1 The structure of The Book with Zhu Yuansi is formula, and the sentence written in general is

Original text: The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu one hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.

Sandwich the shore (the current new textbook is used in the "Zhang") high mountains, all of which are cold trees, competing against each other, competing for heights, and thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling; Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.

The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day; Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.

Translation: The wind stopped, the smoke cleared, and the sky and the distant mountains took on the same color. (I'm on a boat) float and move with the current, do whatever I want, and let the boat lead to the scenery.

From Fuyang to Tonglu about (distance) about 100 miles, the strange landscape is unique in the world.

The water of the river is turquoise, and the deep water is clear and you can see the bottom of the water. Swimming fish and fine stones can be seen clearly, and there is no obstacle to see all the time. The turbulent water was faster than an arrow, and the raging waves were as fierce as galloping horses.

The high mountains on both sides are covered with hardy evergreen trees, and (the high mountains) compete to go up according to the mountain's situation, as if they are competing to stretch high and far away; They should, pointing straight upwards (to the sky), forming hundreds of peaks. The spring water rushes against the stones, making a gurgling sound; Beautiful birds chirp in each other, and the song is harmonious and beautiful. The cicadas sang [in the trees] and the apes (in the mountains) cried incessantly.

Those who chase fame and fortune like eagles flying to the sky, when they see these majestic peaks, their hearts calm down when they see them; Those who are in charge of government affairs, when they see these beautiful valleys, they will linger. The sloping branches shade it, and even during the day, it is as dim as it is at dusk, and the sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes the sun can be seen.

Score; Strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

Structure: Total score;

A sentence always written: strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

1.The scenery is lyrical, the conception is novel, and the layers are clear.

2.Write scenes from a variety of senses such as sight and hearing, write shapes and sounds, and paint sounds and colors.

3.Combination of movement and static, combination of front and side.

4.Use figures of speech such as metaphors and exaggerations.

5.Loose combination.

This article is in the form of a pun style, mainly four-character sentences, two sentences in pairs, occasionally mixed with six-character sentences and loose sentences, with a strong sense of rhythm and catchy reading.

The details are as follows:Omit sentences. (1) "(boat) drifting from the current, anything" (subject omitted) (2) "rapid turbulence (in) arrow" (omitting the preposition "in") (3) "(high mountain) negative momentum competition, mutual Xuanmiao" (omitting the subject "high mountain") dual sentence.

1) The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling; Good birds chirp and rhyme.

2) The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.

3) The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel.

4) Sharp turbulence and fierce waves.

5) Hengke is covered by the sun, and it is still dusk in the day; Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.

"Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a Liang writer in the Southern Dynasty, and is a fragment of a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi (a work of Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown), which is regarded as a masterpiece of writing scenes in the prose. The article not only contrasts the beauty of the landscape with people's feelings, but also expresses the disdain for fame and fortune, the boredom of officialdom and government affairs, and implicitly reveals the noble ambition of loving the beautiful nature and retreating from the world.

Background: During the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, there was political darkness and social turmoil. Therefore, many intellectuals have placed their love for mountains and rivers to relieve the boredom in their hearts.

Wu Jun also developed a love for landscapes and scenery due to turmoil, and "Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi after integrating his feelings.

Total score structure. It is divided into two parts: writing scenes and Mingzhi. There are always writes and sub-writes in the scene, and the strange mountains and rivers are always written, which is unique in the world. The writing is divided into two parts, strange water and strange mountain. Mingzhi part is a kite flying to the sky, looking at the peak and resting his heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to return.

The first paragraph is a general writing, outlining the panorama and writing the beauty of the Fuchun River landscape. The first sentence of "the wind and smoke are clear, the Tianshan Mountains are colorful" depicts a distant view, the extreme eye overlooks, the wind stops and the fog disperses, the high cool and clear sky is spotless, the Tianshan Mountains are blue, and the scene is fresh and magnificent.

This article is not written using the method of moving and changing scenes, but after the general writing, the shots are depicted one by one. In the second paragraph, it is written "different water". The first two sentences write about the static beauty of Fuchun River.

