10 Tang poems, write 100 words of evaluation

Xiju Liu Zongyuan.

I have been tired of the hairpin group for a long time, but fortunately I am in the south.

Idly adjacent to the farm, even like a mountain forester.

Xiao ploughs the grass, and the night list rings the brook stone.

Coming and going is not meeting people, long song Chu Tianbi.

In the fifth year of Yuanhe (810), when Liu Zongyuan visited the southwest of Lingling, he found that Ran Creek, which had been inhabited by the Ran family, and because he loved its beautiful scenery, he moved to Shidi and renamed it Yuxi.

This poem is about his life after moving to Yuxi. The gist of the poem is to say: I have been tired of being an official for a long time, but fortunately I have the opportunity to be degraded to this southern minority area, which relieves me of my endless troubles.

When he has nothing to do, he is adjacent to the farmland and vegetable garden, and sometimes he seems to be a hermit in the mountains and forests. In the early morning, step on the dew to plow the land and weed; Sometimes I would go on a tour of the mountains and rivers in a small boat, and I would not return until it was dark. Alone, unable to meet others, looking up at the blue sky and singing loudly.

On the surface, this poem seems to write about the leisure of Xiju life, but there is a lonely melancholy hidden between the lines. For example, the first two sentences are poetic and intriguing. The demotion of the official was originally an unsatisfactory thing, but the poet wrote with the opposite meaning, saying that he had been "tired" by being an official for a long time, and that he was "lucky" for this derogation of the Southern Wilderness, which was actually a bitter smile.

"Idleness" and "Occasional" are relative, and there is also an emphasis on leisure, "Idleness" contains the boredom of idleness, and "Even" shows that he does not really have the indifference and leisure of a hermit. It is also revealed here that the poet is forced to be leisurely. The charm of this poem is also in these places.

Shen Deqian said, "The songs of Yuxi are in a state of distress, and they make a clear and indifferent voice, do not complain and complain, complain but do not complain, and when they talk about it, they may encounter it from time to time." This discussion is very insightful.

The "100 lines" of the poem are not 100 words, nor are they 100 sentences, but only appear as the ranks and columns of writing.

In ancient poetry, each line, mostly a complete sentence, usually ends with a full stop, question mark, exclamation mark, and there can be different pauses in between, which is related to the metrical rhythm and has nothing to do with the number of words.

Modern poetry is different, some follow the rules of ancient poetry branching, and some are very arbitrary, they do not have to follow the rules of sentence reading, sometimes a word, or several sentences in a line.

No, you can't say a word in a line, you can't write a word in a poem.

1. Farewell.

Willow east wind tree, green and green sandwich the river. dao

Recently, it should be more parting.

Appreciation: The first two sentences of the poem are answered.

The scene not only points out the time and place of farewell, but also renders a strong parting emotion. "East Gate" named the place of farewell in Chang'an Qingmen, "Qingqing" indicates that the color of the willow is already very green, indicating that the time is in late spring. "Willow" is synonymous with farewell, so when you see willow, it makes people think of parting.

Green willow trees are interspersed on both sides of the river, and the seemingly tranquil environment reflects the poet's reluctance to part with his friends. And the first sentence is what you see from a distance, and the second sentence is what you see from a close view. In the sense of distance between distance and proximity, the figure of the poet sending friends to the long street is reflected, which sets off the feeling of being reluctant to say goodbye but having to part.

The last two lines of the poem are lyrical, and they describe the willows and willows through the side description of others' farewells, reflecting that there are many people who send them off.

The word "bitter" is not only the pain of climbing the willows and being inconvenient, but also the sorrow of parting. As for the poet himself, he didn't fold the willow but didn't mention it, which set off the poet's deep affection for farewell. The last two sentences seem to be bland, chewed carefully, and have a deep meaning, the poet folds or does not fold the willows, and the sadness in his heart may have reached the point of no return.

This farewell poem is as light as water, short and concise, and it reveals the deep affection of cherishing others. Throughout the poem, there is no mention of farewell but word by word, and the description is concise and impressive.