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1 China's grain production can be self-sufficient for a long time, which is very difficult for a large country with a population of one billion, which is inseparable from the great contribution of scientist Yuan Longping.

Food production can be self-sufficient in the long run"If the combination is improper, it should be changed to: The grain produced in China can be self-sufficient for a long time.

2 An article by a reporter of a certain newspaper on the forced eviction of a place and the infringement of the interests of the masses annoyed the local people, and they actually sent public security personnel to the newspaper office to detain and summon the reporter, and the fundamental reason was that they abused their public power to make trouble.

The fundamental reason is that the abuse of public power is making trouble", and the sentence structure is mixed, which should be: the fundamental reason is the abuse of public power, or it is the abuse of public power to make trouble.

4 The drug and food supervision department of our province has begun to classify and manage the food production enterprises in the province according to the integrity level, and the number of bad records will directly affect the integrity level of the enterprise.

The province's food production enterprises are classified and managed according to the integrity level" The order of the adverbial words is improper, and it should be changed to: "According to the integrity level of the province's food production enterprises for classified management".

The correct order of multiple adverbials is generally as follows: a prepositional phrase for purpose or cause, b word or phrase for time or place, c adverb for mood or prepositional phrase for object, d word or phrase for expression or program. In addition, the prepositional phrase that indicates the object should generally be immediately before the central language.

In order to avoid being eliminated in the fierce social competition, more than 100 teachers in our school have to strengthen their learning.

There are two ways to change the previous sentence:

In order not to be eliminated in the fierce social competition, the teachers in our school should strengthen their learning.

In order to avoid being eliminated in the fierce social competition, the teachers in our school should strengthen their learning.

Note: "More than a hundred" feels redundant because there is a "both" at the end. In addition, the first change reads more fluently.

In order to avoid being eliminated in the fierce social competition, the teachers of more than 100 of our schools have to study hard.

1.For example, Zhang Tong said: "I must insist on long-distance running. ”

Change: Zhang Tong said that he must insist on long-distance running exercise.

2.For example, my sister said, "You're right, I'll do it with you." "Royal code change: my sister said I was right, and she did it

3.For example, the old squad leader said that he did not complete the task and did not take care of us.

Change: The old squad leader said: "I didn't complete the task and didn't take care of you. ”

4.My mother said to me, "I'm going to have a meeting today, and you cook your own food." ”

My mom said to me that today she had a meeting and I cooked my own meals.

5.Teacher Zhang said to Xiao Ming: "In this matter, you wronged Xiaohong. ”

Teacher Zhang said to Xiao Ming, which Xiao Ming (he) blamed Xiao Hong for this matter.

It was revised as: 1. Through extensive publicity and effective work, with the joint efforts of the citizens, the sanitary situation in the central urban area of our city has been fundamentally changed. (Improper word order).

2. Some scholars believe that the main reason for the phenomenon of Chinese-style road crossing is that there are more traffic lights. ("More settings" is not properly matched).

3. Walking on the gray Teng Schiller grassland in Ulanqab, everyone sees the meadows with abundant water and grass, the white sheep, and the shepherds singing long tunes. (The original sentence is not properly collocated: "walking on the gray Teng Schiller grassland in Ulanqab" as the subject, and cannot be matched with the following "make the verb".) ）

Thanks to the joint efforts of the citizens, through hard work and extensive publicity, the sanitary situation in the downtown area of our city has been fundamentally changed.

Some scholars believe that the main reason for the phenomenon of Chinese-style crossing is the large number of traffic lights.

Walking on the gray Teng Schiller grassland in Ulanqab, everyone can see the meadows with abundant water and grass, the white sheep, and the shepherds singing long tunes.

b is wrong.

After discussion, everyone agreed that whether we can make major breakthroughs in chip manufacturing and other fields determines whether we will still be "stuck" in the future.

Item A is correct, B c d is incorrect.

Item B: "Make a big breakthrough" is a good side, and "whether it will still be" is a two-sided word, one facing two sides of the wrong word.

Item c "This" refers to unclear whether it is a matter of plagiarism or an apology.

D: The "approximate" and "left-right" divisors are repeated.

