Give me a good essay and I ll give points

Updated on educate 2024-07-09
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  1. Anonymous users2024-02-12

    On Sunday night, my mother told me to go out on the street and buy a bottle of shampoo. I said yes, immediately took the money and went out on the street to buy it.

    When I came back, I heard a strange sound behind me, and it always followed me, and when I stopped, it was gone. As soon as I moved, the voice resounded with me. At this point, I wondered what the hell was this sound like?

    Could it be that I am haunted by a demon, and it is coming to me ......?The thought of this made me even more scared. I was so frightened that I ran away, but the noise became louder. I immediately stood still, and the sound was gone.

    Hey, what the hell is this sound? Later, I remembered what I said in the textbook, believe in science, not superstition. There are no ghosts in the world at all, and that is the low level of scientific understanding of human beings.

    So, I don't feel scared anymore. However, another voice is reminding me that there are ghosts, and it's useless if you don't believe them. Is it going to come and get you out?

    At this time, it was as if there were two villains fighting in my mind. I want to leave it alone, I'd better go home early, as long as I get home, I'm not afraid. I don't think I should be afraid.

    Even if there are ghosts, they will let their righteousness scare away, how can I be afraid of ghosts? So, I thought as I ran home. As I ran, I felt a lot quieter, and it seemed that the ghost was still afraid of me, and it began to run back.

    I don't think I have anything to be afraid of. So, I was more confident and bold to move forward. Then I heard the sound as if it were coming from under my feet.

    So, I lowered my head to take a closer look. That's when I realized that I had a plastic bag stuck under my foot. Because I was dragging this plastic bag on the ground while walking, I made a strange noise.

    Ah, I see. I removed the plastic bag from under my feet.

    At this point, I went any further, and the strange sound was gone. Well, this time it's really dangerous!

  2. Anonymous users2024-02-11

    Helpful - Tan Zhiying.

    Speaking of Tan Zhiying in our class, everyone must say that the little guard who helps others is here. Every time Tan Zhiying appears, it is in a place where her classmates are in difficulty. Every day, her classmates thanked her.

    And the one thing she must say every day is: everyone for me, I for everyone.

    Every time, when some students encountered difficulties, they said to other students: "Quick, call Tan Zhiying over." Hearing this, she had already come over before her classmates called her.

    Parents also said that this child is so helpful at school, and he must be very well-behaved and filial at home. The classmate looked for her whenever she had something, and said that such a helpful person, she really did things for you, and she would not pass so-so.

    I remember once in an English oral test, the teacher asked me to check Li Pengyi's endorsement. A day passed, and it was about to be time to report the score, so I asked Li Pengyi: "Have you memorized it?"

    He shook his head. I asked, "Didn't you carry it yesterday?"

    Hearing this, Tan Zhiying immediately walked over and asked, "What's wrong?" What's wrong?

    By the way, didn't you memorize English texts? It doesn't matter, now you can memorize as much as you can, if you can't memorize, then let's memorize sentence by sentence. First of all, she first held the book, read the first sentence clearly, and then asked Li Pengyi to read it.

    If he reads it well, Tan Zhiying will give encouragement, and if Li Pengyi can't read it well, he will patiently point to the wrong word with his white and fat finger, and then let him read the word repeatedly. After reading it, she asked Li Pengyi to read it again. patiently helped again and again, so that Tan Zhiying's legs were numb, and the beads of sweat on his head fell down one by one.

    After memorizing a paragraph, Tan Zhiying first asked Li Pengyi to rest for a while, and he was reading and memorizing it, so as to save a little more time. Five minutes passed, and she asked Li Pengyi to read the dialogue, and Li Pengyi memorized it. Tan Zhiying said

    It seems that I still carry it at home, not bad, not bad. So, memorize this one. Li Pengyi was carrying it, and she was writing down what was wrong, and then she thought, is it to read again?

    Or a reminder? It's done. "Not bad, not bad. She said.

    Memorize it, come, and read this part first. She added. She also told Li Pengyi, "This one is more ...... than the other."”

    Tan Zhiying, a girl who is not very good at English, even helped a boy who was worried because of English. That's one thing a chubby girl does.

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