I SENT AN ENGLISH E MAIL TO MY TUTOR, ASKING THE EXPERTS TO GIVE SOME OPINIONS

It's too colloquial, English is not a Chinese Chinese language.

Can reply:received with thanks！

When replying to the tutor's email, pay more attention to the tone and format should not be too casual. There are many cases where a tutor sends an email to himself, such as an admission email, as long as a simple reply is received, thank you. If it is an email on the courseware, you should reply to the tutor in time for the time when the courseware was completed, etc.

Notes:

Replying to the tutor's email, we must adhere to the principle of timely reply, the tutor's reply to the email, generally in response to the student's questions, or the student's question to give a reply, no matter what the content of the email, in line with the principle of respect, timely reply to the teacher. Respond to the teacher's email. It is important to note that the teacher needs the students to answer whatever questions they need.

When replying to the tutor's email, you must also pay attention to the language wording, language is a very deep science, and improper use of language will make the meaning you want to express a thousand miles off topic, not only can not accurately express your consciousness, but it is easy to cause some ambiguity, so that the tutor misunderstands, and even brings some misunderstandings.

Hello Professor :

I am honored and encouraged to receive your response, and I will do my best to prepare for the exam. I wish you all the best in your work and good health.

dear professor Here write the teacher's last name, such as Professor Zhou), I am honored to receive your response as well as your encouragement i will put all my efforts into preparing for this test.

best wishes,__

My job is to deal with foreigners.

According to my personal experience, there are several shortcomings in your letter to foreigners.

It's very presumptuous to send an email to the teacher to delay your precious time, (wordy, everyone's time is precious, and you still write such long sentences).

> Take the liberty of writing a letter to interrupt.

I am a student in your first year of graduate school and would like to apply for your graduate school next academic year. (Here you can tout the other person, because the other party is good, so you want to be his graduate school, too?) ）

> I am a student in your first class, I am very impressed by your knowledge and teaching style, and I would like to apply for your graduate school next year.

I studied in Chinese mainland in college, and I read some English versions of soil mechanics, civil materials and other textbooks in the summer, and I hope to recommend them. (You hope that someone will recommend you?) Who are you? The tone here is not polite enough to be respectful. ）

>I studied in Chinese mainland university, and I plan to read some English textbooks on soil mechanics and civil materials this summer, I wonder if you have any good recommendations?

I really want to be your graduate student, and I know that maybe I'm not very good, ("Maybe I'm not very good," Many foreigners will resent this unconfident tone, and many foreigners value not grades, but ability. ）

I look forward to becoming your graduate student. My paper grades may not be outstanding, but I... Tell me about your actual abilities. For example, what kind of case to make. Achievements at work. Achievements in social activities. Some thoughts. ）

But I will study hard and do everything seriously. (This is an empty promise.) It's better to be realistic.

For example, I am working very hard now, from how I started to how I am now, and what a huge way to do it in a short period of time. That's always the way I've learned. ）

If I have the opportunity, I would like to meet with my tutor and ask me how I should prepare for my studies. (That sounds like it's not authentic.) Very Chinese feel. ）

If possible, I would appreciate it if you could give me a few minutes and give me some advice on my academic preparation in person.

See if your letter needs to be changed a little. I'll translate it after it's done.

Professional translator from the English Cattle Second Group.