Taking notes has enriched my memory and increased my comprehension of revising sentences

It can be modified to: taking notes has enriched my memory and improved my comprehension.

The ** of the sick sentence here is the problem of improper collocation of the action verb "increase" and the object "comprehension".

"Increase" refers to an increase in quantity, but the comprehension here is an abstract thing and cannot be described by quantity, so the "increase" and "comprehension" here cannot be combined.

Here you can modify "increase" to "improve", improvement refers to the growth of ability, etc., and here it can be paired with "comprehension", that is: taking notes enriches my memory and improves my comprehension.

Original sentence: Reading not only enriches my memory, but also increases my comprehension.

Modified to: Reading not only increased my memory, but also enriched my comprehension.

Analysis of Shengbiqiao: It is an improper collocation. "Memory" should be paired with "increase", and "comprehension" should be paired with "rich".

Improper collocation of the modification of the sick sentence:1. Improper collocation of related words.

2. The definite sentence is not properly matched with the central word (subject and object).

3. Improper matching of moving guests.

4. Improper subject-verb collocation.

5. Improper matching of the host and guest.

6. Improper matching of dynamic supplements.

7. The adverbial is not properly matched with the central word (predicate).

8. One side and two sides are not properly matched.

Original sentence: Taking notes has exercised my memory and increased my comprehension.

Modified to: Taking notes has increased my memory and also exercised my comprehension.

Analysis: It is a misnomer, it should be "increase" memory, "exercise" comprehension, and just switch places.

Instead: Taking notes has increased my memory and also exercised my comprehension.

By taking notes, my memory was strengthened and my comprehension was exercised!

Just swap the word increase with exercise.

Add "not only" after taking notes

The sentence should be revised to read: Taking notes has enriched my memory and improved my comprehension.

The word "increase" in a sentence can only describe an increase in quantity, and the unworthy can be used to describe the comprehension of abstract things, so the action verb "increase" here and the object "comprehension" are mismatched. Improper collocation of predicate and object is also a common problem in sick sentences.

Here you need to replace the "increase" when modifying, and you can use "improve", that is: taking notes has enriched my memory and improved my comprehension.

Taking notes [improved] my memory and [enhanced] my comprehension.