Xiao Ming s sister has been rated as a good student for three consecutive years, and she has revised

Original sentence: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a good student for three consecutive years.

Modified: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a three-good student for three consecutive years.

Analysis: If the words are used incorrectly, and the sentences are used incorrectly, they can be replaced with continuous succession.

Modify the sick sentence, that is, Xiao Ming's sister, who was rated as a three-good student in three years.

The main thing in this sentence is that the word succession is not used well, it usually refers to one after another, generally used on different people, and it is not applicable to the same person. So you can use continuous or intermittent here, but it doesn't apply sequentially.

For example, Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a good student for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister Lian (successively) was rated as a three-good student.

Successively, it should be continuous. Instead:

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a three-good student for three consecutive years, this sentence is a misnomer, and it should be changed to Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a three-good student for three consecutive years.

It should be changed to say that Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a three-good student for three consecutive years. 1. Successively, it means that there are first and last, intermittently.

2. Continuously, one after another; Again and again.

Depending on the context, it should be continuous.

3 All revised as: We congratulate Li Ming on being rated"Three good students".

Explanation and analysis: According to the original sentence "We celebrate Li Ming's evaluation of the 'three good students'", it can be found that the words are inappropriate. "Celebrate" generally means to celebrate with an event, and "congratulate" generally means to celebrate with words. Li Ming was selected as a "three-good student" by the school, so it should be changed to "rated as".

That is, it was revised as: We congratulate Li Ming on being awarded"Three good students".

We congratulate Li Ming on being selected"Three good students". **: Misnomer.

Modification method: 1. "Celebration" should be changed to "congratulations".

2. "Rated" should be changed to "rated".

Reasons for revision: 1. "Celebration" generally means that activities are held to celebrate; "Congratulations" generally means to congratulate in words.

2. Li Ming was selected as a "three-good student" by the school, so it should be changed to "rated as".

Distinguish and modify the mantra of the sick sentence:Look at whether the ingredients are missing or not, and the missing ingredients must be completed.

Second, when the collocation is inappropriate, the inappropriate place is changed smoothly.

Third, the word order should be inappropriate, and the inappropriate places should be adjusted.

Fourth, look at the improper use of words, and replace them with appropriate words.

Fifth, see if the meaning is repeated, and the repeated words should be driven away.

Sixth, look at the contradictions in the sentences, remove the spear and remove the shield to settle it.

Seventh, when the classification is improper, different things are placed separately.

Eight look at the reference to the clear and unclear, and the unclear should be noted.

a.Inappropriate words used.

It should be: We congratulate Li Ming on being rated as a "three good students".

Original sentence: In the summer, students were rated as three good students one after another.

Revised to: Summer students have been rated as three good students consecutively.

Analysis: It is an improper collocation, and the "successive" is modified to "continuous", and the revised sentence is: The summer student was continuously rated as a good student.

Improper collocation of the modification of the sick sentence:1. Improper collocation of related words.

2. The definite sentence is not properly matched with the central word (subject and object).

3. Improper matching of moving guests.

4. Improper subject-verb collocation.

5. Improper matching of the host and guest.

6. Improper matching of dynamic supplements.

7. The adverbial is not properly matched with the central word (predicate).

8. One side and two sides are not properly matched.

Revised to: The summer students of the third grade have been rated for three consecutive yearsThree good students".

Analysis: It is an inappropriate word, and it will be replaced with continuous one after another.

Modifying a sick sentence refers to modifying words and sentences with obvious language problems without changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, so as to make the sentence smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

Sick sentence repair and demolition practice suggestions:

1. Supporting exercises for thematic review.

2. Review the questions related to sick sentences in the previous comprehensive exercises, and change your own classification.

3. Judge the sick sentences on the relevant materials and choose to correct the wrong questions.

4. Think about how to modify the sentence from the aspect of "words".

Modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Explanation and analysis: First of all, according to the original sentence "Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years, it can be found that the unsmooth place is "successively for three years", here successive and three years are in conflict with each other, successive is intermittent, and three years refers to three consecutive years, so it can be changed to continuous and modified to: Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years. (Modify sick sentence).

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years. The term succession does not apply here.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

Xiao Ming's sister has been rated as a "three-good student" for 3 consecutive years.

Hello, the sentence should be modified like this:

Wrong sentence: Improper collocation.

Revised to: Xiaohong has been rated as a "three-good student" for three consecutive years.

On the premise of not changing the meaning expressed in the original sentence, modify the words and sentences with obvious language problems to make the sentences smooth, correct and more perfect. The content that needs to be modified includes all the components of the sentence, including the subject, predicate, object, definite, adverbial, and complement.

The word "successively" in this sentence is inappropriate and should be amended to read: