How to write a basic impromptu commentary?

What is an impromptu commentary?

Impromptu commentary refers to a reasoned and evidence-based analysis and comment on a certain event or topic, and the commentary is mainly based on expressing one's own (individual) views on the event and the topic itself, but there are also opinions expressed on behalf of the collective position, and this form of commentary is rare.

An impromptu comment is actually an oral discussion**, which requires no less than 3 minutes and about 6 or 700 words. The preparation time is not long, and candidates will enter the examination room after drawing the questions and preparing for 5 minutes. The topics of the impromptu comments are all argumentative, and the content is basically within the scope of high school students' knowledge, common sense, and current affairs.

For example:"What do you think of the current Lei Feng learning activities? "、"Tell us what you think about the phenomenon of puppy love in high school students"、"Talk about you'The beauty of language'awareness"、"Pros and cons of surfing the internet for middle school students"、"On the relationship between the individual and the collective"、"Talk about your favorite life motto"、"On the threesome, there must be my teacher"Wait a minute.

It should be said that there is something to say about such topics.

How to tell a good impromptu commentary.

Option 1: The focus of impromptu commentary is on the reserve of knowledge, but there are also general rules.

If you are given a sentence, you will immediately have associations, such as: "your most memorable thing", you may immediately have a review of one thing in your mind, but do not rush to say it, but combine it with the scene of the (exam) at that time, and set up how to introduce, that is, how to make this memorable event through appropriate presentation techniques. Don't go straight to the point, it will seem too inexperienced.

Second, the refining center. After reading and grasping the basic situation of the incident, everyone should be good at refining the central idea of the incident. The method of refining can select different aspects of the event, and refine the center from different characteristics. With the cornerstone of the central idea, you can add bricks and tiles to build the building.

3. Learn to extend. It is based on the event itself, starting from the characteristics and extending it, first, extending the meaning of the event to the depth and breadth as much as possible. It is necessary to speak as thoroughly as possible, deeply, thickly, and with truth-like strength.

The second is to transition the extension of the event to real life. Combined with social phenomena, natural phenomena, or a certain law of development, bring the topic into life and activate the topic. If we want to achieve unexpected results, we must get rid of the confusion of phenomena, use the tone of experts, start from the root of the incident, and see the essence through the phenomenon.

Fourth, express your opinion. Through topic extension, state your own views or the opinions of experts, trigger the audience to think, learn from them, and achieve the purpose of commenting on the topic. When expressing one's opinions, you should be serious and serious, try to use truthful words or famous quotes to lead, and use unshakable arguments to make your comments more authoritative, such as: use.

In Huaifang's Dongyi Village, there is a "magic greenhouse". Guo Lei is the owner of the "magic greenhouse", and before planting this greenhouse, he was a Chinese diplomat in Israel. He was shocked by Israel's soilless cultivation technology, and he thought about plans to return home and start a business while he was on the job!

In 2015, Guo Lei and the partner he found in Israel built a sunshine greenhouse. Ordinary greenhouse leafy vegetables can produce four seasons a year, and at most eight seasons, but this greenhouse can produce 18 seasons a year!

Li Zhichun is the only electrician in the Laodong Road community, and he deals with the residents of the community every day, the faucet of this house is broken, and the light bulb of that house is broken, Li Zhichun always tries his best to repair it as soon as possible.

What many people don't know is that two years ago, he was still a senior project manager of a group, with an annual salary of hundreds of thousands of yuan. And now, as a community electrician, his monthly salary is 2,046 yuan. Many people are surprised, it turns out that with such a high salary, how can they say that they will put it down!

Li Zhichun said that after his father left, his mother was alone at home, and as a son, he wanted to be by his old mother's side, "I don't want the old man to be lonely!" But I also feel sorry for my wife and children, but everyone will get old one day, and I hope that young people will spend more time with their parents when they are free from work. ”

1. To "get straight to the point" Senque first shows his point of view (fixed mode: I think? ）

2. Do not have repetitive words and sentences with similar meanings.

3. Be organized when speaking and avoid gibberish. (To use: section.)

One, two? Or first, second, last? ）

4. Grasp the empty lifting time, not too long.

5. The language should try to show your artistic quality, cultural heritage, and knowledge ability, and speak persuasively.

6. The review of the news article should dig out the author's intention, highly summarize the content of the article, and make it into a sentence or a point of view, so that the review will become simpler.

7. There are several modes of commentary: one is methodical: clarifying the viewpoint and discussing it (p.

One, two? Or first, second, last? Summary.

The second is two-sided: to explain a point of view from both positive and negative aspects. Third, the use of literary forms:

This kind of evaluation method is more difficult for ordinary candidates, mainly using many poems and sentences in ancient texts to enrich their comments and increase their connotation.

8. Some schools will give you a word or a word for you to comment, and we should dig deep into the meaning of the word and word (for example, let you comment on "on", you can say that "on is a directional word", and everyone should have a positive attitude towards life?). ）

Impromptu commentary is one of the more difficult contents in the professional examinations of broadcasting and hosting and radio and television editing and directing. The purpose of the impromptu review is to test the candidate's ability to think quickly and organize language, the ability to express oneself in oral language, and the psychological quality of not panicking. It requires candidates to think quickly, organize quickly, have strong language skills, and have strong memory, and at the same time, it is also a test of candidates' knowledge and cultural quality.

