Ask the teacher who specializes in essays for a small question about the essay!! The third year of j

1. Can you put "me" virtual shoes city cat or tree or a climber?

OK. Because it has no limited scope, you can write about people, things, scenes, imaginary compositions, ......2. Is it risky to write like this?

There may or may not be risky. Because if you write about something that you're completely unfamiliar with, it might not be appropriate. If you are familiar with them, you can also write.

3. Want to be new in composition, but don't know if it's okay?

It is good to seek novelty, but if you look at it from the perspective of elementary school, it is rare to imagine composition, and it can also be said that there are almost no (except for 2 times in grades); From the perspective of junior high school, it is even less common to imagine composition. If you want to be creative, you should be able to.

4. Will any teacher think this is off-topic?

One teacher, one standard, the key is that there is no limited scope of the essay topic. The teacher probably wouldn't think this was off-topic (at least I was).

No, the teacher said that the teacher who changes the essay reads an essay very quickly, so there is no time to think about the idea of what you write or what story behind it, it is only superficial, so it is best not to write some risky essays, and in case the teacher who changes the essay does not like your whimsical style of writing, then you will lose a lot of points It is better to write a safe essay in these exams Don't pursue innovation.

Absolutely, creative and original. It's fun.

Summary. A light breeze blew, and the sea was lifted into a layer of "crystal flowers". Against the backdrop of the blue sky, the sea also looks like a water and sky.

It was crowded with adults and children playing on the beach, including me, of course. The story started with a pleasant weekend ......Our family drove a small car and hummed a little song to Xichong Beach, which is the most suitable beach in Shenzhen to pick up shells. As soon as we arrived here, before we had time to enjoy this beautiful beach, we were called by my sister to start the main quest - collecting shells.

Our family held a shell beauty contest and voted together for first place. Of course, everyone thought they were going to get first place, including me. First of all, I found a lot of shells, although incomplete, with beautiful textured patterns.

Of course, these crippled "beautiful players" were also in my bag. I walked cautiously, for fear that one of the careless ones would ruin the "contestant". Suddenly, I spotted a golden, glittering seashell on the beach.

However, I noticed a couple of children running at the door. Luckily, I was able to react quickly and grab the shell the moment the child ran.

Please copy the text.

Can you help me look at the language?

Yes, it's better not to send **.

Frequent inaccuracies in identification.

Then I can't tell you about my composition.

Then I can't tell you about my composition.

I'll take a picture of you.

Then you send it. If the word is recognized accurately, then no problem.

Is it to evaluate and write a comment on the essay?

You can only send one message, and you can purchase upgrades.

It's a strange thing that you can't recognize a single word.

A light breeze blew, and the sea was lifted into a layer of "crystal flowers". Against the backdrop of the blue sky, the sea also looks like a water and sky. It was crowded with adults and children playing on the beach, including me, of course.

The story started with a pleasant weekend ......Our family drove a small car and hummed a little song to Xichong Beach, which is the most suitable beach in Shenzhen to collect shells. As soon as we arrived here, before we had time to enjoy this beautiful beach, we were called by my sister to start the main quest - collecting shells. Our family held a shell beauty contest and voted together for first place.

Of course, everyone thought they were going to get first place, including me. First of all, I found a lot of shells, although incomplete, with beautiful textured patterns. Of course, these crippled "beautiful players" were also in my bag.

I walked cautiously, for fear that one of the careless ones would ruin the "contestant". Suddenly, I spotted a golden, glittering seashell on the beach. However, I noticed a couple of children running at the door.

Luckily, I reacted quickly and grabbed the shell the moment the child ran.