Ask for some questions for revising sick sentences in the sixth grade

1. The teacher introduced many of Ji Xiaoming's deeds.

2. Yesterday at noon, there was a violent storm.

3. On Friday afternoon, the labor tasks of our class are to sweep the floor, clean the windows and do hygiene.

4. He couldn't help but laugh out loud.

5. The author of "Lin Hai" was written by Lao She.

6. Owls, swallows, bats, and magpies are all beneficial birds.

7. According to the instructions of the superiors, the school repeatedly does eye exercises twice a day.

8. With the help of my classmates, I have made great progress.

9. There was a warm applause at the venue.

10. I will humbly accept everyone's opinions and improve the shortcomings.

11. Because you exercise regularly, your body will become strong.

12. We must use practical actions to implement the call to promote Putonghua.

13. Performed a wonderful program at the entertainment evening.

14. This question was finally solved.

15. He has finished his math homework, and only the last question has not yet been calculated.

16. On Sunday, I put on clean clothes and take off my dirty clothes.

17. Since you have great skills, you can't be proud.

18. Everyone's eyes were focused on the rostrum.

19. Polaris, Uranus, Mars, and satellites are all relatively famous stars in the Milky Way.

20. All the teachers and students of the school and the principal attended the New Year's Day together.

As the question is in the real cheap activity class, the teacher invited Xiaohu to the front to tell the story of Avanti, because Xiaohu has a bad voice, but he spoke very seriously, and the students listened very energetically. After Xiaohu finished speaking, the teacher was the first to first palm.

The earth is the common home of us humans and animals, and protecting the earth is our own business.

It should read: The earth is the common home of our humans and animals, and the protection of the earth is our own business for humans and animals.

The sentence of the sixth grade compulsory exam is as follows:

1. The production of cotton in China is now self-sufficient (definite and central.

The position is reversed and should be changed to "produced cotton").

2. He is one of the many victims who have been spared (since he is "spared", that is, he has not died, and he cannot be said to be "one" among the "victims"). ）

3. He sits there intently, listening intently to the teacher's lecture (redundant ingredients, delete "concentrated" or "concentrated").

4. The students all said that yesterday's activity was a pleasant day (remove one from "activity" and "day").

5. My sister is very anxious when she can't find her parents (is it "sister" who is anxious, or "Dad" and "Mom" who are anxious, or "Mom" who is anxious?) You can put a comma between "Dad" and "Mom", or you can put a comma before "Dad").

1. Improper word order.

For example: 1. China's cotton production is now self-sufficient. (The positions of the definite and central words are reversed, and should be changed to "produced cotton").

2. The full role of the vast number of young people should be brought into play. (Adjust the word "sufficiently" before the word "play" and delete a "of").

Second, improper collocation.

For example: 1. The spring breeze blows in bursts, the branches of the trees sway, and the moonlight and the shadows of the trees shake together, making a rustling sound. (If the subject-verb is not properly matched, "moonlight" will not make a sound.) ）

2. Since you're here, it's time for me to leave too. (Since "since" and "also" cannot be used together, the word "also" should be replaced by "just").

3. Incomplete or redundant ingredients.

For example: 1. Mr. Lu Xun created miscellaneous numerical essays in the struggle, which became a wonder in literature and art. (Missing subject, replace "created" with "created").

2. He sat there intently, listening intently to the teacher's lecture. (For redundant ingredients, delete "concentrated" or "concentrated").

Fourth, the structure is chaotic.

For example, students say that yesterday's event was a great day. ("activity" and "day" are removed).

Fifth, the meaning is unclear. (including ambiguity of reference and ambiguity of sentences).

For example: 1. The director, deputy director and other bureau leaders attended the commendation meeting. (It is not clear whether the leaders of other bureaus are leaders of their own bureaus or leaders of other bureaus).

2. My sister couldn't find her parents and was very anxious. (Is the "sister" in a hurry?) Or "Dad" and "Mom" are in a hurry.

Or is "Mom's Messy Silver" in a hurry? You can add a comma between "Dad" and "Mom", or you can add a comma before "Dad").