Distress! Poetry and the like, come on

Purely personal opinion o(o....The first three sentences of these two poems are exactly the same, that is, the background is basically the same, and because the description method of the second half of the poem is different, the artistic conception presented and the artistic feeling of the whole poem are also different.

In both poems, there is "passing years and taking away the fragrance", but the position is changed. Because it's not a quatrain, I'll put it aside first. The first poem puts this sentence at the end, which is indeed a bit confusing and mysterious, but the second poem is followed by "why keep the drunkenness of the broken face", directly revealing the unsuccessful "drunkenness" of the whole poem, rendering the sadness of the whole poem, in general, the two poems have their own advantages, the first song is expensive in light and natural, inadvertently revealing a trace of sad tone, and the second song is expensive in the large brush to depict the injury, whether it is the side front, the scenery or the characters, always reminding the reader of a "mourning" word, the overall feeling is more prominent than the first one.

If you have to say which of the two songs is better, it depends on which one you like.

The second song is good, with tactful beauty. , such as the one in the first song"Dredging Tong does not know the tears of sorrow, and the drizzle is difficult to hide the yellow flowers"The meaning is very close, tiled and boring; "The years have passed by. Why should you keep your face when you are drunk?"Medium"Why keep"The question is sincere, the poetry is progressive, and the use of anthropomorphic techniques is even better.

In addition, at the end of the first poem, it seems that the poem has no ending, and it stops abruptly; The second song begins with"The broken shadow quietly sprinkled the sorrow of the garden"At the end, the vision is broader, and it is more melancholy.

The disadvantages of the second song are:"I don't know who is walking by the river. The rain falls and the flowers are left behind and the grass is draining"The visual jump is too big, but it's not impossible.

Comparatively speaking, I think it's better to be second first.

Mood: Not bad. But there is no difference between the two, as the third person said, there are differences in words but the same.

Rhyme: Even if measured by the ancient poems of seven words, both rhymes are lacking, and the latter is slightly stronger.

Pingqian: I don't pursue Pingqian too much, so it's not very clear, omitted.

Overall: The artistic conception is good, beginner.

Rookie answer: Yu does not know the plainness of the poem, the charm of the words, but the twilight red and geese do not stay, like the autumn and winter ingredients are more, it is difficult to go hand in hand with the drizzle and yellow flowers.

The knowledge is small, the words are narrow, and the words of the madman are also.

These two poems are good, over.

Dream back to the flower rain and the wind and cold: The flower rain is cold to the wind, the dream is a beautiful flower rain, but when you wake up, you face the wind and the wind, opening with the cruel contrast between the dream and the reality.

Leaning on the gan alone to look at the distant mountains: take the intention of relying on the railing alone, going up to the tall building alone, looking at the end of the world, and looking into the distance alone.

One is not seen from the end of the world: one self, still since the words. Du Fu's "Returning to Sorrow" "Since the wind and dust, it is still difficult to walk. "Wandering the world, I don't see anyone I care about.

The bright moon in the city is sad: "Who saw the moon for the first time on the riverside?" When did Jiang Yue shine at the beginning of the year?

The moon is full of moonlight, but it is sad alone. The moon here corresponds to the dawn wind in the first sentence, the sky is not yet bright, and the moon is still bright. However, my heart is like the moon, and there is no sound in the long night, and the long door is shining for a long time, and the streamer is only shadowed by one person.

To sum up, it is probably that the wind and the waning moon are shining, and there is a heart for climbing.

The main expression is longing, and the sorrow of thinking about you and not seeing you.

Spring River Flower Moon Night Zhang Ruoxu.

Who first saw the moon on the riverside? When did Jiang Yue shine at the beginning of the year? Life has been infinite from generation to generation, and Jiang Yue is only similar to the title of the capital city south Zhuang Cui Hu every year.

Last year, in this door today, the peach blossoms on the faces of the people were red. The face of the person does not know where to go, and the peach blossoms are still smiling in the spring breeze.

The day rises and the night produces hemp, and the children of the village are in charge of their own homes.

The sun rises and the sun sets.

Nanyue is ancient, and the world knows it. Cui Cage Priceless Temple, light shines with famous poems. A water gushes with animal traces, and the five peaks row the phoenix. The monk leads the leisurely step, and the sun rises and the sun returns. .From: "Pranyo Temple" Year: Tang Author: Pei said.

The sun has broken the intestines at daylight.