Can anyone help revise the script and add 100 after the revision

There are fewer details written, and if there are more details, it may be more impressive!!

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Adaptation mainly includes two situations: one is the adaptation of the work without changing the original genre of the work, such as abbreviating the long work into a simplified version. The second is to adapt the work from one genre to another without changing the basic content of the work, such as adapting ** into a screenplay.

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Adaptation refers to the creative activity of reproducing a work in different forms of expression. Adaptation should be the creative labor of the adaptor, not simply repeating the content of the original work, but innovating in the form of expression to achieve new effects or new creative purposes. The right of adaptation may be exercised by the author or authorized by others.

Adaptation mainly includes two situations: one is the adaptation of the work without changing the original genre of the work, such as abbreviating the long work into a simplified version. The second is to adapt the work from one genre to another without changing the basic content of the work, such as adapting ** into a screenplay.

The adaptor enjoys the copyright of the adapted work, but the copyright of the author of the original work shall not be damaged when exercising the copyright.

The main theme is: 18-year-old choice. The theme idea is: it's never too late to choose love, and if you choose to fall, you will always be lost.

Protagonist: Xu, through Xu's performance to show the theme idea; Expression: First create a rebellious performance in the rebellious period of the growth process, reach the extreme through the sublimation of events and be at the critical point of the outbreak, and then make an 18-year-old choice through the sudden change of the environment to make an 18-year-old choice and complete the theme idea:

1. The rebellious period of growth is expressed in three scenes to illustrate Xu's long-term state of mind (some scenes need to be added on the original basis to illustrate his father's and mother's long-term feelings about his rebellion, so as to more vividly express the escalation process of contradictions and provide a basis for sublimation for subsequent contradictions to erupt);

Second, the sublimation scene is expressed in a scene; It shows that the contradictions between Xu and his family have reached a critical point in the long-term sedimentation.

3. Immediately change the environment so that he can feel the scene in real life and let him understand the truth.

Fourth, after feeling it, I found my own position, and then implemented it, achieved achievements, reached a common hope, and achieved the choice of an 18-year-old.

The content of the landlord is a little cumbersome.,The theme is not tight.,There's not much time today.,Can't help you do it carefully.,,You're modifying it.,Next time together to appreciate it.。