How to make the language of your composition elegant and beautiful

"How to Enliven the Language of Composition".

1. Use it skillfully. Rhetoric, the pursuit of phonological beauty Rhetoric, like the gorgeous and strange in the garden of language, if we can properly insert a few branches in the article, it will add a bit of bright color to our article: clever metaphors, in order to make the image vivid; Boldly exaggerated, to show the aura flying; Use more questions to inspire people to think deeply; Repeatedly, in order to express the feelings? The appropriate use of rhetorical devices can make the language of the article vivid, imposing, harmonious and colorful.

Ask the students to compare the following two groups of languages: 1. There is beauty everywhere in life, and beauty is colorful. 2 Beauty is a few remnants of snow wandering in the cold winter, beauty is a few wisps of floating clouds walking in the blue sky, beauty is a touch of sunset jumping on the lake, and beauty is a few birdsongs echoing in the dense forest!

Make good use of metaphors, personifications, comparisons, and descriptions, and write very different sentences. The abstract concept is concretized, which not only points out that beauty is "everywhere," but also expresses the "colorful" beauty, which is vivid and sensible! ）

2. Use Poetry and Famous Sentences One of the effective ways to make an article literary and substantiated is to appropriately borrow and use famous poems and sentences. "Bring it" to my use! There are two kinds of poetry: explicit and implicit!

To use explicitly is to quote directly; Hidden use, skillfully used, has its own creative ingredients. Mingyong: Happiness is the concern of "leaving densely, fearing that it will be delayed", and it is the harvest of "planting a grain of millet in spring and harvesting ten thousand seeds in autumn"; Happiness is the wish of "I wish people a long time, thousands of miles together"; Happiness is the memory of "often remembering the twilight of Xiting, intoxicated and not knowing the way back"; Happiness is the pursuit of "never regretting the gradual widening of the belt, and making people haggard for Yi"!

You can copy more beautiful lyrical prose to improve your charm. Then du, you can take a look at some of the zhi verses and try to create a few dao songs by yourself (it doesn't matter if it's not good, as long as you can achieve the pressure rhyme and be specific. P.S

It's better to be a poem, don't write words).And then keep revising. As long as this way, your description will be more vivid (because the poem has a word count requirement and has to rhyme, so you can omit the nonsense and leave the essence.)

Finally, after accumulating some idioms, quotes, and sentence patterns, your language will be vivid.

1.Elegant: Make the composition language more culturally charming2Karakuri: Let the language of the composition shine 3Simplicity: Let the composition language win with authenticity.

4.Humor: Let the composition language be interesting and physiologicalDialectic: Let the composition language be mellow and ironing 6Combination of dispersion: Make the composition language rhythmic.

Just do the above.

The book critic Mr. Xiao Qian once said: "Words are naturally subtle things. "The same content, the same idea, some people will make the reader feel pale and powerless, and some will make people feel infinitely charming.

In writing, add appropriate modifiers to the things described to make the content of the expression more three-dimensional, such as the following two sentences:

The moon shines on the steppe. ­

The bright moon gently shone on the vast grasslands of his hometown. The first sentence makes people feel very straightforward, and the first sentence is modified with "bright", "gently", and "vast hometown", which makes it more vivid, and the whole sentence makes people feel full of affection, and the artistic conception comes out. ­

Generally speaking, the following two methods can be used to train students to skillfully use modified language: 1. Give full play to association and imagination, and use various descriptive and anthropomorphic language to modify the content of the expression, so as to make the expression more emotional and make the article wonderful. ­

I stood in front of my grandfather's coffin, tears crawling all over my face. ­