What kind of imagery can be used in an essay about hospitalization? 5

Waiting in the ward, the window of the ward, the patient next to me and his family, I was the only one.

Reasonable selection of imagery is one of the effective ways to quickly get rid of the blandness and turn over new ideas in the composition.

The ancients said: "The text seems to look at the mountains and does not like the flat." In recent years, many excellent essays in the college entrance examination often show strong family affection and friendship through the way of seeing things and thinking about people, and finally win high scores.

If you read these articles carefully, you will find that the reasonable choice of "things", that is, with the help of "imagery" to sustenance or express feelings, can paint more personalized colors for the composition, make the expression of emotions more vivid and delicate, and leave more aftertaste space for readers. For example, the beginning of the Fujian college entrance examination full-score essay "Soaking Chen Hawthorn": "When I was a child, I lived in my grandmother's house, and people there called it 'ditch', because it was too remote."

Like other rural children, when I was a child, I used to run barefoot in the mountains. My favorite thing to do with my friends is to find Chen Hawthorn in the woods. Now I can't find Chen hawthorn, which is different from other hawthorn fruits, the taste of Chen hawthorn is bitter and sweet, the taste of life.

I like to put my hand in the innermost part of the branch and pick those bright red and plump hawthorns, which are bitter. It's not that I like to taste the bitterness, but my grandmother's hands can make the bitterness sweeter and sweeter. "The article wants to show my grandmother's love and express my feelings of missing my grandmother, but the article does not write about my grandmother, but starts with picking "Chen Hawthorn", and then leads to the memories of my grandmother who fried Chen Hawthorn for herself.

The image of "Chen Hawthorn" makes the image of the grandmother more life-like and vivid, so that the emotional expression of the article is more gentle and delicate, full of true feelings, and it is more touching.

Another example is the 2007 Shandong Province college entrance examination full score essay "The Straw Rope in the Mother's Hand", the author is the choice of the "straw rope" this image to run through the whole article, in the difficult life of the mother in order for the child to be able to complete the school, day and night, the mother "that never stops hand" and "the upside down straw rope", become "me" never fade memory, accompanied "me" through the year after year. The image of "straw rope" is not only the clue of the whole text, but more importantly, it condenses the deep love of the mother, and also tells a sense of self-improvement, so that "I" will remember it for a long time. There are many articles that show mother's love, and there are many of them who write delicately, why this one can enter the field of vision of the marking teacher, and finally get the honor of full score composition, I think this is inseparable from the author's ingenious choice of imagery, perhaps it is this small straw rope that evokes the most distant and warmest memory in the heart of the marking teacher, so that they can relive the difficult maternal love.

In this way, the rational selection of imagery in the writing of narrative and prose can make the original ordinary emotional expression of the article glow with a different kind of poetic taste, just like an ink painting hidden in the depths of our memory, and there is always an indescribable beauty in the faint ink color, so how can it not make the reader's heart flutter?

I remember when I was a kid I used to play under this big tree, it was very tall and thick, it was a plane tree that had been around for decades. Now, whenever I come to summer, I think of the days when I listened to my grandfather's stories under the trees. Alas!

Grandpa has passed away for ten years, and I really miss him. I was in my hometown once recently, and everything changed. The tree is gone, and it's an open lot.

It's not about what to build, I really don't know how ** is planned.

Core imagery – my understanding, the main image created by an article. As a shaping image, it should have both form and spirit.

Yu thinks that truth is the life of prose. The famous writer said it well: "All living literature is realistic."

The reason why later Chinese people did not understand the 300 articles was because the later literature lost the spirit of realism, and the 300 articles were realistic. What is called 'realistic''This? Realism is realistic life, and literary themes are actual life.

Real literature is at the grassroots level, among the people. The life of prose lies in truth, which is a foundation. If the image is not real, it will be meaningless.

That day read the prose of the Soviet writer Baustovsky. The first thing I feel is real. By writing about people, plants and trees, and nature, they all reveal a strong feeling.

