Find a teacher and change a little poem Hehe

Angel Yuhan: How did you change the forehead, it seems to be getting worse and worse.

I'll be realistic. Your poem has a clear structure but the words are not beautiful enough, so you should read more extracurricular books

You should have belonged to the hazy poetry school, but some of the imagery is too realistic, such as: "the lyrics of all evil are brought to the classroom", and "grandma, you have eyes in heaven", the irony or feelings in the poem are not strong enough, the effect is not enough, these have to be changed by yourself, let others change it, and the poem will become tasteless.

It's not bad overall, but the choice of words and sentences and skills are not enough, I'm also a hobbyist, non-professional, and my advice can be referred to casually.

Teacher, you are a red candle that illuminates us, but you shed tears in your heart.

Teacher, you are a gardener, turning our ignorant saplings into towering trees with green trees little by little, and this tree planter is tired and bent over.

Teacher, this word, sacred and solemn.

It's a familiar read.

Please allow me to say a letter to you Liangsui:

You've done a great job!

To the teacher. In spring, you are a small grass, igniting the greenery of the earth with vitality.

In summer, you are a green shade, comforting the sweaty with shade.

In autumn, you are the fruit on the branches, delighting the world with the harvest.

In winter, you are a spring under the snow, silently moistening the earth!

You are the industrious gardener, our venerable teacher!

Tailor-made for you, your teachers will also feel gratified when they see it. Believe in my strength, absolutely.

The teacher is like a red candle that ignites the torch in the hearts of the students, but burns itself until the red candle turns to ashes.

The teacher is like a gardener, nurturing our flowers, but working hard until his physical strength is exhausted.

When we grow up, we must become the pillars of the country, ah! Teachers are so selfless!

Yes! Teacher, we love you!

Teacher, it's hard work.

Who is it that brings the ignorant into the spacious classrooms and teaches us a wealth of knowledge?

It's you! Teacher!

With your hard sweat, you have nurtured the young seedlings that have just broken through the soil in spring.

Who is it - put the naughty us.

Educate people who are considerate and helpful to others?

It's you! Teacher!

Your care is like a warm spring breeze.

It warms our hearts.

Who is it - put the young us.

Cultivating into a mature and sensible teenager?

It's you! Teacher!

Your protection keeps us healthy.

It bears fruit in the golden autumn season.

You've done a great job! Teacher!

People who work hard in the sweltering heat and cold.

You've done a great job! Teacher!

People who dedicate their youth to nothing.

We salute you very much!

You've done a great job, teacher!

I can only help the teacher here.

Teacher, you are like the drizzle in spring, moistening the flowers and irrigating the earth, and we are sucking the drizzle and growing.

Teacher, you are like a breeze in autumn, blowing the yellow earth, calling for gold, and we have obtained the fruits of a bumper harvest.

Teacher, you have lit the brightest light for me on the dark path of my life;

Teacher - on my misty road of life, you are my guide;

Teacher - In my stumbling life, it was you who showed me the way forward;

Teacher, you gave me a pair of powerful wings to swim in the world of knowledge!

Modern poems are still ancient poems, or are they written in imitation of a poem