Help with the idea extraction of an essay material

A simple way to deal with this kind of essay topic is to support one of the ideas, for example: praise the firefly, because it shines on its own, unlike the moon, which borrows the power of others, although the light of the firefly is small, but our main thing is to look at its dedication; Or the opposite, we support the moon because she is good at using everything valuable and making the most of it, while the firefly puts too much emphasis on her own hard work, but this is a simple brute force, although it is very hard, but it does not achieve good results, we don't think it makes much sense, or we don't advocate this practice.

Of course, if we want to write an excellent essay, we must dig deep into the ideological connotation, and it is not enough to just stay on the surface!

Confucian culture has always been dominant in China, and we might as well take a middle way. It is thought that both the moon and the firefly are very desirable. First of all, although the moon cannot shine, isn't it very useful for her to borrow the light of others to illuminate the earth!

Fireflies, on the other hand, are not to be outdone, and strive to give full play to their strengths and shine.

The point of view of the article can be like this, we should not blindly comment on others, but strive to find the merits of others, as long as they have contributed to hard work, they are all worthy of praise. For example, Xiao Shenyang, a very controversial character, has a faction saying that he is too vulgar and just imitating, and some faction says that his performance is funny and close to life. When will the battle between the two factions come to an end?

We might as well calm down, support him, and let him work hard to perform better works.

The article can also be further in-depth commentary**, don't be too mean to people!

To add: if you are decent and apply a consistent score, you directly support one side's point of view. If you are disgusted with the essay for the test and want to make some breakthroughs, you may wish to think more about the following words. ）

It can be analyzed from two points of view: the moon and the firefly.

From the perspective of the moon: as long as you can shine, even if you rely on the help of others, this is also a person who is good at using their advantages to make yourself excellent and worthy of our learning.

From the firefly: Although the light is small, it also gathers power. Gather small into many. Don't ignore small things because they don't do anything. Sometimes it is precisely this little bit of weak power, when gathered, that can play a huge role.

You can expand it yourself.

1. The invention is based on practicality, a bit of the feeling that the times create heroes, if Napoleon's navy was very strong at that time, then the steam engine ironclad warship would not have been adopted 2, the invention that is appreciated by someone is the invention, especially the appreciation of the superiors, like Zhuge Liang If there is no Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang is from where Zhuge Liang came.

Hello! I'm Harushima Song, and I'm glad to help you!

We've been writing material essays for the past two or three months now, and we know a little bit about it! Material composition, as the name suggests, gives you a piece of material that allows you to write according to the center. In this process, it should be noted that it is necessary to detach from the material (never expand or supplement the material), and not from the material (there must be a sentence about the material in the text, which can be summarized, summarized, refined and sublimated).

The examination of the material composition is very important, generally in the form of a dialogue or a short story as a piece of material, the center is the soul of the material, and if you grasp the center of the material, you will also grasp the center of the composition, so the center is naturally to be extracted. And how to extract? Where is it extracted?

You can grab the key words, read through the material and see which word can summarize the material, and turn this material essay into a topic essay, then it is very simple. Remember to check the center and don't go off-topic! There may be two or three themes, and there are many angles, you have to choose the appropriate, obvious, and main ones as the center of the material, if you choose the wrong one, and play the edge ball, then no matter how well the composition is written, it may be changed to more than 50 points alone, but because the material does not match its center, it may be reduced by 20 points.

So. In general: it is necessary to combine the material for writing and extract the material center.

The extraction center is the key point, and the binding material is essential! After the center is clear, in addition to the material, you should also accumulate more materials or celebrity examples, and choose one or two to write together with the material as an argument to support the central argument (this refers to **), the general material composition is written to discuss ** easy to score, it depends on the individual, you can also be good at narrative essays, and the material center should be accurate! Also, a sentence or certain word in the material must be used in the composition and not detached!

In fact. Write more and you'll get to know it slowly! This is a hot form of composition for the high school entrance examination in recent years, and it may be rusty at first, but it will be good slowly!

All original live typing! I wonder if I can help you? If you have any questions, you can ask them in combination with specific materials or unclear places!