This sentence is obviously a sick sentence, and the sick sentence is actually where there is a problem, generally speaking, there are some improper words, repetition, lack of subject-verb-object, or misplacement, or the wrong use of related words, and the wrong use of related words. And the landlord proposed this sentence,It shows that it is a repetitive question,One by one and each although the meaning is different,But they all belong to measure words,Can not be used at the same time,Modified after the following two answers。

2. The experts carefully measured the sound of each Zeng Hou B chime.

It's okay to change the guilt if you're very sorry, and the disease is called complete, and you can change your discomfort or whatever.

Modify it with the modifier symbol! Put the second lineSure enough, it was changed to butInThe covenant is replaced by a recovenant. (I feel that the overall difference rate should still be there

Xiao Yu asked me to go to the gymnasium on Sunday morning to play basketball. But on Saturday I caught a cold, and although I took medicine immediately, I was still not very well the next morning. I felt very sorry and ashamed, so I had to call ** to cancel the agreement with Xiao Yu; Xiao Yu said repeatedly

It's okay, it's okay, we'll make an appointment next week." She's such a sweet friend.

Good luck).

Neurotic, there is something wrong, the third watch shouted for help in the middle of the night, the doctor said that there was nothing wrong with him, it turned out to be a neuropathy.

"Sure enough" was changed"But""We'll make an appointment next week" was changed to "We'll make an appointment next week".

I remove it immediately or immediately, and I do not remove it, and everybody removes it, and I excerpt it and I change it to a habit, and I remove language, and I make it up for richness.

Modify the sentence for example: Today I went to the park to play, and I saw a beautiful boat floating towards me.

Like a clumsy duckling twisting and crooked......

My brother had just learned to walk and was crookedly walking towards meI saw him throw himself into my arms like a drunken man with his hands in a gesture of surrender and his little toes on his tiptoes.

Oh my hen! I know this question, but I don't know how to express it!

Sentence type: improper collocation, improper collocation of population increase should be revised as: We believe that a large number of other surnames changed to the surname Li, which is the main reason why the surname Li became the first surname in the Tang Dynasty, which also laid the foundation for the rapid increase in the number of people with the surname Li later.

I think it should be changed to the following: we believe that the large number of people with the surname "Li" who did not have the surname "Li" changed to the surname "Li", which was the main reason why the surname "Li" became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty, and it also laid the foundation for the rapid increase in the population of the surname "Li" later.

We believe that the large number of other surnames changed to the surname "Li" is the main reason why the surname "Li" became the largest surname in the Tang Dynasty, which also laid the foundation for the rapid growth of the population with the surname "Li" later.

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Changed to: We believe that a large number of other surnames were changed to the surname "Li", which was the main reason why the surname "Li" became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty, which also laid the foundation for the rapid (promotion) of the population with the surname "Li" in the future.

A large number of other surnames were changed to the surname Li, which became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty. Sentence components are mutilated. It can be changed to: a large number of other surnames are changed to the surname Li is one of the reasons why the surname Li became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty.

There is nothing wrong with the previous sentences, they all make sense, in the last sentence"This is also for ... Lay the foundation for rapid improvement", the "yes" should be removed from this sentence.

Be... The following is generally used as a noun or adjective, and laying the foundation should be a verb, for... What to do, it's better to match it like this.

So it's good to remove the last sentence.

I think it should be changed to this: we believe that the large number of other surnames changed to the surname "Li" is the main reason why the surname "Li" became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty, and it is also the basis for the rapid increase in the population of the surname "Li" in the future. (Rapid increase changed to rapid increase).

We believe that the main reason why the surname "Li" became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty was that a large number of other surnames were changed to the surname "Li", which laid the foundation for the rapid increase of the population with the surname "Li" in the later period.

In the last sentence, delete the word "is" in the words "this is also".

Words are repetitive, sparse and sparse, and the stars are randomly removed.

The "yes" in the last sentence can be removed, and you can read it several times when changing the sentence, and it will be smooth.

In the deep mountains of northeast China, privately developed earth coal cellars are dotted everywhere.

Modify the sick sentence, explain that as long as the sick sentence is modified, it should also be renamed, and we will pick you up when the time comes.

We consider a large number of surnames.

Some surnames were changed to the surname Lee.........

We believe that a large number of other surnames have been changed to the surname Li, which is the main reason why the surname Li became the number one surname in the Tang Dynasty. This also laid the foundation for the rapid growth of the population surnamed Li later.