Classmates, I want to say to you that the beginning of a good essay should be good

Tsubasa: Three years of time are fleeting like meteors in the sky. They brought me a lot, and before I could sort them out and remember, they were already gone with the wind. They are like spun yarns, slipping quietly between the fingers, leaving no trace.

Tsubasa, do you remember, that fall, we met? I will never forget the red leaves in the maple forest, and your smile looming behind the maple leaves. At that time, you said to me that you like to see the falling maple leaves, and you like the beauty of withering.

Now, I'm back in the maple forest again, and it's still full of red leaves, and I'm still me, but without you.

The falling flowers are intentional, and the flowing water is ruthless.

Tsubasa, you shouldn't forget that winter night, right? At that time, we heard that there was a meteor shower, and the two of us climbed to the top of the mountain in high spirits and waited for the meteors. Finally, the meteor shower began, but you didn't look at it, said to me"Heart, do you know why I like shooting stars?

Because they are free to wander in the sky without any constraints. And we, on the other hand, can only carry heavy burdens and move towards a road with no end in sight. There was darkness all around.

I don't remember how I did you then. At that time, I was very surprised. I didn't expect you, who are usually optimistic, to say such things.

Perhaps, there is an unknown corner in each of our hearts. When night fell, we hid in that corner, and no one could recognize us.

I still remember that time, the only time you were scolded by a teacher in front of the whole class. The teacher said:"Tsubasa, why do you use a pencil every time you take exams and write homework, are you so unconfident in yourself?

Later, you wrote on your blog: People who write with a pencil are not unconfident in themselves, but they can see more clearly than others, and nothing in the world is immortal. Everything will eventually fade away like a pencil print that slowly fades away......

Three years of green years seem to be a flick of a finger.

In the blink of an eye, the time of parting has arrived. For the first time, we made a choice that could change our fate. A month later, we received notices from different schools.

That afternoon, we met in the maple grove where we met. In the height of summer, there are no fallen leaves that you love. We didn't say anything more, we said something precious, and went our separate ways.

Haitian who puts the ice wheel full, melancholy and parting, don't say that it is divorced, but there are always tears on a good night. I should only see each other again, that is this life, but I am in this life, and I remember you when I was just worried.

After reading it, I smiled bitterly. I wrote on my own blog: Gathering and scattering is in a hurry, this hatred is endless, and this year's flowers are better than last year's red. It's just that next year's flowers are better, who do you know with?

Yes, next year's flowers will be more brilliant, but Zhu Yan has changed. Our sorrow is just a drop in the ocean in a long life. You and I wave our sleeves and say goodbye to the clouds of the past!

Good luck. Heart.

Yes, in the medical park, a lot of people use it.

Writing ideas: select materials to establish the center, choose authentic, credible, fresh and interesting materials, and express them profoundly.

Everyone loves to discover because discovery is a kind of happiness. What I discovered was not the mystery of nature, but the beauty of a classmate.

My classmates' essay begins (2).

She is an excellent student. But she will not be proud, if she can't ask the question shamelessly, ask classmates who have worse academic performance than her.

My classmates' essay begins (3).

I vaguely remember that the beginning of our fate was because of the division of the school, and we were destined to be together in the dark. We sat very close at first, just ordinary classmates.

My classmates' essay begins (4).

Those who are familiar with our four (1) classes know that all the students in this class are full of personality. Indeed, you see that Xiao Hu loves gossip, Xiao Zhang loves to be cool, and Xiao Ji loves to eat ......But when it comes to making mistakes most frequently, it has to be Xiao Yao.

A short little man with a pigtail, a round face with a pair of big watery eyes, and a look of aura and wisdom in his eyes. She is the little --- Zhao Xuan in our class, my classmate.

: There was a man who shared with me when I was happy; When I'm sad, give me comfort. It's such a person who has accompanied me through X years of life. Looking back, I felt that this was a lingering memory.

Classmates, there was once a poem called: Confidants in the sea, if the end of the world is next to each other. I think this sentence must be a testament to our strong friendship.