The color of the river is blue and white, and the water flow is clear, "seeing the bottom of a thousand zhang". "Swimming fish and fine stones, looking directly is unhindered" You can see the fish playing back and forth, and even the small stones are vivid, which shows the brightness and clarity of the river.

The third paragraph goes on to write "Strange Mountain". The author does not specifically describe a certain mountain or a certain scene, but uses a general and formal language to write about the steep mountains of the river and all kinds of strange scenery in the mountains.

It is divided into two parts: writing scenes and Mingzhi. There are total writing and sub-writing in the writing scene. General writing - strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

There are two parts of the writing, 1 is the different water - blue, clear, and urgent 2 is the strange mountain - high, male, and quiet Mingzhi - the kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to return.

The total score. The first paragraph is always written in the scene.

The second paragraph is written about water, and the third paragraph is also written by the mountain"Strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world. ", and then describe"Qishan","Heterowater"

1) Judgment sentence example: Nanyang Liu Ziji, noble scholar also. ("Also" table judgment.)

Sentence meaning: Nanyang Liu Ziji is a noble celebrity. 2) Omit the sentence When I saw the fisherman, I was shocked and asked where I had come from.

Answered. Then he had to return home, and set up wine to kill chickens for food. (Yes, "When the villagers saw the fisherman, they were shocked and asked where they had come from.")

Fisherman) replied. (The villagers) will return home (the fishermen) and set up wine to kill chickens for food". Sentence meaning:

When the villagers saw the fisherman, they were very surprised and asked him where he came from. So he invited him to his house, set wine on the table, killed chickens and prepared food for him. Provincial subject:

Example 1: The mountain has a small mouth, as if there is light. (It is an abbreviation of "small mouth, as if there was light.")

Meaning: There is a small hole in the mountain, and there seems to be some light in the small mouth. Example 2:

Drop off the boat and enter from the mouth. (It is an abbreviation of "the fisherman leaves the boat and enters from the mouth".) Sentence meaning:

Wuling people) repeated dozens of steps, and suddenly became enlightened. "Among them, [people] came and went, and men and women were dressed like outsiders. When Qi Xiao (a villager in the village) saw the fisherman, he was shocked and asked where (the fisherman) came from.

Fisherman) replied. (The people of the village) asked (the fisherman) to return to their homes and set up wine to kill chickens for food. "This person was all heard by Gu Yan, and [the people in the village] sighed.

It is also supplemented when translating.

Provincial object: Example 1: Ask from the beginning (is the abbreviation of "from the place of asking".) "Zhi" for "fisherman". Sentence meaning: ask the fisherman from **. ）

Provincial preposition: Example 2: The forest exhausts the water source (yes"The forest is all about water"The omission.

9.The four "rans" suddenly open up (suddenly): the appearance of openness The house is like (as if):

The neat and high-staring look is happy (Yiran): the happy is the high look of the happy yearning (Xinran): the happy look.

The sentence structure characteristics of the article with Zhu Yuansishu are:

It maintains the characteristics of the pun text, mainly using four-character sentences and six-character sentences, and makes extensive use of dual sentences in the second half of the article. This achieves a neat sentence structure, harmonious rhyme, contrasting ideas, and contrasting into a funny and noisy expression effect, which is catchy to read and has a strong sense of rhythm.

Linguistic characteristics of the book with Zhu Yuansi:

1. It maintains the characteristics of the pun and neat sentence structure, such as: "The spring water is rocky, and it is cold; Good birds sing and rhyme", "cicadas are endless, and apes are endless".

2. The language is lively and free. For example: "The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel.

Excerpt from the Book with Zhu Yuansi:

The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu one hundred miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.

The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.

Translation: The wind and the smoke have dissipated, and the sky and the mountains have become the same color. (I was on a boat) drifting along the river, drifting east or west at will. From Fuyang to Tonglu, about a hundred miles, strange mountains, supernatural water, unique in the world.

The water is all blue and white, and you can see the bottom of the clear water. The swimming fish and small stones can be seen directly, and there is no obstacle to calling. The turbulent water is faster than an arrow, and the fierce waves are like galloping horses.