Judging from the situation of the examinations in previous years, a considerable number of candidates have affected the results of the professional examinations due to the unsatisfactory progress of this content. Therefore, impromptu comments are something that candidates need to pay extra attention to and take seriously.

[Extended Materials].

Exercise methods: First, it is necessary to start with the retelling practice of small stories to exercise oral skills, which can be used as a reference to English learning methods. When we are learning English, teachers often say that the language environment is a very important factor in learning English, and students should be good at creating this environment for themselves, such as getting up every morning and starting to have a conversation with themselves in English, so that all the thoughts in their hearts can be turned into English, which can be of great help to the learning and practice of spoken English. Impromptu commenting requires a similar practice.

There are a lot of simple fairy tales or newspaper messages that are very short, and we try to retell them after reading them, and try to do so in a beautiful and clear way. After doing a good job of retelling simple stories and short messages, and then doing the same practice with more complex events, you can improve your language organization skills by sticking to them.

The second is to pay more attention to the small things in life around you. There are many things happening around us every day, and these things happen for different reasons, and the final result of things is closely related to the changes of various factors in the development of events. Therefore, when practicing, it is necessary to express as clearly as possible the occurrence, development, outcome and various reasons that play a decisive role in the event.

However, remember not to write the manuscript in advance and then practice, because many students will excerpt the relevant events in newspapers and magazines in advance, and then memorize the content by rote, which will not achieve the purpose of the practice. The best way is to read and understand the analysis and commentary in newspapers and magazines, and then try to express the content in your own words, and try to pay attention to the organization of your own language in the process of expression. It will be very difficult at the beginning, but over time, your thinking and speaking skills will be greatly improved.

Impromptu commentary has always been a major difficulty in the broadcasting and hosting major, and it is also a headache for students. Today, Xiaoyin has helped you sort out some impromptu comment tips summarized by the teacher, come and collect and learn

First, carefully analyze the material.

Materials are the foundation of all topics, and only by reading the materials thoroughly can we have something to say and reason to say. Immediately after receiving the material, read it silently, and make a simple understanding and memory of the event or topic mentioned in the material. Then start to analyze the material, dig into the hidden content of the material, and some keywords.

This is the most basic point and must be taken seriously.

2. Think more.

Some topics are very vague and do not have a clear attitude or point of view, so please pay attention to the fact that when thinking about the problem, you must be comprehensive, not just look at the surface without looking at the connotation, or only look at a certain aspect of things. Therefore, after clarifying the viewpoint, quickly think about the outline around the viewpoint, clarify the ideas of the argument, and think actively and broadly as much as possible!

3. Expression.

The language expression ability of impromptu comments is also one of the key points that the judges pay attention to, in terms of expression, we should pay attention to our own speed of speech, the speed of speech should be moderate, too fast is easy to make the idea unable to keep up with the mouth, too slow will make the expression seem too procrastinating, so you must control your speed of speech according to your usual language habits. At the same time, be careful not to express yourself with too many mantras, such as "um".

4. Strengthen memory, think and talk at the same time.

After thinking about the outline quickly, it is necessary to strengthen the memory repeatedly, first by memorizing the large ideas and structures, and then by strengthening the memory of the small ideas and structures of the points.

Fifth, contact reality.

Impromptu comments are to let candidates talk about their views on a certain issue, and do not require candidates to make a theoretical chapter or academic speech, no matter what the topic, the review is to talk about their own views, and do not go against their own views in order to cater to the examiner's preferences. The best way to connect with reality is to connect with yourself, the people around you, the social environment you are familiar with, and the reality of the people you are most familiar with.

6. Calm your mind.

When making impromptu comments, it is best to look at the judges or the camera lens, do not wander in the eyes, do not shake the body at will, and pay attention to the sense of communication with the judges when expressing. Show your generous and confident side to the teacher, and try to make your comments as coherent and fluent as possible.

1. There should be both "commentary" and "description".

Contestants are required to complete two contents with limited preparation time: one is "Commentary" and the other is "Commentary". The so-called "commentary" means that there must be both "commentary" and "commentary".

With "statement", people can understand the origin of the topic; With "reviews", you can give people an idea of the views and opinions you hold. "Commentary" is the basis of "commentary", and "commentary" is the sublimation of "commentary", so in addition to having a "description" of the topic, contestants should also briefly express their basic views on the object of description.

2. Prepare a concise outline.

To prepare a successful impromptu commentary, the most important thing is to have a simple and clear outline. For example, what are the key words to highlight when describing the object, what are the ideas and core gist, and clarify the order in which they are to be used. With such an outline in mind, you can ensure that your comments are not logically confusing and unscrupulous.

3. Don't memorize by rote.

However, when preparing an impromptu commentary, don't try to think about everything you have to say. Because once you fall into the state of memorization, it is easy to lose the sense of scene and object in the language, and if you accidentally forget the words and get stuck, it will affect the overall effect even more.