Please give me some advice, I want to learn how to make ancient poems.

You've got a long way to go...

You can give 30 points at most for this song, it stands to reason that it should be 0 points. One of the essential characteristics of poetry is that it must be rhymed, and you don't even have a rhyme. It's not a poem... It is 108,000 miles away from the poem. A cursory look at at least 15 words out of the law...

Writing poetry is not about writing a few words that flow well, and then seven words and eight lines in a row.

You haven't learned the knowledge of the rhythm, so no wonder you, in fact, the rhythm is very simple, it is recommended that you read two books: Wang Li's "Poetry Rhythm", Qi Gong's "Poetry and Sound Rhythm Draft", after reading it, you will have an understanding of the basic requirements for writing poetry, and then look back at your own poems to know that there is a problem.

Then you can read all kinds of poems, "Suiyuan Poems" and so on. It will be of great help to you to figure out the artistic conception, concise words and article layout, etc.

Of course, you need to keep practicing your pen, which is the most important thing, while learning the theory of rhythm and poetry, keep comparing your own works, as long as you read these books carefully, you don't need others at that time, you will find out your own shortcomings.

I may not like to hear your poem, but if you can really stick to the road of learning to compose poetry, if you look back at your poem, you will definitely have the same evaluation as me.

You can only basically be regarded as an ancient poem! It's not badly written, though! go on……Poetry.

Close-up poems, Tibetan poems.

If it is a rhyme poem, the format is wrong, the first and second sentences of the couplet, the even numbers (five words 2, 4, seven words 2, 4, 6) should be equal, and the second sentence and the third sentence (the second half of the first couplet and the first half of the jaw couplet) even numbers are the same. Even sentences rhyme, jaw couplets, neck couplets (3rd and 4th sentences, 5th and 6th sentences) are dual sentences. Of course, this is too strict, and the ancients will have two or three small mistakes (the poems written in the form of the rhyme do not count).

Swan song ......"If I understand correctly, it should mean that the boy firmly believes in the legend of the White Snake and finds love, then I think it should be placed in one couplet, otherwise it will be broken into two, and the connection will be weak and difficult to understand." (I tried to change it, but I found it very difficult, "The White Snake's swan song will be passed on to future generations, and Shao Junqing will sigh at his ancestors.) Walking in Wushan to find Zhou Xian, boating in Luoshui to visit the Han God" is reluctant and reasonable, but the whole poem is about to change the rhyme).

Just like in the Dream of Red Mansions, Xiangling learns poetry, watches more masters, and then practices by herself, and it will get better slowly.

Don't be angry, there is a feeling of limerick. Everyone goes through such a process when they start writing poetry.

Your poems are just a little worse in rhyme, but the mood and thoughts are actually very good. If you want to compose poetry, you must first have a good grasp of ancient poetry, which is very important for battle and syntax.

It's an ancient poem, how can it reveal a bit of modern poetry?

1, "Song History".

Tang] Li Shangyin.

After a look at the former virtuous country and home, the success is due to diligence and thrift, and the defeat is due to luxury.

Why do you need amber as a pillow, how can the pearl be a car.

It was not transported to Qinghai Ma Songdan, and it was difficult to pull out the Shushan snake.

Several people have pre-Nanxun song, and the ancient cangwu cried Cuihua.

2, "Youye Kuanshan West Village".

Song] Lu You. Mo laughs at the farmer's wine, and the guests are full of chickens and dolphins in the harvest year.

There is no way out of the mountains and rivers, and the willows and flowers are bright and another village.

The flute and drum follow the spring society, and the clothes are simple and ancient.

From now on, if you are allowed to ride the moon idlely, you will knock on the door with a cane all the time and night.

3, "Book Anger".

Song] Lu You. In his early years, he knew that the world was difficult, and the north of the Central Plains was like a mountain.

The building boat crosses the snow melon island at night, and the iron horse is scattered in the autumn wind.

Plugging the Great Wall is empty, and the temples in the mirror have been spotted.

A teacher is a real name in the world, who can be a man in the middle of a thousand years!

1.Read the poem carefully to understand the gist and meaning of the poem.

2.Savor the language of the poem, and grasp the rhythm and rhyme of the poem.

3.Focus on understanding the thoughts and feelings contained in the poems, and analyze them according to their own feelings.

4.Analyze the situation and grasp the background of the poem and its impact on the society at that time.

There are a few steps to take note of learning a poem:

1.Read and understand poetry. Learning poetry first requires a deep understanding of its practical meaning and emotional connotations. You should read every word of the poem carefully and translate the words you don't understand.

2.Analyze the structure and linguistic characteristics of the poem. Analyze the poem's rhyme, rhyme, and use of words and sentence structure to better understand the meaning and meaning of the poem.

