Revise sick sentence This time, she finally accepted the criticism honestly.

This time, she finally accepted the criticism with sincerity. (Yes.) ）

As I entered the senior year, my mind matured day by day. Uncle Lin Zhigang has completed the arduous task again and again. I am a Chinese teacher.

Changed to. As I entered the senior year, my mind matured day by day. Otherwise there is no subject.

Uncle Lin Zhigang has completed one difficult task after another. Arduous is the adverbial of the task (it should be).

The first, right.

Second, Uncle Lin Zhigang completed one difficult task after another.

There is a lot of summary to change the sentence, and there is also a sense of language.

This time, she accepted the criticism with sincerity.

There is something wrong with the logic of this sentence, and there should be a causal relationship between the two sentences.

Because I made mistakes, I accepted the teacher's criticism.

The linguistic problem of this sentence is that it is not properly matched. Criticism should not be "honest", and generally speaking, we are talking about accepting criticism "with an open mind". The word "honest" means that the heart is in harmony with words and deeds, not false.

And the word "humility" means modesty; not complacent, not arrogant; Not self-righteous and able to accept other people's opinions.

That is, after the modification, it is:

He humbly accepted everyone's criticism.

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1.Although the criticism of him was very sharp, it was entirely out of love.

2.It reflects the author's rigor of thinking, rigor of reasoning, and skill in structure.

1.Bitter changed to harsh, doting changed to loving.

2.Rigorous and tightly intertwined.

Revised to read: Reading more books is conducive to improving our academic performance.

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "Reading more books is conducive to improving our academic performance and knowledge", it can be found that the collocation is inappropriate. "Improvement" cannot be matched with "knowledge".

Therefore, here we only need to delete the "knowledge surface" and modify it to: reading more books is conducive to improving our academic performance.

Modify the sentence: The red flag is fluttering in the wind.

Colorful and red contradictory. Changing one of these two places will do the trick. Red flags should not be colorful, red flags fluttering in the wind or colorful flags fluttering in the wind.

Modify a sentence with a speech problem to make it more fluent without changing the original meaning. Sentence modification is an important module in the language.

Point out the flaws in the following sentences and revise them:

1. Our company has basically completed all the tasks of this year.

Expression problems] 1. "Already" and "already" are repeated. 2、"Basically, "complete" and "all" complete are self-congregating orange contradictions.

Our company has basically completed this year's work tasks. [Or change] our company has completed all the tasks of this year.

2. All units are requested to come to the registration procedures on the 20th of this month.

Expression problem] The sentence is ambiguous, and the meaning of "come" is unclear (whether it is "come before the 20th" or "come on the day of the 20th" is unclear), which makes people confused. [Change] orange pomace, please come to the registration procedures before the 20th of this month. [Or change] all units are requested to come to the registration procedures on the 20th of this month.

3. The Housing Authority does not handle the relocation procedures, which affects the inability to carry out the relocation work.

Expression problems] "It will not be possible to carry out the relocation work" are entangled, resulting in confusion in the sentence structure. [Changed to] The Housing Authority does not handle the relocation procedures, which will affect the progress of the relocation work. [Or change] the Housing Authority does not handle the relocation procedures, so that the relocation work cannot be carried out.