For the fifth grade essay, you have to change 400 words

Xuanxuan read so many teachers' suggestions and understood that it was best to write three things in an article, so that the article would be fuller, so after finishing her homework in school, she recalled what happened between her and Qingqing and added some content. It's just that she still doesn't want to change the fourth paragraph, so I won't force it anymore. I hope you can make a better suggestion, please!

Revision: Good friends.

I have a good friend named Qingqing, and she is in the third grade at Mingzhu Elementary School. Qingqing is tall and very slender. She spoke slowly, like a little adult. She looks so fashionable in her clothes!

Qingqing loves to help people very much. I remember one time, we were playing together. I'm riding a little bike, humming a little song, and I'm happy!

Suddenly, with a "poof" I fell, and so did the car. Qingqing hurriedly helped me up, and also helped the car up, and asked me with concern: "Xuanxuan, are you okay?"

When I listened, my heart warmed. She is such a helpful sister.

Every time I finish my homework, I go to Qingqing's house to play. She has a lot of silkworm babies at home.

Looking at the cute silkworm babies, I wanted two, but I didn't know Qingqing--- I asked hesitantly: "Sister Qingqing, can you give me two silkworm babies?" I didn't expect Qingqing to say:

Okay! But don't put the baby silkworm under the sun, it will die. It likes shaded places, you know?

I can't (especially) say how happy I am in my heart, Sister Qingqing is so good!

Yesterday afternoon, Qingqing and I went to play in the small garden. When we got there, we played for a while, and our bodies were very itchy, and there were a lot of small bumps, and it turned out that there were a lot of small grass mosquitoes there (this is what my mother told me later). We hurried back to our home, and my mother saw it and hurriedly smeared some cool oil on my body, and it stopped itching after a while.

I ran to Qingqing's house again to see if Qingqing's body was still itchy? She said, "It's not itchy anymore, I smeared some wind oil essence."

We don't want to go there again! "I had a lot of fun playing with her!

I like my good friend Qingqing very much because she is very nice to me, just like an older sister. Mom said that good friends should care for each other and help each other!

Original: Good friends.

I'm sorry, but I think only I can really understand myself, and I can't understand anything else, so I should write it myself. I suggest that you read some essays about describing characters so that you can improve your writing skills.

"If a person is not a sage, who can be without fault? After that, it can be changed, and the good is great! Therefore, in order for a person to be successful, it is important to correct his own shortcomings.

As a teenager, Franklin was an arrogant man. One day, he suddenly realized that he was so arrogant, how could he become a talent in the future? So, he listed all his shortcomings on the wall.

I used them to spur myself every day, and I crossed out one every time I changed one, and in the end, he got rid of all his shortcomings, became an amiable person, and was finally elected as the first in the United States.

To correct shortcomings, we must start from small things, start from reality, how can a person who is willing to correct shortcomings not be popular with people? When he corrects his shortcomings, he is on his way to success.

Pele showed a talent for playing football as a child, but he had a deadly vice: smoking. However, between football and smoking, he resolutely chose the former, because he knew that smoking would affect his performance on the pitch and it was his physical strength that decreased.

So, he quit, and in the end, he made a great achievement in the football world, and became a role model for future generations.

If he chooses to continue smoking, won't he give up his future? It is precisely because of the bad habit of smoking that Pele has achieved his current achievements.

In our study and life, if we want to make progress and succeed in our studies, then please get rid of our shortcomings and bad habits, because they are all stumbling blocks to success.

This incident is unforgettable for me.

Childhood memories are like pebbles paved on a path, and the largest one contains one of my most memorable events.

Last year, for some reason, my grandfather got an incurable disease, and gradually lost weight, unable to eat, unable to drink, and even had to be helped to go to the toilet. Grandpa's life is no longer able to take care of himself. This kind of disease makes the family uneasy every day, and they wash their faces with tears, for fear that grandpa will suddenly leave us and pass away.

