Friends who know poetry come in for guidance, and friends who have studied ancient poetry are invite

No punctuation!

Add punctuation marks and it's a poem!

It should be considered a modern poem, and there are no requirements for word count and formatting!

It is not a seven-character quatrain, and the last sentence of the seven-character quatrain should be 7 words instead of 4 words; At the same time, it is not a word, the word should have a word brand name!

"Untitled" [Rhyme: Shangping Fourteen Han; Rhythm: Rhyme].

The fragrance of chrysanthemum dissipates the cold, and the prosperity passes away suddenly.

All kinds of silk and satin clothes are three feet, and there is a jar of money and wine.

Lying on the low eaves of the painting building, whipping the thin horse to waste the carved saddle.

After drinking a thousand cups of crazy drama, he sang and snored by himself.

It is the theory of being born open-minded, what is negative.

Moxiang Knights would like to present the original seven rules.

This is too difficult, go to the professional knowledge team for help.

In addition, what do you want to do with poetry? Can't you ask for a lyrical sentence or sentence?

Life is like this, don't be bound by these things, just transform it into your own strength.

First of all, I am here to communicate, not to comment.

I'm also a wild roader. We can communicate together

Although your words are very white, they are in your true feelings, as long as you can express your feelings, it is a good work. The ornate rhetoric of others is based on the amount of reading and knowledge. If you want to improve and read more books, it is a good choice

It reads very smoothly, the wording is slightly bland, du is very simple but zhi lacks some artistic conception, next.

DAO step you should read back more books on this subject, every answer.

After reading, try to experience the poet's emotions as much as possible, instead of rushing to write poems, poets will use a lot of imagery when expressing emotions, you have to try to use these images to express your emotions, so as to make your poems more meaningful and deep, if you feel a little difficult, you can try to imitate first, and then add some of your own understanding and perception in it! Hope to adopt!

Modern poetry does not necessarily have the same number of words in each sentence

Modern poetry still pays more attention to artistic conception than du, Lao Polinzhi's "How to Understand Britain and the United States."

"DAO Poetry" is to teach people to write English and American poems, and Fang Wenshan has also written a book that may be helpful to you, it seems to be called "About Fang Wenshan's Plain Rhyme Poems". In fact, some modern poems do not need to rhyme. Ancient style poems have very strict requirements for rhymes, such as twenty-four rhymes and the like, which is very troublesome.

Personally, I think that the most important thing in writing poetry is actually personal feelings, if you write poetry simply for the sake of writing poetry, just blindly piling up sentences, you will lose the original meaning... There will be a lot of them in the post bar, you can check them out. The poems of the poets of the Crescent school in our country are also not bad.

Haizi, Xi Murong, Wang Guozhen I really like it too, I watch Tagore more abroad, and I love "Crescent Moon Collection" and "Flying Birds".

Your poems are too white, modern poems don't need to be too neat, and the intention to use them is a little less, it is recommended to read more modern poems, as long as you start writing, and persistence will be effective, there are a lot of modern poems posted on it, you can take a look.

You write modern poems, referring to Xu Zhimo, Haizi theirs, theirs is very good, modern poems do not have high requirements for the style, mainly the content...

Let me comment on it:

1. Grid: Obviously, all the rules have passed, which means that you are already familiar with the rules, especially after "cold and summer" is changed to "sign cold", it can be said that there is no problem with the rules.

2. Chapter: The chapter of the word, the simplest is to write the scene on the run, lyrical on the bottom, and finally reach the point of scene blending, looking at your works, or grasp it well, from the "Fanghua" you have repeatedly used, "Suxin", "Zimo", it can be seen that the word is written as a heroine, and from the "green lantern", "residual incense", "old hatred" depicted by Shang Run, it shows that the woman is in the monastery, there is a possibility of seclusion, but it has not yet shown whether the identity of the bhikshuni, but it has been a little seen through the red dust, I put my affection in the meaning of calligraphy and painting. The whole chapter is very wishful and easy, and I want to praise one.

3. Forging words and refining sentences: This problem is big, such as heavy words, "cloud" is used twice, "rain" is also used twice, the front is twilight, and the rain comes later, there are too many similarities or contradictions, and this should be improved. So it's up to you in the details to further strengthen!

I've helped you adjust it to see if it's suitable :

The wind wave strings are broken, the typhoon is silent, and the green lights and yellow rolls are calm.

The morning dew and twilight are full of shadows, the clouds are light, and the residual fragrance is empty.

In an instant, Fanghua is an old hate, you have to ask? A few times back to the summer and cold.

Zimo Hongchen has been raining, splashing ink, and the plain heart is Fu Feihong.

Regardless of poetry, it is taboo to repeat words, unless it can turn decay into magic;

Also, words also need to be formatted and not too casual;

I won't comment on it...

Flowers come to the spring to write well.