The Book with Zhu Yuansi is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a writer of the Southern Dynasties, and is a fragment of a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi (a Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown), which is regarded as a masterpiece of writing scenes in the prose. This article describes what the author saw on the way from Tonglu to Fuyang by boat, and depicts the scenery of this section of the mountains and waters (Fuchun River), which creates a fresh and natural artistic conception, which makes people leisurely fascinated after reading, as if they have also personally appreciated the beauty of the mountains and rivers in the meantime; At the same time, he also shows his indulgence in the joy of life. It exudes contempt for those who pursue fame and fortune, and implicitly conveys the noble interest of loving beautiful nature and retreating from the world.

1.What kind of thoughts and feelings do the following sentences reveal about the author? The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel.

Answer: It reveals the author's thoughts and feelings of being intoxicated by natural beauty and indifferent to fame and fortune.

2.Briefly appreciate how the following sentences are written. The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing.

Answer: This sentence uses a combination of front and side descriptions (2 points) to highlight the clarity and transparency of the water (1 point).

4.Seeing the strange mountains and rivers of Fuchun River, what kind of emotion did the author feel? How do you understand these sentiments?

Answer: The first question: The author issued "The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Jinglun worldly affairs, peep into the valley and forget the emotion". The second question: It shows the author's disdain for fame and fortune. (Forget the landscape, indifferent to fame and fortune).

5 Article comprehension. (5 points).

In the general writing of the article, the phrase "drifting from the stream, anything" expresses the author's leisurely and complacent mood. When writing "different water", the sentence "the water is ethereal and blue, and the bottom can be seen" exaggerated to express the characteristics of the extremely deep and clear river. When writing "strange mountains", the sound of springs, birds, cicadas, and apes reflect the quiet characteristics of the mountains.

After that, pass through the "Kite Flyer......The lyrical short essay of "Voyeur Valley and Forgetting Rebellion" expresses the author's thoughts of forgetting the landscape, being indifferent to fame and fortune, and retreating from the world. Finally, the article depicts another wonder in the mountains with ingenuity, highlighting the characteristics of many trees, which corresponds to the previous sentence "Sandwiched by the high mountains, all grow cold trees".

6.The sentences are all ethereal, and they are at the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. means that the water is clear . The similar sentence in "Three Gorges" is "Su Tuan Green Pool, Hui Qing Reflection". (4 points).

7.The author's overall impression of the scenery along the road from Fuyang to Tonglu is unique in the world (please answer with a four-character phrase in the text), and focuses on the two aspects of "strange mountains" and "different waters".

8.The article is made by the scene, because of the emotion, the author can't help but sigh The sentence is the kite flying to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. (fill in the blanks with the original sentence of the text).

9.The sentence in the text that expresses the clarity of the water from the side is a swimming fish with fine stones, and there is no obstacle to looking directly.

10.Who are the "kites flying in the sky" and the "economic and worldly people"? (2 points).

Answer: "Kite Flyer" and "Economic Minister" refer to people who chase fame and fortune and those who are keen on officialdom.

11.This article is a landscape sketch, please use your brains to write a poem about "mountain" and "water" from the accumulated ancient poems.

Answer: Write "mountain": "Thousands of mountains and birds fly away, and thousands of people disappear." "There is no way out of the mountains and rivers, and the willows and flowers are bright and another village. "Under the east fence of picking chrysanthemums, you can see Nanshan leisurely. ”

Write "water": "The sun is at the end of the mountain, and the Yellow River flows into the sea." "The Peach Blossom Lake is thousands of feet deep, not as deep as Wang Lun to send me love. ”

Special sentence structures.

Abbreviated sentence "(boat) drifts from the current, anything else" (subject omitted) "Swift (in) arrow" (omitted preposition "in").

(high mountain) negative momentum competition, mutual Xuanmiao" (omitting the subject "high mountain") inverted sentence postpositional sentence.

The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; ”

Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. ”

Intertextuality "strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world".

Dual sentence (1) The spring water is rocky, and the sound is loud; Good birds chirp and rhyme.

2) The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.

3) The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel.

4) Sharp turbulence and fierce waves.

5) Hengke is covered by the sun, and it is still dusk in the day; Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.