Although Li Ming was rated as a three good student, and he was not proud. Modify the sentence?

The associated words are inappropriate, but they can be changed to: Although Li Ming was rated as a three-good student, he was not proud.

3 All revised as: We congratulate Li Ming on being rated"Three good students".

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "We celebrate Li Ming's evaluation of the 'three good students'", it can be found that the words are inappropriate. "Celebrate" generally means to celebrate with an event, and "congratulate" generally means to celebrate with words. Li Ming was selected as a "three-good student" by the school, so it should be changed to "rated as".

That is, it was revised as: We congratulate Li Ming on being awarded"Three good students".

We congratulate Li Ming on being selected"Three good students". **: Misnomer.

Modification method: 1. "Celebration" should be changed to "congratulations".

2. "Rated" should be changed to "rated".

Reasons for revision: 1. "Celebration" generally means that activities are held to celebrate; "Congratulations" generally means to congratulate in words.

2. Li Ming was selected as a "three-good student" by the school, so it should be changed to "rated as".

Distinguish and modify the mantra of the sick sentence:Look at whether the ingredients are missing or not, and the missing ingredients must be completed.

Second, when the collocation is inappropriate, the inappropriate place is changed smoothly.

Third, the word order should be inappropriate, and the inappropriate places should be adjusted.

Fourth, look at the improper use of words, and replace them with appropriate words.

Fifth, see if the meaning is repeated, and the repeated words should be driven away.

Sixth, look at the contradictions in the sentences, remove the spear and remove the shield to settle it.

Seventh, when the classification is improper, different things are placed separately.

Eight look at the reference to the clear and unclear, and the unclear should be noted.

a.Inappropriate words used.

It should be: We congratulate Li Ming on being rated as a "three good students".

Revised to: The summer students of the third grade have been rated for three consecutive yearsThree good students".

Analysis: It is an inappropriate word, and it will be replaced with continuous one after another.

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying words and sentences with obvious language problems without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so as to make the sentence smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

Sick sentence repair and demolition practice suggestions:

1. Supporting exercises for thematic review.

2. Review the questions related to sick sentences in the previous comprehensive exercises, and change your own classification.

3. Judge the sick sentences on the relevant materials and choose to correct the wrong questions.

4. Think about how to modify the sentence from the aspect of "words".

We celebrate Xiao Ming's evaluation of the three good students. This is a sick sentence.

The sick sentence should be changed to: We celebrate Xiao Ming being rated as a good student, add the word "be", or two predicates.

The word "be" refers to the subject-predicate sentence that uses the preposition "to be" to lead to the doing or to express the passive in front of the core verb. It is a type of subject. The basic structure is: object + "be" + subject + action.

The conditions for the establishment of the words and sentences:

1. The subject is to receive, and the noun mediated by the word "be" is to do.

2. The verb must be a transitive verb.

Sometimes the word "be" is used directly before the verb, i.e., the giver omitted. Words that used to be used to express unfortunate or unpleasant encounters have since broken through this limitation. In colloquial language, "call", "let", and "give" are often used instead of "be", and the words are still called "be".

Modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Explanation and analysis: First of all, according to the original sentence "Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years, it can be found that the unsmooth place is "successively for three years", here successive and three years are in conflict with each other, successive is intermittent, and three years refers to three consecutive years, so it can be changed to continuous and modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years. Modify the sentence?

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years. The term succession does not apply here.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for 3 consecutive years.

Hello, the sentence should be modified like this:

Wrong sentence: Improper collocation.

Revised to: Xiaohong has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

On the premise of not changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, modify the words and sentences with obvious language problems to make the sentences smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

The word "successively" in this sentence is inappropriate and should be amended to read:

Changed to: I am very happy to receive the title of "Three Good Students".

Because the "three good students" cannot be received, they can only receive this title or award.

The principle of revising sick sentences should be to preserve the original meaning, change the law skillfully, change less and simplify as much as possible.

1. Prescribe the right medicine and be targeted.

2. Try to keep the original meaning of the sentence.

3. Pay attention to the conciseness of the sentence.

4. Try to keep the sentence structure or the object of the declarant consistent.

**: Incomplete ingredients.

Changed to: He was very happy to receive the certificate of merit from the three good students.

Topic: I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" certificate. Answer: She was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" award. There is no subject added, so it is wrong.

Sick sentence: I was very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" award. The answer is: I am very happy to receive the "Three Good Students" award.

**: Incomplete ingredients.

Correction: I was very happy to receive the certificate of "Three Good Students".

I was very happy to receive the title of "Three Good Students".

I was very happy when I mentioned the certificate of merit for the three good students.

Received three good students, and he was awarded a high certificate.

Very excited.

I was very happy to receive the award-winning book.

After receiving the certificate of merit student, he was overjoyed. Finish.

I was very happy to receive the three good students.

Personally, I don't think it's appropriate to use it here.

It's best to use the word you get.

Receiving a notice generally means receiving an order from a superior.

It's just my personal opinion, and I don't know if it's right or not.

Modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Explanation and analysis: First of all, according to the original sentence "Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years, it can be found that the unsmooth place is "successively for three years", here successive and three years are in conflict with each other, successive is intermittent, and three years refers to three consecutive years, so it can be changed to continuous and modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister was rated as a three-good student.

Successively: Successively and continuously How can his sister be continuously rated as a three-good student? So the term "successive" does not apply.