In the long river of time, from the phenomena and the same things that are not exactly repeated, everything in the world is changing. As Picasso replied, "Don't you know that every minute is a different me, and every hour there is a new light?" Although I see the same wine bottle every day, I can see different personalities, different tables, different lives in different worlds!

In my eyes, it's all different. "So we have to look at things from the point of view of development and change. This is the key to this material, and as long as you grasp this key to organize the material, you can write a good composition.

1. An example of an eagle tossing a young eagle learning to fly.

2. Iron is tempered and tougher.

Wen Yiduo "From Religion on Chinese and Western Styles".

Although it is hard to find thousands of waters, the sand is blown away and the gold is reached.

Tang Dynasty? Liu Yuxi's "Waves and Sands".

Don't you have a hundred refining fires, and you are familiar with the essence of inches?

Tang Dynasty? Meng Jiao's "Ancient Meaning Gift to Liang Su Supplement Que".

It's not a cold bone, how can you get the fragrance of plum blossoms?

Bright? Feng Menglong's "Awakening Words".

Bitterness is the price of sweetness.

Xie Juezai, "On "Sharing Joys and Sorrows"".

Heaven will descend on people, and they must first suffer their minds, strain their muscles and bones, starve their bodies and skins, empty their bodies, and act chaotically, so they will be tempted to endure and gain what they cannot.

Mencius? Confession under 3,

Life has no choice, life is a passion.

Without enthusiasm, life will become silent, yellow, boring, selfish, and short.

Only with a life of great enthusiasm can we be aggressive, hard-working, and enthusiastic in an environment where there is no choice; in order to complete the whole process of life and show the positive meaning of life; in order to make life free and reborn; In order to make the glory of life continue to ......Neither being closed nor overly protective of oneself is the solution to the problem, and a person who loses his enthusiasm for life loses the meaning of life.

Enthusiasm is one of the most valuable feelings in the world, and it is also one of the most contagious emotions.

Center: Don't try to take shortcuts.

Materials: 1. There is a tennis coach who says to students: "If a tennis ball falls into the grass, how should I find it?"

Someone replied, "Start with the center line of the grass." Someone replied

Start looking for it from the recesses of the grass. Someone replied, "Start at the highest place in the grass."

The coach announced his answer: "Proceed from one end of the grass to the other in a step-by-step manner." ”

Some of the children wanted to be a student of the wise man, and the wise man gave each of them a candlestick and told them to keep it bright, but after many days passed, the wise man did not come, and most of the children stopped wiping the candlestick. One day the wise man suddenly came, and everyone's candlesticks were covered with thick dust, and there was only one child, whom everyone called "little fool", although the wise man did not come, he also wiped it every day, and as a result, this stupid child became a student of the wise man.

It turns out that finding a way to succeed is simple, start from scratch and don't try to take shortcuts.

2. In order to become famous, someone in ancient Greece actually set fire to the temple, but in order to prevent him from achieving his goal, historians deliberately did not remember his name when recording this incident, so we still don't know his "great name". There are many ways to become famous, fighting the field, writing books and speaking, singing and acting, playing ball and running, inventing and creating, as long as you are top-notch and brilliant, you can become famous. But these are all stupid methods, without the hard work of "three watches, five watches", and without the persistent spirit of "not teaching a day of idleness", it is impossible to work.

Of course, there is a shortcut to becoming famous, the Taoist priest who guarded the Dunhuang cave, was not careful, and dug out a "Dunhuang Studies" with Kantuman, and he became a celebrity, as long as he studied Dunhuang Studies, he could not get around the Taoist Wang. However, that opportunity may not happen once in a few hundred years. The man in ancient Greece wanted to take a shortcut, but it was a dead end.

There is a fable in the United States: a lark, in order to get bugs easily, is willing to exchange feathers for bugs, and as a result, when he finally has no feathers and cannot fly, he can neither exchange for bugs, nor can he fly to find them, so he can only starve to death. In fact, the easiest path to take is the hardest, because if you are not careful, you will fall into the trap next to the shortcut.

If you just want to take shortcuts, you will end up disappointed and regretful.