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Original text: The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu 100 miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.
The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.
Sandwich the shore (the current new textbook is used in the "Zhang") high mountains, all of which are cold trees, competing against each other, competing for heights, and thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling;Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.
The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart;Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day;Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.
Translation: The wind stopped, the smoke cleared, and the sky and the distant mountains took on the same color. (I'm on a boat) floating and moving with the current, doing whatever I want, and letting the boat lead to the scenery.
From Fuyang to Tonglu about 100 miles (distance), the strange landscape is unique in the world.
The water of the river is turquoise, and the deep water is clear and you can see the bottom of the water. Swimming fish and fine stones can be seen clearly, and there is no obstacle to see all the time. The turbulent water was faster than an arrow, and the raging waves were as fierce as galloping horses.
The high mountains on both sides are covered with hardy evergreen trees, and the mountains are competing for the upper part of the mountain, as if they are competing to stretch to the heights and distancesThey scrambled to the sky, pointing straight upwards and forming hundreds of peaks. The spring water rushes against the stones, making a gurgling sound;Beautiful birds chirp in each other, and the song is harmonious and beautiful. The cicadas sang [in the trees] and the apes (in the mountains) cried incessantly.
Those who chase fame and fortune like eagles flying to the sky calm down when they see the mountainsThose who are in charge of government affairs, when they see these beautiful valleys, will linger. The sloping branches shade it, and even during the day, it is as dim as it is at dusk, and the sparse branches are intertwined, and sometimes the sun can be seen.
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1. Total fraction structure.
2. How to describe mountains and water.
3. The author's thoughts and feelings.
4. Characteristics of prose and sentence structure.
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Starting from the actual feeling of sailing on the river, the author focuses on depicting the mountains and rivers of the Fuchun River, showing the beauty of the mountains and rivers, and expressing the author's thoughts and emotions about political frustration, tiredness and attempts to send love to the mountains and rivers.
The Book with Zhu Yuansi is a famous landscape sketch written by Wu Jun, a writer of the Liang Dynasty in the Southern Dynasty, and is a fragment of a letter written by Wu Jun to his friend Zhu Yuansi (a work of Song Yuansi, the word Yushan, life unknown), and is regarded as a masterpiece of writing scenes in the prose. The article not only contrasts the beauty of the landscape with people's feelings, but also expresses the disdain for fame and fortune, the boredom of officialdom and government affairs, and implicitly reveals the noble ambition of loving the beautiful nature and retreating from the world.
This article is not written using the method of moving and changing scenes, but after the general writing, the shots are depicted one by one. In the second paragraph, it is written "different water". The first two sentences write about the static beauty of Fuchun River.
The color of the river is blue and white, and the water flow is clear, "seeing the bottom of a thousand zhang". "Swimming fish and fine stones, looking directly is unhindered" You can see the fish playing back and forth, and even the small stones are vivid, which shows the brightness and clarity of the river.
The third sentence relays the dynamics of Fuchunjiang. From the point of view of geography. The river flows from east to west, the terrain is complex, some sections of the river are open, the water waves are not prosperous, the river surface is like a mirror, quiet and clear, some sections are narrow, the river bank is steep, so the rapid turbulent waves, unruly and untamed, the author uses two metaphors to describe the river flow is faster than the arrow shot, the torrent is like a horse galloping, it is really touching the soul, the momentum is extraordinary.
This passage uses only three sentences and 24 characters, either depicted on the front, or set off on the side, or set up metaphors to show the changing scene.
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"The Book with Zhu Yuansi" is a famous prose written by Wu Jun, a Liang writer in the Southern Dynasty, which not only contrasts the beauty of mountains and rivers with people's feelings, but also expresses the contempt for secular officialdom and those who pursue fame and fortune, and exhorts to friends. It implicitly reveals the noble ambition of loving the beautiful nature and retreating from the world.
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1.The scenery is lyrical, the conception is novel, and the layers are clear.
2.Write scenes from a variety of senses such as sight and hearing, write shapes and sounds, and paint sounds and colors.
3.Combination of movement and static, combination of front and side.
4.Use figures of speech such as metaphors and exaggerations.
5.Loose combination.
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This article is in the form of a pun style, mainly four-character sentences, two sentences in pairs, occasionally mixed with six-character sentences and loose sentences, with a strong sense of rhythm and catchy reading.
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The theme of "The Book with Zhu Yuansi": The poet expressed his love for natural landscapes in the poem, expressed the poet's thoughts and feelings of longing for the landscape, and at the same time expressed his boredom with officialdom and dissatisfaction with social reality.
and Zhu Yuansishu's thoughts and feelings.
When the poet was in the social turmoil of the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties, he personally experienced the darkness of officialdom, and only through the love of the landscape can he relieve the depression in his heart. The poet creates a kind of birth interest in the beautiful scenery of the landscape, expressing the poet's boredom of officialdom and his desire to love the landscape.
and Zhu Yuansi's book.
Book with Zhu Yuansi
The wind and smoke are clean, and the Tianshan Mountains are colorful. Drifting from the stream, anything. From Fuyang to Tonglu 100 miles, strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.
The water is ethereal, and you can see the bottom. Swimming fish with fine stones, no obstruction to direct viewing. The turbulence is very fast, and the waves are rushing.
Sandwiched between the high mountains, all of them grow cold trees, compete with each other, compete for heights, and thousands of peaks. The spring water is rocky, and the sound is rattling;Good birds chirp and rhyme. The cicada is endless, and the ape is endless.
The kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart;Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to rebel. Hengke is covered, and it is still dusk in the day;Sparse strips are intertwined, and sometimes the sun is seen.
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It is divided into two parts: writing scenes and Mingzhi. There are total writing and sub-writing in the writing scene. General writing - strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world.
There are two parts of the writing, 1 is the different water - blue, clear, and urgent 2 is the strange mountain - high, male, and quiet Mingzhi - the kite flies to the sky, looking at the peak and resting the heart; Those who are in the world of economic affairs, peep into the valley and forget to return.
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The total score. The first paragraph is always written in the scene.
The second paragraph is written about water, and the third paragraph is also written by the mountain"Strange mountains and different waters, unique in the world", and then describe"Qishan","Heterowater"
The clear and clear river water is like a warm jasper, and the fish are free and happy to play in the water, which is really enviable. In the middle reaches of the Fuchun River, the speed of the water flow is no longer as gentle as the water of the small river, but as rapid as an arrow, and the fierce waves set off by the river are like galloping horses.
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