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It's okay. It's all about the years, it's sad.

Very good and sad, a good article! Give me the best!

Water is the source of life. If the heart is like water, it will be vast, through the spring and autumn, thinking for thousands of years, different realms, different perceptions.

The softness of water lies in the formless, round, curved and straight. Water is never picky about what it has, as long as it is given space, it stretches, no matter how thorny it is, no matter how small the space. What is even more breathtaking is the strength of the water.

The strength of water lies in perseverance.

It lies in the spirit of fraternity that never changes.

If you try to imagine life in winter and summer, the sun and the moon are sunny and cloudy, you will be relieved and happy. Because the heart is like water, it is soft, strong, good, and sincere. Only when it is plain and quiet can still water flow deeply.

It's not outstanding that people should be like water.,The style is a little weird.,It should be lighter.。

This essay is very well written.

As the ancients said: "Good is like water", (preferably with a full stop).

People always imitate some beautiful things as water, which produces a kind of aesthetic realm. (This sentence is a bit too straightforward compared to the full text, and almost all the whole text has to be translated, which is a bit too straightforward in this article).

It's better to remove the "I" from the text).

Water is the source of life. This sentence is obviously on the topic at the beginning of the article, and if so, it seems that there is no mention of water as the source of life in the whole text. If this sentence is not the topic and is not the central sentence of the article, then where is the sentence of the article? ）

Generally good, if you write it)

If it's taken from an article or written by a writer, that's a bit of a bit. Somewhat. Somewhat.

In addition, this article is very easy to understand, and it is not easy to attract people to read, so it is better to write the first sentence in a novel way, or directly point to the center. ）

And then there is the fact that you wrote this article? ）

There is also whether the article was copied by you, or written by a writer, or written by yourself, or by your teacher, or by someone else.

The writing is very creative, captures the character characteristics of the teacher, the writing is smooth, in one go, and the feelings are very sincere. The fly in the ointment is the ending, which is too hasty, and adding some examples in the process of writing will make the article more emotionally full and moving.

This is not really a teacher of the four seasons, and the four seasons should be put in quotation marks! Good overall.

This is not really a teacher of the four seasons, and the four seasons should be put in quotation marks!

I am a passer-by in your story, leaving traces of my visit here, love is a painful story, in the story, there are thousands of people with you and his past, missing, it is a lifetime, but it is always missed, when you meet again, he doesn't know you, you are still stupidly looking at the memory that has been mixed with years thousands of times, perhaps, in the end, it only became a wound.

Just like a butterfly, nostalgia for flowers is also a tragedy.

Although the language of this article is beautiful, it lacks a theme, is it mainly about your injuries or youth without regrets?

There are many good words and sentences, the content is specific, and a few people have feelings, and this essay is of a medium level.

Tea body, oh, I listen to my friends, oh, ah, I have a head i, I am an aunt.

This article makes extensive use of the description of the scenery, lays the emotional tone of the whole text, expresses the author's love and praise for the lily, sets off the white and flawless, fresh and elegant, peaceful and beautiful lily, and also expresses his own views on life - life is actually ordinary and a kind of beauty.

This article also uses lyrical and argumentative expressions to better express the beauty of the lily, which is fresh and refined, and expresses its own feelings.

When writing articles, you should also pay attention to the detailed description of scenes, objects, and people, so as to express your thoughts and feelings, and you can also use rhetorical devices.

My dad was a very strong strongman, he had big eyes and a pair of glasses on the bridge of his nose.

My dad is a very responsible dad. The last time I went to the park, I saw from a distance that many people were picking apples from an apple tree in the park to eat, and the branches and leaves were scattered all over the ground. I said to my dad, "I want to pick an apple to eat too."

Dad said, "No, the apple tree is a public property, but also a life, you can't pick it indiscriminately, you have to be a good child who loves public property." I say; "Got it. ”

Students, you should also be a good child who takes care of public property, let's work together.