3.Read aloud and memorize. Reading aloud and memorizing is the most important step in learning poetry. Familiarize yourself with the content of the poem and deepen your understanding of the poem by reading it aloud and reciting it repeatedly.

4.Share with others. Sharing the poems you have studied with others allows you to get opinions and feedback from others and helps you understand and remember the poems better.

5.Participate in literary activities. Participating in literary activities or poetry recitation competitions can showcase your achievements in learning poetry, and at the same time, you can also meet more literature lovers and exchange some literary experiences and experiences.

Learning poetry requires some special skills and methods, and here are the suggestions:

1.First, read through the poem to understand the gist and theme of the poem, while paying attention to its structure and diction.

2.Pay special attention to important vocabulary and language, and grasp the characteristics of the author's language.

3.Recite the whole poem repeatedly, especially those important sentences, to deepen your understanding and memory of the poem.

4.Practice memorizing poems on a regular basis while trying to understand them through different perspectives and ways of thinking.

Finally, stick to practice and read to put that poem into practice and use as much as possible, trying to explain and understand it in your own words and ideas to increase your level of understanding and appreciation of the poem.

Answer: 1 First of all, understand this poem, the author's life is very chronological, and the author's life is very chronological, because most of the ancient poems are based on that era, out of the characteristics of that era2 If you need to memorize, you can combine it with Zhou's English, you first understand the general meaning, and then combine it with your own understanding, so that it will be easy to memorize it.

Why did you ask 2 questions? I answered them all, I hope you are satisfied!

I don't know if you are a student, if so, you must listen carefully to the teacher's explanation in Chinese class (although I admit that the current Chinese teaching is very unsuccessful), and if you think it is good, you can memorize it, this is accumulation. If you are not a student, just find some books such as 300 Tang poems, the first step in learning poetry is to read poems, appreciate poems, memorize poems, and be familiar with 300 Tang poems.

The momentum and feelings of poetry are mainly rendered by imagery, and poetic imagery should be accumulated in ordinary times. For example, in the poems outside the Saiwai, as soon as the images of the desert, the lonely smoke, the yellow wind, the iron armor, the sound of the horn, the flag, etc., are laid out, the majestic and tragic atmosphere outside the Saiwai suddenly comes out; Similarly, in landscape poems, as soon as the images of smoke and rain, fresh breeze, bright moon, willows, ripples, lotus flowers, clouds, etc. are integrated into the poem, the feeling of beautiful mountains and rivers also appears immediately. Saying all this is to tell you the importance of accumulating imagery, and at the same time, imagery also helps to express thoughts and feelings.

Flat rhyme, this problem is a problem for all beginners, I don't know if it's because I'm naturally sensitive to Chinese characters, every time I write a poem, it's easy to think of the words that rhyme with, from the first poem, that's it. In fact, novices don't have to deliberately pursue the equality of each word when writing poems, they only need to make the last word rhyme. Rhythm depends on feelings, and improving one's literary literacy comes naturally.

In the end, you can't write poems for the sake of writing poems, such poems have no soul, and only when you have feelings in your heart and are eager to express them, the poems you write are masterpieces.

May you swim in the ocean of poetry! I am grateful to give you a poem, and I hope to smile

The prosperous era of the Tang Dynasty is difficult again, and how many poems have fallen into the dust.

Thousands of years later, those who learn poetry are brave enough to create and not wander.

Flower rain original, pure hand, I hope you are satisfied.

You have to have rhyme, you have to be bored, you have to write meaning, don't read it and put it together, at least you yourself must understand what the poem you write represents! I personally think so, I hope it can help you!

Let's memorize 300 Tang poems first. That's a classic! There is a lot of copying of articles in the world, and if you are tired of reading it, you will not copy it!

Take a good look at other people's poems. Ask a professional for guidance. Extract the essence of other people's poems and combine them with your own to create an independent style with your own connotation.

If you watch more historical dramas, you will naturally be edified, and I am like this.

I only started writing last year, and I'm not a veteran. Here's my experience.

At the beginning, it's best to find a few friends who have common interests.

If you write it yourself, you can start writing in the ancient style, practice the battle first, and pick up a few couplet books to read.

I feel that after I am familiar with the battle, I will start writing near-body poems, and I must pay attention to the level from the beginning.

For formatting problems, please refer to Wang Li's "Summary of Poetry and Rhythm".

With the feelings, the feelings arrived, and the article was good.

Consider the words and choose the best of the best.

Rhyme with the battle.

1.Pay attention to the arrangement of the duals.

2.It is easy to understand but does not lose the theoretical explanation.

3.Rhyme appropriately.

4.Graceful, lyrical.