Write a shorthand story about a person, how to abbreviate a story

Methods of abbreviating stories:

1. Read the story repeatedly, understand the central idea, content priority, and hierarchy of the story, and use the structure chart to clarify the context of the story, grasp the main points of the content, clarify the cause, development, and ending of the story, and be clear about the characters' personalities and important words and deeds. Abbreviate the story, be sure to read through**, understand the storyline, sort out the story clues, and grasp the main content, otherwise you will not be able to abbreviate the story as required.

2. It is necessary to distinguish priorities and make appropriate deletions and generalizations. According to the central idea of the story, it is necessary to determine what content is retained, and what content is merged and deleted. The key plot should be summarized as much as possible into a few narrative sentences, modified and restrictive sentences, transitional sentences, and the description of non-key parts and the dialogue of non-main characters can be deleted or only briefly narrated.

Plots that do not affect the development of the story can be merged or deleted. After the deletion, there are some places that cannot be directly connected, and the connection between the previous and subsequent segments can be reconsidered.

3. After abbreviation, compare it with the original text to see whether the main content is retained, whether the meaning is accurate, whether the complete sentence is smooth, and whether the tone and semantics are coherent.

Basic requirements for abbreviations:

1. Abbreviations should be abbreviated in the order of the original text.

2. Abbreviations should be detailed, the key parts should be written in detail, and the minor parts should be abbreviated.

3. Abbreviations should maintain the integrity of the article.

Abbreviations are different from revising an article, removing superfluous parts, or excerpts, but rather shrinking the required article according to different purposes and requirements. Specifically, it is necessary to be faithful to the central meaning of the original text and not deviate from the topic; It is necessary to be faithful to the genre and structure of the original text, and maintain the basic style of the original text; It is necessary to grasp the key points and extract the essence from the rough; The language should be concise and the tone should be coherent.

1. Be faithful to the central idea of the original text, and cannot set up another theme.

The central idea of "Lights" is to praise the dedication of the revolutionary martyrs, explain that today's happy life is not easy to come by, and inspire us to learn our skills and build a new China created by our predecessors with their blood and lives. In our abbreviated essays, the central idea remains the same. It is not possible to set up other central ideas according to one's own needs.

2. Be faithful to the basic content of the original text, and cannot add or subtract arbitrarily, but only subtract content that does not harm the theme.

The content of the second paragraph of "Lights" is mainly about the fact that in a siege and annihilation battle, Deputy Battalion Commander Hao lit the book to illuminate the way forward for the follow-up troops and ensure the victory of the battle, but he died heroically because of exposure. When we make abbreviations, we should firmly grasp this main content, subtract those that are far from the topic, and appropriately add some words to make the sentence smooth and coherent.

3. Be faithful to the skeleton of the original text. That is to say, the original text is narrative and has a storyline, and the basic structure of the original story should be maintained. However, the original text had to be shortened. The condensed article still has a beginning and an end, with clear layers and coherent coherence.

The second paragraph of "Lights" is a complete story, which is written in the order of development when telling the story, not only clearly explaining the six elements of the event, but also focusing on specific pieces and clear context.

When we abbreviate, we should maintain the basic structure of the story, keep the main plot and characters of the original story, and not disrupt the layers and recombine the story. However, there are some paragraphs in the original text that could be combined as appropriate. The hierarchy after the merger is also clear and distinct.

First, it is necessary to delete secondary characters, secondary events, as well as explanations, explanations, and other places. For example, in the article "Jingyanggang", there is a paragraph about Wu Song's visit to Jingyanggang after drinking, and there are three natural paragraphs about his psychological activities. When abbreviating, we can summarize the minor parts in one or two sentences.

Another example is the natural paragraph, write the dialogue between Wu Song and the shopkeeper, and you can also delete some minor sentences.

Second, the language of the characters should be written as narrative language. In the part of the text where Wu Song "drinks", the whole paragraph is written about the dialogue of the characters, and when abbreviating, we write the words of Wu Song and the store into narrative language, so that the plot is coherent and the sentences are "concise".

Third, it is necessary to simplify the language and remove the specific description. For example, when the important plot of "Wu Song fights the tiger" is written in the text, especially the description of Wu Song's actions and the action of the tiger pounce on the scissors, they are written in great detail. In the abbreviation, we use the method of simplifying the language and cutting the branches to make the general description, so that the language is concise and clear.