A selection of six types of sick sentences, 12 types of sick sentences and example sentences

1. The position of the definite and the central language is reversed

For example, China's cotton production has been unable to be self-sufficient for a long time. （"Production of cotton"It should be"production of cotton"）

2. Put the real language in the position of the adverbial:

For example, the vast number of young people have shown great enthusiasm for reform. (Will.)"Incomparable"modulation"Passionate"ex).

3. Put the adverbial in the position of the definite:

For example, the full role of the vast number of young people should be brought into play. (Will.)"Adequately"Tune to"Play"and delete one"of"）。

4. Improper word order of multi-layer definite sentences:

Example: Exhibits artifacts that were excavated thousands of years ago. (It should be.)"Thousands of years ago"Tune to"Cultural relics"Before and after"of"）

5. Improper word order of multi-layer adverbials:

For example, we are no longer a country that is arbitrarily bullied by foreign powers. (It should be.)"Optional"Modulation"Hazing"before).

6. Improper placement of related words:

For example, if he can't be realistic, his career will suffer. （"him"should be moved to"If"behind).

7. The subject and the object are reversed:

For example, Ostrovsky's "How Steel is Made" is no stranger to Chinese youth. (It should be changed to: Chinese youth to Ostrovsky.) ）

8. Improper placement of clauses:

For example, they are exploring, they are judging, they are seeking, they are thinking. (It should be changed to: They are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are searching.) ）

9. Improper subject-verb collocation:

For example, they are exploring, they are judging, they are seeking, they are thinking. (It should be changed to: They are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are searching.)

The common types of sick sentences and example sentences are as follows:

1. The word order is incorrect.

Example sentence: China's cotton production is now self-sufficient. (The positions of the definite and central words are reversed and should be changed to "produced cotton.")

2. Improper collocation.

Example sentence: The spring breeze blows in bursts, the branches of the trees sway, and the moonlight and the shadows of the trees shake together, making a rustling sound. (If the subject-verb is not properly matched, "moonlight" will not make a sound.)

3. Incomplete or redundant ingredients.

Example sentence: Mr. Lu Xun created essays in the struggle, which became a wonder in literature and art. (Missing subject, replace "created" with "created".)

4. The structure is chaotic.

Example sentence: cough and expectorant tablets, the main ingredients in it are prepared from Yuanzhi, bellflower, fritillary, ammonium chloride, etc. (It should be "the main ingredient is .......)"Or" is ......Formulated", two formats or choose one.

5. The meaning is unclear.

Example sentence: The director, deputy director and other bureau leaders attended the commendation meeting. (It is not clear whether the leaders of other bureaus are leaders of their own bureaus or leaders of other bureaus.)

6. Illogical.

Example sentence: He was one of the many victims who were spared. (Since it is "spared", that is, not dead, how can it be said that there is "one" among the "victims"?)

1.Improper word order.

Example sentence: China's cotton production has not been self-sufficient for a long time. (The position of the definite sentence and the central language is reversed, and it is modified as: The cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.) ）

2.Improper matching.

Example sentence: His noble revolutionary qualities often come to my mind. ("Quality" cannot be "emerging", but can be replaced by "his great revolutionary image.")

3.The structure is chaotic.

Example sentence: The words of the old worker deeply touched Xiao Qiu's heart, and he couldn't calm down for a long time. (The subject of the first clause is "words", and the subject of the latter clause is "Xiao Qiu's heart", which is a secret transformation, causing confusion.) It could read "......".It touched Xiao Qiu and made his heart ...... for a long time）

4.The meaning is unknown.

Example sentence: The county notified that Township Chief Zhao should report on September 15. (It can be understood as "report on the 15th"; It can also be understood as "reporting on the 15th").

5.Ambiguity. Example sentence: Song Lao Di Bu Shenda and Qi San reunited after a long absence, and they talked speculatively, and he lit him a cigarette ......(Who lights a cigarette for whom?) Can't guess. ）

6.Mixed sentence structures.

Example sentence: This method is hygienic and convenient, and is deeply loved by the masses. (Or "loved by the masses", or "deeply loved by the masses").

Language-sense reading

Mobilize the sense of language, and in the process of reading, perceptually detect the faults of the sentence, that is, to see if it is awkward according to the habitual expression. If it is awkward, then analyze and compare, identify the reason, and make modifications.

Trunk branch and leaf carding method

Using the means of grammatical analysis, first remove the additional components (adjective, adverbial, complement) in the sentence, tighten the main stem, and check whether there is anything wrong with the main stem; If there is no problem with the stem, check the part again to see if there is anything wrong between the modifier and the central word, or within the modifier.

Logical meaning analysis

Some language diseases are not easy to find fault with the method of language judgment and respect, so they have to engage in theoretical analysis, which is the logical meaning analysis method. The logical meaning analysis method should consider whether the concept use, judgment, and reasoning are appropriate, and whether the order of sentences and the relationship between sentences are appropriate.