Write 50 sick sentences and 5 sentences to revise the sick sentences

Inappropriate type:

1. The hall was full of spectators. Modified: The hall was filled with spectators.

2, Xiao Ming's action of sacrificing himself to save others touched the surrounding masses. Modification: Xiao Ming's act of sacrificing himself to save others touched the surrounding crowd.

Improper matching:

2. Under the education of the teacher, he clarified his learning attitude. Revision: Under the teacher's education, he corrected his attitude towards learning.

Ingredient defective type:

1. Everyone must pay attention to good habits of hygiene. Revision: Everyone must develop good habits of paying attention to hygiene.

2. My brother likes to play basketball and football the most. Modified: My brother likes to play basketball and soccer the most.

1. China's cotton production cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

Modification: The position of the definite and the central language is reversed, and it should be: The cotton produced in China cannot be self-sufficient for a long time.

2. The vast number of rural youths have shown incomparable enthusiasm for socialism.

Correction: The adjective "incomparable" is misplaced in the position of the adverbial and causes a sick sentence, and the "incomparable" should be placed before "enthusiasm".

3. In the cause of socialist construction, the broad masses of intellectuals should play a full role.

Modification: The adverbial "sufficient" is misplaced in the position of the definite sentence and should be placed before the word "play".

4. If we don't work hard to do a good job in our own domestic affairs, then it will be difficult for us to have a say in the international community.

Modification: The negative adverb of the "no" sentence should precede the word "put".

5. If you don't check the farming work as soon as possible, you will not be able to hoe well in front of you.

Amendment: "No" should be moved before the word "take advantage of".

The tree is tall and short. Modified: The tree is tall and thick.

1.The Young Pioneers played into the revolutionary tradition.

Revised: Young Pioneers carry forward the revolutionary tradition.

2.Summer in the Little Khing'an Mountains is so beautiful.

Modified: The Little Khing'an Mountains in summer are so beautiful.

3.As a result of the study, everyone's general consciousness has been raised.

4.The two old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

Modified:The old and new societies are really a stark contrast!

5.We need to develop our own interest and level of writing.

Revision: We need to cultivate our own interest in writing and improve our writing skills.

There are many fruits and flat fruits here.

The teacher and I went to visit the hospital. Changed to: The teacher and I went to the hospital to see the sick classmates.

Mom bought a lot of fruits including pears, cucumbers, watermelons, peaches and grapes.

The shortest sentence: 1The little girl is happy; 2.He laughed genuinely.

Bar Partition: This is because it can accept a lot of things either...

The teacher and I went to visit so-and-so in the hospital.

1. The improvement of people's quality today determines whether the country is strong or not. ("whether" is changed to "of") 2, *** always motivates us. 3. Although history has a lot of things to memorize, it also increases our knowledge.

And" is replaced by "but").

4. Even at the last minute, don't give up! (Delete "avoided") 5. When I walked into the museum, I felt very luxurious. (changed to "I think it's luxurious") 6. Looking at the bottom of the flower pot, I didn't even find a small bug.

7. My mother always taught me not to talk to strangers. (Delete one for "always" or "often").

8. I basically finished all my homework. ("Basically" or "all" delete one) 9, he left without leaving a note for his mother and calling **. (Change "and" to "or") 10. The swimming pool is being renovated, and it should be absolutely possible to go swimming soon.

Absolutely "delete)".

My family is Shanghainese. Remove people.

Xiao Ming is a good student. (It should be added as excellent, otherwise, Xiao Ming is really not a good student).

Xiao Ming is an excellent three-good student.