"The more a person knows, the more he feels, the tighter poetry surrounds him, and the happier he ......."He also said, "I don't know what grass grows in the glades and swamps, Sirius rises from **, what is the difference between birch leaves and aspen leaves, what wind will rain or drought, whether it will be cloudy or sunny......."Don't write a book. This is to emphasize that the writer should go deep into life and integrate into life.

The famous essayist Shan Fu said: Prose is a flower moistened by blood and tears, and good prose conveys the true temperament of the writer. The ancients said:

Writing for love", said Ba Jin, "take out the heart and give it to the reader." "Truth is the life of prose.

This is also the reason why prose is popular.

Nowadays, many articles are empty and have no meaning, or they are called article hollowness. It looks gorgeous, but in fact it looks like a lifeless model in a shopping mall. If everyone is talking about insincere empty words, lies, big words, clichés, and general words, ......It's better to read less of such articles.

Shan Fu said it well: "The love is the driving force of creation, whether it is inspired or done, it cannot be a pure rational attitude of indifference and emotion." Thoughts are extremely important, but thoughts without flesh and blood are pale.

Thoughts and feelings are always intertwined and penetrate each other. Truthfulness and sincerity are the bridge between the author and the reader to build a strong and beautiful relationship. ”

Spring imagery.

The river is flowing, the water splashes rise and fall, reflecting into my mind, the sun is so beautiful that the elf is sitting on the railing, the thoughts are longing, the brisk ** repeats over and over again, the remaining life of reality is like a painter's ink painting, The swallow suddenly comes and goes, affecting my thinking. Since spring, the flowers have bloomed, and everything is unexpected.

The flowers bloom in the village, the erhu vocal music rises from time to time, everything is normal, and I still walk on the road paved by that time.

Ephemeral. Ephemeral. It's as if everything is passing in time.

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Focus on solving the problem of students writing good essays. It is impossible to improve students' writing ability from all aspects, and we must cultivate students' writing ability in a scientific and orderly manner, so that they can write good compositions. 1. Neat handwriting (on the basis of the above requirements); As long as the student's writing is not off topic, has something to say, is clearly hierarchical, and the handwriting is neat, full marks will be given.

Training cycle: 10-30 exercises. 2. No typos (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 3. Smooth sentences (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 4. The content is specific (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 5. The details are appropriate, and the center is prominent (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 6. The language is vivid and can use a variety of rhetorical devices (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 7. Examine the topic with an idea and exquisite conception (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. 8. Prepare a title (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it.

Students can only practice the proposed questions, but do not need to write the full text. Training cycle: 20-30 assignments.

9. Open the "crested" (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it. Students can only be trained to write the beginning, not the whole text. Training Cycle:

20-30 assignments. 10. Knot "leopard tail" (on the basis of the above requirements); Students will be given full marks if they can do it. Students can only be trained to write the end, not the whole text.

Training cycle: 20-30 assignments. Evaluation system:

Adhere to the five principles of integrity, directionality, democracy, scientificity, and motivational performance, and establish an evaluation index system for students' composition level. Teachers must not be stingy and reluctant to give points. Each essay should be scored in at least 60% of the students, or even 100% of the students.

Fully mobilize students' enthusiasm for writing, cultivate their interest in writing, and cultivate their enthusiasm for writing, so that every student wants to write, competes for writing, and enjoys writing.

The leaves are yellow, and the chrysanthemums are blooming, autumn.

Since the girl walked lightly

Ying's footsteps came to us. In my eyes, autumn is a season of abundant harvests. Autumn is a harvest season.

The fields were full of yellow and bright gold, like gold paved with the ground. The cotton is white, the soybean grains are full, the sorghum is red, and the rice is smiling and bending... Uncle Farmer is busy harvesting with joy! What a mesmerizing sight!

In my eyes, autumn is another colorful season. In the orchard, the fruit is abundant, and the persimmons on the persimmons are like red lanterns; The apples are red, like the cute faces of children; The bunches of purple and green grapes are huddled together and whispering! The red agate-like dates are also hanging all over the branches... It's making people salivate.

In my eyes, autumn is like a naughty child, it has replaced the green trees with gold, and the golden leaves are swaying in the autumn, as if they are singing briskly, and they are whispering, they are pouring out the joy of autumn! I love autumn in my eyes!