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1. The Millennium Canal is a unique water town charm where Hangzhou has become a unique water town with "canal water towns everywhere and bridges in the east, west, south and north".
Or: The Millennium Canal is a unique water town charm in Hangzhou with "canal water towns everywhere and bridges in the east, west, north and south".
2. In recent years, with the comprehensive protection project of the canal, a large number of historical relics on the west bank of Gongchen Bridge have been preserved.
Or: In recent years, with the full implementation of comprehensive protection measures for the canal, a large number of historical sites on the west bank of the Gongchen Bridge have been preserved.
3. With rich historical and cultural relics, the media, animation and other cultural and creative industries here have developed rapidly.
Or: With many historical and cultural sites, the cultural and creative industries such as media and animation here have developed rapidly.
I've done it many times.
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1. It is changed to: Millennium Canal, making Hangzhou a city with the unique charm of "canal water towns everywhere rivers, east, west, north and south step bridges".
2. Change to: In recent years, with the comprehensive protection measures of the canal, a large number of historical relics on the west bank of Gongchen Bridge have been protected.
3. Changed to: With rich historical and cultural relics, the media, animation and other cultural and creative industries here have developed rapidly. (semantic repetition).
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1. Remove the "charm".
2. Add "make" after the second comma
3. Remove the "numerous".
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The first should be the Millennium Canal, so that Hangzhou has the unique charm of "canal water towns everywhere rivers, east, west, north and south step bridges".
It is not the usage of "make" that is wrong because there is no misuse of the preposition. It should be the mistake of "Hangzhou has become a charm".
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Delete"become"②"Propulsion"Instead"Implementation"Add later"of power"
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sheep Because sheep are not countable, they cannot be added with s
The subway after was is singular, so the singular be verb should be used in front.
c your plus s does not need to be followed by an item, but this does, so use a simple your fourth question and the second reason is the same as above.
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The first one is to remove it. The second one is changed to where. The third is preceded by to.
The fourth when is changed to that. Or add it after forgetting. The fifth pair.
The sixth where is changed to that.
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1. Remove it.
2. Which becomes that
3. Add to after spoke
4. When becomes that
5. Add when in front of i
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1.In our country, children can live happily ever after (
2.This new train not only carries a lot of passengers, but also travels very fast. (
3.Although he can humbly accept everyone's suggestions, he is not very determined to improve. (
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they live in a townhouse with a garden.
2、i live in an apartment near our school .In an to school is a crossed-out part of the question).
where do you live?
3、my son likes the shoes with lamps .Question about the underlined part of with lamps).
what kind of shoes does your son like?
4、i am kind to them and they are also kind to me.(synonym conversion).
i am kind to them and so are they.
6、there are no houses near the garden.(synonym conversion).
there aren't any houses near the garden.
7、there is a little water is there in the bottle.(Question about a little underlined).
how much water is there in the bottle?
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