticize them, but praised them and told them to blow bubbles for us. They blow very well, both many and big. Later, even the teacher blew with them.

The classroom was suddenly filled with bubbles and turned into a bubble world.

Ah, I think it's so much fun to blow bubbles, I can't forget this event!