Ten years later, let's meet at Peking University and Tsinghua University! I can't forget you, this is my lifelong vow.

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The first type: the wheel of time has accompanied me through the spring, summer, autumn and winter x years (how old you are to write as many years), growing up in the gradual walk, losing the former self in the gradual walk, meeting so many people, encountering so many things, but there is always that person who makes me unforgettable.

Second, there was a man who shared with me when I was happy; When I'm sad, give me comfort. It's such a person who has accompanied me through X years of life. Looking back, I felt that this was a lingering memory.

I want to say to you, classmate.

xx is my classmate, and here's what I said to her.

Hello! XX, here I want to say to you: "Thank you! ”。Because, every time I get sick, you will always give me ** and greet me as soon as possible. Every time it happens, the greeting never changes.

You know, I'm cowardly, and if I say it to your face, my face will be as red as a ripe apple, and my mouth won't be able to say that word anyway. Therefore, I can only express my heartfelt gratitude to you by writing letters, that strong gratitude, that inexhaustible, inexhaustible thanks.

xx, I still remember that some time ago, my stomach hurt so badly that my head was sweating, my hands were shaking, and it became very difficult to hold my pencil steadily. It was you who found out about my situation, and then, it was you who helped me call my parents, and helped me to send me to the school gate and hand me over to my parents, so that you could go back to school with confidence; When I get home from school, the first thing you do is give me **, and I hear your gentle greeting, "Excuse me, is Kiki better?" The voice was full of anxiety and concern, my eyes suddenly moistened, and my heart was warm!

Your greetings contain such a touching friendship that cannot be expressed in words.

I still remember that once, I was sick for seven days in a row, cold, fever, vomiting and diarrhea, you would call my home every day after school, asking "Is Kiki better", when you heard that I was not very good, your voice would reveal a trace of sadness and worry; When you hear my better, your voice is full of joy and surprise! I am really touched by your care and thoughtfulness towards me!

xx, I want to say to you: I really thank you so much! Thank you for taking care of me and thank you for your sincere friendship with me!

Good luck with your studies!

Classmate, I want to say to you Classmate, I want to say to you, classmate, I have always wanted to give you some opinions, but for the sake of face, I have not been able to say it. Taking advantage of this opportunity to write an essay, I will bring it up, hoping that you will accept it and correct your shortcomings. In the class, you are considered a poor student.

Every day, you will always skip your homework, and you will always be seen hurrying to make up your homework when you read in the morning. Especially in English, when the group leader reports to me every day who has not handed in their homework, even I, the representative of the English department, are anxious for you: homework is the best way to consolidate and test the knowledge you have learned in a day, and if you don't write homework every day, it will be harmful to your learning!

Thinking about it in the third, I finally mentioned it to you, but in exchange for only a roll of your eyes and a sentence of "none of your business". I was so anxious that I suddenly became angry, and swore that I would not care about your business, whether you didn't hand in your homework or go to class without books, I would treat it as if I hadn't seen it. Time flies, and in a blink of an eye, the final semester is here, and the final exam is approaching us.

The English teacher decided to "help one" activity, so that a good student can help a poor student, and if the poor student improves, the good student can also get extra points. The student I got was actually you, and when I remembered that"If the advice fails, he will be revived"I was furious. But the teacher's order could not be violated, so I had to nod and agree.

In the afternoon, I still had mixed feelings to make up for your lessons, and it was strange that you listened attentively to my lectures in a naughty manner. I was so happy that I was very energetic. When I was done, I was about to leave, only to find that you grabbed a classmate by the collar and yelled at him to do the homework I had just assigned for you.

I was so angry that the blood all over my body rushed to my head"How can you do that! How can you be worthy of me who has worked so hard to give you lectures?

Hum! What do you have to work for! Give me a lecture, isn't it because I have improved and you can get extra points?

I won't improve, see what you do! "Looking at you with a wicked smile on your face, I almost fainted. Classmate, how can you do this?

