How about I create the poem Yongjun Sorrow .

Like Tibetan poems, because of the word limitation, there is no way to fully conform to the rhythm of poetry, but if you really want to write poetry seriously, it is recommended to learn the basics, and it will be better to be even.

Like your first poem, the rhyme is not rhymed. In terms of poetry, if you can write some true feelings, less ancient sentence patterns, and more self-creation, it will be more meaningful, otherwise, it will inevitably have the taste of sorrow for the new words.

The second song is a word, but the name of the word plate is not given.

Seriously, poetry can't just be read beautifully. Like your beginning: cold and cold moon, cold and warm beings, how many springs and autumns are told?

Since the cold ice moon is only cold, there is naturally no warmth of cold and warm beings. Oh, although the next one is not a big problem, there are some things that are probably difficult to explain.

It's only fourteen, it's good to have this interest, but it's better to learn the basics first, especially for poetry, it's better to use dim sum and write about your actual mood.

D landlord, I'm also 14, should rhyme a little, such as:

Since ancient times, it has been sad to part, and the flowers have fallen for thousands of years. The cold moon night is a desperate day, and the fate is sorrowful.

What is the wordplate of this word? Wouldn't it also be a self-created body (。。

Well, first of all, the imagery is good, it's just very common

It's just that I can't find the rhyme for the first song, which word plate is pressed for the second song, and the format is something I've never seen.

You see the sea and don't see the boat.

Entrepreneurship is difficult and even harder.

You don't see it, the water of the Yellow River comes up from the sky, rushes to the sea and never returns.

Li Bai will enter the wine.

Persuade you to have a glass of wine.

There is no one in the west out of Yangguan.

The above poems praise the Great Wall and belittle. In fact, I think that the construction of the Great Wall is still a waste of manpower, material resources and financial resources, but after the construction of the Great Wall, it has brought rich tourism income and cultural connotation to my country. In ancient times, it was favored by the emperors of previous dynasties, and after several reconstructions, it withstood countless external troubles and external troubles, and made great achievements for our country.

How to say it, anyway, there are pros and cons.

Be humble and have a thousand years of achievements, and laugh proudly at the frost and snow of winter.

A life of tranquility and indifference, a life of high wind and bright festival. - I like it very much.

It is better to eat without meat than to live without bamboo.

No meat makes people thin, and no bamboo makes people vulgar.

People are thin and fat, but people are not curable.

Surname. Su Shi "Yu Qiansheng Lu Yunxuan".

Zhushiqing Zheng Banqiao.

insist that the green mountains are not relaxed, and the roots are in the broken rocks;

Thousands of blows are still strong, and the wind blows from east to west, north and south.

Xu Tingyun "Yongzhu".

Regardless of the pavilion and the mountains and forests, Aier is only a thousand acres of shade.

When it is not unearthed, there is a festival first, and there is no intention to go to Lingyun.

Ge Pi began to transform with the dragon, and the valley chatted with the phoenix.

The moon is clear and the night is eternal, and the poor prince is the only one who knows him. ——Two of the very classic sentences have been rewritten by later generations"When it is not unearthed, there is a knot, and Lingyun is still modest"

The green bamboo is half of the seeds, and the new shoots are only out of the wall.

The rain washes Juanjuan Juan, and the wind blows fine fragrance.

Tang Dynasty. Du Fu "Yongzhu".

Tingzhu Liu Yuxi.

Dew polyester lead powder festival, the wind shakes the green jade branches.

It is like a gentleman, and there is no place that is not suitable.

Yan Zheng Mansion with Yongzhu Du Fu.

The green bamboo is half of the seeds, and the new shoots are only out of the wall.

The color invades the book late, and the shade is cold over the wine bottle.

The rain washes Juanjuan Juan, and the wind blows fine fragrance.

But there is no cutting of the order, and the clouds will be long.

The cottage is a small bridge and a flowing water, and it is comfortable to live and settle down. The wind blows the body crooked, and the snow presses the waist and limbs. Prestigious and often the first festival, the mind is empty. The frost and summer heat are fearless, and the four seasons are beautiful in spring, summer, autumn and winter.

Be humble and have a thousand years of achievements, and laugh proudly at the frost and snow of winter.

A life of tranquility and indifference, a life of high wind and bright festival.

Guanyin Bodhisattva praises.

Guanyin Bodhisattva is wonderful and difficult to reward, pure and solemn, tired and cultivated.

Haohao Red Lotus is under the feet of the majestic reputation of the state of swimming, and the hail is closed, and the ancient Buddha is now crowned.

The nectar in the bottle is often sprinkled all over the hands, and the poplar branches in the hands do not count the autumn.

Pray for a thousand places to respond to a thousand places, and the sea of suffering is often used as a boat to save people.