How to write a good essay describing scenery

People often observe and describe the scenery in a "fixed-point" position, which is far from enough. The scenery is colorful and varied, even if the same thing is expressed, the foothold and angle are different, and the appearance and effect are also different. As the observation point changes, completely different scenes will come to you, and a variety of scenes will be presented in front of you.

Therefore, it is necessary to combine fixed-point and mobile observation. For example, in the writer Lao She's article "Winter in Jinan", from the fixed point to the change of scenery, that is, from the city to the scenery after the snow in the mountain villages outside the city, at different observation points, the different unique scenery of Jinan in winter is described. Writing about the city from different angles, that is, from the perspective of looking down on Jinan under the sun, from the perspective of looking up, writing about the mountain scenery dyed by light snowdrops.

In this way, the overall sense of Jinan's beautiful scenery is highlighted, which vividly reproduces the characteristics of Jinan's "warm and sunny" in winter.

The combination of fiction and reality, when "real writing", it is necessary to appropriately "virtual writing". For example, the article "In the Rain" has such a scene description:

The water-drenched road, like a glittering ribbon, floats gently in the green shade of early summer. Passing vehicles are like boats shuttling in the waves." The author associates the "road" and "vehicle" in front of him with "ribbon" and "boat", and this kind of virtual and real scene makes the described scenery more vivid.

Another example: Zhu Ziqing's article "Spring", from the orchard full of fruit and flowers, I thought of "as if the trees were already full of peaches, apricots, and pears". This kind of transformation from reality to fiction creates a new picture, making the scenery more magical and beautiful, and making the realm of the article dig deeper.

For example, in an article entitled "Evening", the author writes about the top of the mountain, the trees and the Wanghai Pavilion shrouded by the sunset, which are "quiet", while the clouds fluttering above the Wanghai Pavilion are "moving", they "look like people for a while, like dogs for a while, then become a galloping jujube red horse, and then become a rooster with a crowing neck......The little author combines dynamic and static descriptions, static beauty and dynamic beauty complement each other, and the sunset is described as very lovely.

The combination of shades, for example, Zhu Ziqing's prose "Spring", the author first grasps the characteristics of spring mountains, spring water and spring days, sketches in a simple stroke, and vividly outlines the outline of the spring scene. Then the spring grass, spring flowers, spring breeze, spring rain and spring greeting pictures were thickly smeared.

In order to highlight the warmth, aroma and pleasantness of the spring breeze, first write "like a mother's hand caressing you" with the help of the sense of touch, secondly, write "the smell of the newly turned earth", "the smell of grass" and "the fragrance of flowers" with the help of the sense of smell, and finally write the "crisp" and "wanzhuan" chirping of birds and the "loud" piccolo of the shepherd boy with the help of the sense of hearing. In this way, from many aspects, the invisible and colorless spring breeze is written soundly, vividly, and wonderfully moving.

Observe carefully, observe from the aspects of color, shape, and dynamic, and ensure the layering and logic of the description, and then the technical rhetoric or something, and make more analogies and metaphors, and write static as dynamic.

Very simple. Grasp the shape, color, texture, sound, smell, etc. of the scene. With sight, hearing, touch, smell. To perceive. Grasp the characteristics of scenery at different times and places. Observe life.

And use a variety of rhetorical devices, writing methods.

Writing scenes makes the narrative more exciting.

What do you think is the purpose of writing scenes in a narrative?

The general role of writing scenes in a narrative text:

1. Explain the background of the story.

2. Render the atmosphere of the environment.

3. Set off the character's psychology, character, quality, etc.

4. Promote the development of the plot.

Bixue Lake essays, written from early morning, noon, and evening, describe the sun slowly rising from the horizon; , the sun shines on the earth with warm sunlight, and the lake water is crystal clear; At noon, the rainbow appeared, and the small grass and trees by the lake were covered with small crystal clear water droplets, which also dripped into the lake from time to time, and the lake water was set off by the sunset and rainbow; Then it began to rain, and the branches of the willow tree beside it reached into the water; The Sun Dou also hurried home, and in this way everything on the earth was washed in the rain again, while enjoying the sun; It was extraordinarily peaceful. ‍

Orientation order. Writing scenery essays should be organized in an orderly manner, from near to far, from far to near, from top to bottom, from bottom to top, from inside to outside, from outside to inside, or from the middle to the periphery, etc., in an orderly manner, with clear priorities and proper details.

2. The category of the scene. to write, such as mountains, water, flowers, birds; waterfalls, stones, peaks, caves; Pavilions, platforms, pavilions, etc. Write about the light, color, and taste of the scene; It is necessary to write not only about its static, but also about its dynamics, and also about its ambient atmosphere.

3. Observe carefully, grasp the different characteristics of the scenery in different seasons to describe, don't make things up, and write with your own imagination.

4. You can also write about some people and things in the scene, if you let people, scenes, and things blend together to write, you can make the composition more touching.

5. Don't forget the relationship between yourself and the scenery when writing the scenery, and consciously write your own feelings and feelings, so that people will have a sense of immersion after reading the tomb.

6. Appropriately and correctly quoting the poems and songs of predecessors describing the scenery can also add color to the composition. This requires you to read and accumulate more often, and don't wait for the time to find it.

Spring returns to the earth, all things recover, willows and flowers are red, warblers sing and swallows dance, ice and snow melt, spring water dingdong, flowers blooming, and birds contending: swallows and warblers are symbols of nature's spring, and "Yanyu Yingsong Earth Spring", this sentence expresses the coming scene of spring.

The grass is still green in spring", this sentence indicates that although spring has passed, the earth and even all scenery are still green symbolizing spring.

Trumpet is one of my favorite flowers, not only because of its beauty and delicateness, but also because of its perseverance.

In June last year, I found a few flower seeds in the flower bed of the community, so I came up with the idea of planting flowers. Because I didn't know what kind of seed it was, I planted the seed in a small bowl and watered it, hoping to grow up well and grow up healthy!

Spring is the time when spring returns to the earth, when all things recover, willows and flowers are red, warblers sing and swallows dance, ice and snow melt, spring water tinkling, flowers blooming, and birds contending.

Walking in a part of the park in the morning, smelling the smell of many willow branches that have just sprouted, lying on the grass, soft. The grass has just emerged from the hard soil, and it can't wait to enjoy the first sunshine of spring.

The grass was bright and green, and it quickly took off its coat. And as the weather changes, it turns green vigorously, and there will be many butterflies flying on the newly blooming flowers, flying and playing to their heart's content, which is really wonderful!

The grass came out, tender, green, covering the whole world, and everywhere was a tender green. Playing on this piece of tender green, the wind is light and quiet, and the silver grass is soft.

The flowers appeared, gaudy, beautiful, clustered together, fighting for each other. In this gorgeous piece of nectar, the flowers are fragrant, and the bees and butterflies are noisy.

The wind is blowing, softly, softly collecting all kinds of fragrances, brewing in this spring breeze. In this fragrance, there is a bright shouting and fighting voice, the birdsong is clear, and the flute is melodious.

The light rain began to fall, dense and thin, moistening how many living beings, and the leaves and grass all smiled. In this spring rain, the umbrella is propped up, the houses are sparse, and the rainy night is quiet.

Look, the children in the city and the countryside have all run out to welcome the spring! Look, kites big and small are up and flying! Look, how many people are greedily enjoying the happiness that spring brings to people!