Remind you to concentrate on class, write your homework carefully, and work hard to make up for you, for whom? It's not for you! But what did I get in exchange?

It's scolding, it's ridicule. What good is it for you to go against others in this way? You don't listen to the teacher, and you don't listen to me to make up the lessons, what's the benefit?

What do you do with your final exams? What will you do when you grow up? Are you happy to see your classmates pick up satisfactory exam papers one by one and find satisfactory jobs, but you have achieved nothing?

Classmates, I really hope you can listen to my opinion and change it! Stop going against others, stop being naughty, listen carefully in class, go home and do your homework carefully, and be a good student.

Get straight to the point.

Straight to the point, it is a straightforward pen to cut the topic, the general leader of the whole article, and the outline.

For example, at the beginning of Zhu Ziqing's article "Back": "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and what I can't forget the most is his back."

Another example: the beginning of the student's assignment "Life Needs Laughter": "Laugh and laugh, ten years less", life needs joy, life needs laughter ......

The straightforward beginning of the two articles and the direct entry into the topic will make it easier for the center to stand out, and it will be easier for the reader to grasp the essentials, grasp the content, and have a deep understanding of the topic.

The beginning of the description of the scene.

The description of scenery can render the atmosphere and promote the development of the plot; You can foreshadow the plot and derive the following.

For example, the natural environment is described at the beginning of "Post Road Pear Blossom": "Mountain, such a big mountain!"

The rolling green hills, one after the other, stretch into the distance, disappearing into the confused twilight ......This renders the far-reaching and confused atmosphere in the Ailao Mountain, which plays a good role in setting off the touching deeds of helping others in the frontier later.

At the beginning of "The Golden Hat", "On the clean blue sky, a dark cloud sneaked in, and the wind pushed it up the mountain", the scene here hints that rain is coming, which makes a good preparation for the following umbrella.

Poems, lyrics, aphorisms, etc.

For example, at the beginning of the student's assignment "Life Needs Frustrations": "How can you see a rainbow without experiencing wind and rain, and no one can succeed casually", on the road to success, it is not smooth sailing, and hardships and setbacks are indispensable.

The student's work "Grass" begins with Bai Juyi's "Grass" as the beginning: "Leaving the grass on the plain, one year old and one withered." Wildfires burn inexhaustibly, and the spring breeze blows and grows again......

Here the little author cleverly quotes the lyrics, and the beginning of the poem not only adds to the vividness of the article, but also plays the role of the literary eye.

Lyrical opening method.

This kind of opening language often expresses some kind of emotion, or praise, or sadness, or excitement, or joy, ......In the lyrical process, many rhetorical devices are also often used.

For example, at the beginning of the article "Spring", "I am looking forward to, I am looking forward to it, the east wind is coming, and the steps of spring are near." At the beginning, the author uses repeated anthropomorphism to express the author's strong feelings of looking forward to spring.

Another example: the beginning of the student's assignment "I Love Autumn": "The four seasons of the year, the purple and red of spring, the green branches of summer, the abundance and fullness of autumn, and the silver wrapping of winter, are all like a picture scroll, but I love autumn more", so the beginning not only writes the characteristics of the four seasons, but also cleverly expresses the author's unique feelings for autumn.

Engage readers to ask questions.

At the beginning of the essay, asking questions can not only summarize the following, but also attract the reader, arouse the reader's curiosity, and make the reader eager to read the following.

For example, at the beginning of the Mid-Autumn Festival chapter of "Autumn Soul": "Have you tasted autumn? What does it taste like? Autumn colors begin: "What color is autumn?" ”

The student's assignment "Beauty" also begins with the words, "What is beauty?" ”

Such a question-like beginning is concise and clear, and the following is logical, expressed from different angles, which not only expands the ideas, but also attracts readers.

Friends are so sincere, friends are so cute, friends are so much love for me, thank you today I will help you write it down.

I believe that our friendship will be very beautiful and will last forever.