Urgent!!!!! How to write a 600 word essay on Women s Day in praise of the teacher? 5

Today is the annual one"Thirty-eight"Women's Day.

Mom, I want to dedicate the song in my heart to you. For as long as I can remember, my mother has been by my side to take care of me. When I was in trouble, my mom would come and encourage me:

Don't hold back, believe in yourself, you can do it. "When I get results, my mom will say earnestly; "Well done, but don't be proud, the arrogant army will be defeated. "When I have a setback, my mom comes to comfort me again:

Don't be discouraged, failure is the mother of success, try hard next time! "Whenever I hear these words, I feel a warm current blowing through my heart.

Mr. Yang, I want to dedicate the song in my heart to you. Ever since you took over our class in third grade, our class has been"Reputation is growing"。At school, you treat us more dearly than your mother.

You are always meticulous in every class. Every text is well analyzed, every sentence and word is explained clearly, and when writing the text, it is explained to us with full attention. You've worked hard to carry it from the first***.

Please*****. The bloody land labors for us, but never in return. During the day, you are grading our homework and correcting our compositions; In the evenings, you often stay late into the night to prepare for class.

You pay close attention to one of our actions, one sentence, one of our essays, and when we achieve results, you will have a happy smile on your face. Every word you say is a perfect word. Whenever I try to appreciate what you say, the warmth that fills my heart is all inhaled.

On Women's Day, I dedicate all my wishes to all the women and wish them a happy holiday and all the best in their own festival!

Self-evaluation: The writing of this article is smooth and the ideas are clear. A large number of analogies are used, and figurative rhetorical devices are also used. However, it would be better if there were specific examples.

Teacher's evaluation: This article is sincere, the sentences are smooth, and the text is beautiful. But writing about two people at the same time, doesn't it seem some"Scattered"If you write about only one person, the topic will appear more prominent and the article will appear more focused.

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On Women's Day, my mother and I had lunch. Since my mother was going out to run errands, she left in a hurry before she had time to wash the dishes.

I stayed at home by myself, finished my math homework, took a break, and prepared to do the special homework assigned by the Chinese teacher, that is, to do a good deed for my mother on Women's Day. What good do I do? Thinking about it, suddenly my eyes lit up, yes, wouldn't it be nice for me to help my mother wash the dishes?

I jumped to the kitchen and started washing the dishes happily.

I first carefully put the bowl into the pool, then unscrewed the tap, put some water, and then poured the dish soap into the pool, I wanted to pour a little dish soap, but the dish soap seemed to be deliberately against me, and it flowed out a lot. At this time, the bowls in the pool are like naughty little fish, sliding to the left and to the right, and I can't catch them. Finally clutching a bowl, it mischievously slipped into the pool.

There was an immediate crackling sound in the pool. Luckily, my bowl is stainless steel, otherwise it would have been broken. The bubbles in the pool flew out one after another, fluttering freely over the pool, as if they were showing me a show!

Looking at it, I looked down and realized that I hadn't washed a bowl yet! At this time, I took the loofah and wiped the bowl vigorously, and I sang while wiping: inside and in and out, and in and out, and at the bottom of the ......, and at the bottom, and at the bottomI jumped for joy.

I put the cleaned bowl on the table to control the water, at this time, my mother happened to come back, she looked at my clean dishes, smiled happily, my mother's smile is so beautiful, so bright, my mother smiled and said, "My daughter has grown up and can help her wash the dishes." "Listening to my mother's compliment, my heart blossomed.

I thought: I want to do more housework within my capacity in the future, help my mother reduce her burden, and be a good child who honors my parents.

I love you so much.

You are like a towering tree, and I am a beautiful little bird that grows happily in the shade of your tree. You are like the boundless sea, I am a lovely little fish, growing in your arms.

Every time I see your busy figure, I always want you to take a break, but I don't have the guts. Every time I want to do something for you, you always say, "You're too young to do it, let me do it."

I got angry when I heard this, and thought: I'm not a child anymore, I've grown up, and I can help adults do what I can.

Teachers praise others for getting out of life.

You can only get floral scents.

Yours is the morning sun.

Your silver is fifteen moons.

But you're still whistling happily.

Your pride is the fragrance of peach and plum.

You offer a flower, I offer a flower, let's weave a big wreath and dedicate it to our dear teacher mother.

It is you who give the seeds, the warmth of the sun;

It is you who water the seedlings with your sweat.

Your eyes are like bright stars, shining with enchanting brilliance;

Your singing is like a spring stream, bringing joy to everyone.

Wherever we go, always remember your love;

Wherever we go.

Always remember your words.

Wherever we go, always remember your love;

No matter where we go, we will always be a flower for you.