One Friday night, my dad took me and my mom to my hometown in a car, and I rushed into my grandfather's room, followed by mom and dad. The whole family gathered around Grandpa's hospital bed, a doctor in a white coat was taking Grandpa's pulse, and the room was so quiet that even the sound of everyone's heartbeat could be heard. Suddenly, the doctor showed a surprised expression, which made everyone more nervous, and the room was even quieter, it was the doctor who broke the quiet scene, and only heard him say

This is the first time I have seen his condition, the pulse of his hand is not beating, but he still has his last breath left! "When my family heard this, they all said that my grandfather's last breath was left to see my mother and me! After listening to the family's discussions, I ran up and hugged my grandfather, and hot tears flowed down my face.

In the end, Grandpa fell asleep forever in this quiet night.

This unforgettable event will forever be engraved in my heart, and I love my grandfather.

1, year. Month.

In the morning, with a loud cry, I came to this splendid world, and my life took on its own personality.

I, one"Optimism".I'm notoriously mischievous. For this reason, my parents gave me a nickname-"

When I was a child, I was a quiet child, and I liked to run around the house, rolling and crawling on the ground. As a result, I became the naughty standard in the eyes of my relatives and elders, and if I commented on any active child, I would say:"He's, like.

That's naughty! "

I, a chatterbox. As soon as I opened my mouth, I couldn't close it. When I eat at home in the evening, I am always the protagonist of the conversation at the dinner table, and I have to be at that time every day"pour"Make a basket of words. But after talking for a long time, I haven't had time to eat a bite of food.

I, a boisterous person. Because of my cheerful personality, I am especially keen to make friends. On the first day of junior high school, I couldn't bear to be lonely, so I simply took paper and pen everywhere"Interviews"A new classmate in the class.

In just one day, I got to know half of my classmates"Collect"I made a lot of new friends, which laid a foundation for me to adapt to my new life in junior high school.

I, one"Bookworms".I usually have nothing to do"Leaky reeds gnaw on books"It's my day"Compulsory"!by me"Nibbled"There are countless books, if which books"Taste"Great, I'm going to go again"Nibble"It's a few times.

Ask me exactly"Nibble"It's hard to say what kind of books: literary works, popular science books, science fiction **......Even in the newspapers"Tofu cubes"articles, I'm going to go"Try it first".

See! That's me - with short hair, glasses, and a mischievous smile all the time. Yes, this is me, naughty me, lively me, happy me, unique me!

One of my biggest faults is carelessness. For example, in one unit math test, I wrote 40+90 as 1300, and in the Chinese test, I wrote the vertical hook as vertical and the dragonfly as qing. Although my parents often reminded me that sometimes my stern father would gently slap my little hands, they did not change it.

Just two days ago, when I was writing my summer homework, there was a math application problem, and I was asked how many apples there were, but when I counted how many peaches there were, I counted how many peaches there were.

When I went to school yesterday to get the notice, I saw that the final exam was 96 in Chinese and 96 in mathematics, although I became a "three-good student", I knew that I didn't get better grades because of carelessness. Teacher Shen commented on me like this: You are a smart and lovely little girl.

Diligent and studious, quick thinking, active speech, unity with classmates, love of labor, especially gratifying, your language sense can be quite good, if you can get rid of carelessness, the teacher believes that your results will be more happy.

When I got home, my parents patiently said to me, "See, the teacher also pointed out your carelessness, so when and how are you going to change it?" "I thought that when I was doing a question, I often read it in a hurry and thought it was simple, and I wrote it as soon as I wrote it, and I ended up with a lot of mistakes, so I said:

As you usually say to me, develop a good habit of being serious about everything, and when writing homework, read the questions carefully, write the font properly, and think more when you encounter problems. "It's good, but what if you can't change it? "You give me a vacation, if I haven't fixed this problem, you can cancel the trip with Shenyin, okay?"

Mom and Dad agreed, and Mom and Dad pulled the hook as a reassurance.