What are the causes of the problems in language sentences, the modification of sentences in language

Fan"It means all, it refers to all the people who have made outstanding achievements in science, and "quite a few" means "a large part of it," which refers to a large part of the people who have made outstanding achievements in science.

"Everything" represents the whole, and "many" is only a part of it, and of course the two contradict each other.

"Fan" means that the range is all, and "quite a few" means that the range is larger, but some people are not like that.

"Everything" means all, all, and "many" means only most, so it is contradictory.

All refers to all, while many refer to the majority.

"Where" in the dictionary means the adverb "to be", i.e., all, all; "Not a few" refers to the majority; The difference between the two is: the degree is different.

The meaning in the sentence represents the whole, the whole, and the many means that the part is not properly matched.

"Fan" means "all, all", and "many" means "most"; Since the first half of the sentence says "all people who have made outstanding achievements in science", it is natural that the second half of the sentence "most of them are in very difficult objective conditions." There was a contradiction.

"Where" in this sentence means: all, all. "Not a few" contradicts it.

This is true for all of them, with no exceptions and many exceptions.

1. The principle of modifying sick sentences: change the smoothness and correct (do not change the original meaning of the sentence).

2. The method of modifying the sick sentence: add (add words), delete (delete redundant words), adjust (adjust the order of words), and change (replace words).

3. Tips for modifying sick sentences:

1) Conjunctive syntax.

It refers to the abbreviation and condensation of the sick sentence, removing the secondary components of the sentence (definite, adverbial, complement), and retaining the main components of the sentence (subject, predicate, object), so as to judge the ** of the sentence, so as to prescribe the right "medicine".

For example, the Xing'an Mountains in summer are the most beautiful seasons of the year. Using the abbreviation to reduce it to "Xing'anling is the season", it is obvious that "Xing'anling" and "season" are not properly matched.

Correct change: Delete "season". Summer in Hung Yen Mountains is the most beautiful season of the year.

2) Taxonomy.

It refers to classifying sick sentences according to different problems. To use this method, you must first remember the various types of sick sentences (common ones are: improper collocation, incomplete sentences, inconsistencies, inverted word order, repetition of words, improper use of words, improper classification, etc.); When encountering a specific sentence, take a seat again.

For example: Example 1Thousands of young people have participated in tree planting activities. First of all, it is determined that this sentence belongs to the "word repetition" type. In the sentence, "thousands" and "innumerable" are repeated, and one can be arbitrarily deleted when modifying.

Example 2The teachers and students of the school actively carried out "giving love". It is not difficult to find that the sick sentence is of the type of "incomplete sentence", and the object is missing, so the word "activity" should be added after "offering love".

1. Mixed sentence structure and semantic repetition; 2. Logical contradictions; 3. Ambiguity of sentences, 4. Improper collocation of words; 5. Defective ingredients.

There are these types of sick sentences: [(l) word order is reversed; (2) inconsistencies; (3) Defective ingredients; (4) the designation is unclear; (5) punctuation errors; (6) Misuse of related words; (7) repetitive verbosity; (8) Improper collocation; (9) Misclassification; (10) Not in accordance with the facts].

1. Because in this sentence, this two-sided word is closely related to its meaning, in this sentence, prosperity and decline, honor and disgrace can also arouse the feeling of serving the country for intellectuals (glory and prosperity are encouragement), so the two-sided word is not wrong.

2. More than 100,000 yuan itself is an approximate amount, and there is no need to use it in conjunction with the left and right, which is repetitive.

(1) With the glory and disgrace of the nation, the prosperity and decline of the country, intellectuals will have a sense of competition, if the nation is like Japan in the invasion of China, we will all suffer humiliation, only by driving them out, we can be happy, just to drive them out, there will be struggle.

2) "It's not" "Left and right" There is a contradiction.,It's just that.,There's definitely a range.,For example,A book is only 5 yuan.,Plus "left and right",Then it's conflicting with each other.,So you should put "also" or "left and right" to remove one.。

If you don't understand, you can ask.

1. It is to say that honor and disgrace, and the relative degree of prosperity and decline, in a broad sense, is not extreme glory or disgrace, prosperity or decline.

For example, the girl is not beautiful, which can arouse his interest more.

2. More than 100,000 yuan is originally a general reference, and if you add left and right, it is not very good.

2 The domestic car is low and suitable for the people to accept, such as the unified price of the "Urban Beibei" market is only 6.08 million yuan, the "Ingle" is 6.88 million yuan, and the "Santana" is only about 100,000 yuan.

Symptom analysis: repeat, "more than 100,000 yuan" is an approximate number, and "about" can no longer be used

The correct answer should be a. Analysis:

As you say, "B clause is mixed": "around" and "as the theme" are mixed. It can be changed to:

The experts and scholars attending the meeting focused on the theme of macroeconomic situation, financial market development and industrial upgrading**, or summarized the past economic situation, or looked forward to future economic development. Or: Participating experts and scholars will take the macroeconomic situation, financial market development and industrial upgrading as the theme**, or summarize the past economic situation, or look forward to future economic development.

(c) "Awareness" and "firmness" do not match; It can be changed to: The practice of improving the party's work style and building a clean and honest government in the new period has fully proved that our party has a profound understanding of the anti-corruption struggle, a very firm attitude, and has achieved remarkable results in the building of the party's work style and a clean government.

There should be nothing wrong with sentence a. But now I don't see item d. Can I send it again?

A is missing the subject, (the press center of the second session of the 11th National People's Congress) (held) (special interview) This should be the final sentence, in the 11th session... Held.

b. Experts and scholars. As the theme, the contradiction is repeated.

c, recognize "and" firm can barely match.

d didn't give it out.

I think a is wrong, "held" and "feature interview" are not used together, and "activity" should be added after it. B sentence structure is mixed. (c) "Awareness" and resoluteness are not properly matched. d didn't give the question.

Clause B is mixed; , The sentences connected with "or" are too mixed, the semantics are confused, and the understanding and attitude are very firm The understanding is not firm, and the attitude can be The understanding should be clear d sentence Even not like the willingness of his sentence should be to highlight Li Qingzhao as a woman Although there are various limitations, but there can also be achievements, but this sentence is easy to be misunderstood as highlighting Li Qingzhao can't, and even the word is ambiguous. You should read it a few times, and some of the sick sentences can't tell the reason for the specifics, and you have to understand that the sick sentences are the sick sentences.

It should be a, please, give me a good review.

There is a problem with the D sentence Li Qingzhao is a woman, she can neither gallop on the battlefield like Yue Fei, nor can she scold her friends happily like Lu You, or even go to the court like Xin Qiji. The original meaning of this sentence was to praise Li Qingzhao, but it turned out that she couldn't do 3 things.

Item A should be correct, but what is the original sentence of item D, I don't see.