The unbearable score is like a ruthless executioner s composition

It was a simple game, but it stuck with me.

I vividly remember that summer, the cicadas, still singing stubbornly, and the weather was so hot. There was an unsettling smell in the air.

The teacher asked us to write down our five favorite people on a piece of paper. It sounds simple, but I'm hovering over the names. Is that him?

Is that her? At the urging of my teacher, I almost reluctantly wrote down my thoughtful five words - Mom, Dad, Grandpa, Grandma, and Uncle. "Cross out a name, kids, it means he never existed.

The teacher's voice, which usually sounded gentle and kind, now sounded as hard and cold as iron.

When my pen stops in front of the names, the past rushes to my heart like a tidal wave. If it's crossed, it doesn't exist? So where are those happy memories in my heart?

I want to cry. My pen fell, like a cruel executioner, mercilessly, with a knife falling in my hands. I crossed out my grandfather.

The moment I put down the pen, my heart trembled, and in front of my eyes, my grandfather's loving smile ...... appeared"Now, let's row one more! The teacher's voice rang out again mercilessly.

No, don't! Now I realize that everyone around me is so difficult to let go, I can't live without you! The tip of the pen wandered in front of one name after another, and tears, at some point, crawled all over the face.

Sobbs rang out in the classroom. I sobbed quietly and chose grandma. The moment I put pen to paper, I felt as if I was back in my grandmother's warm embrace ......

Tears flowed into the mouth, salty, and it was the tide of feelings. There was a sudden emptiness in my heart.

No one continues anymore, no one dares to continue anymore. Me too, I'm afraid of losing. When I crossed out these names, it was as if I had crossed out my happiness, my love, and the meaning of my life.

In the classroom, there was a terrible silence, but the teacher's merciless voice continued: "Don't stop, this is what you must face!" ”

Yes, we have been in this game since birth, and sooner or later we will have to face the loss of our loved ones. But at this point, I was in tears and no longer put pen to paper. I want to cherish every word I have, just as I cherish every loved one they represent.

Maybe that's what the teacher wants to tell us through this game!

That time, I learned to cherish family affection

A person cannot overestimate himself and underestimate himself, and if he underestimates things, he will not be able to do well.

Me and the "desperate line" at the same table Wen 603 Pan Yilu.

This morning, after the first class, I was hurrying to do my homework. Suddenly my leg hurt, and it turned out that Li Ping's leg at the same table touched me. She must have done it on purpose, so I saluted her back.

And so a kicking war broke out. The two of us fought fiercely for six or seven minutes, and the class bell rang, so we had to take a truce. I saw her take out the eraser and draw an imprint in the middle of the table, announcing that this was a "desperate line" and that no one could exceed this line in ......the future

Li Ping's endurance is not as good as mine. That day, I made an exercise paper, and the teacher asked the same table to correct it, and Li Ping wanted to cross the "desperate line" several times to get my paper, but she still withdrew her hand. "Do you two exchange test papers?

The class didn't have a swap between the two of you! It seems that the teacher has given an "ultimatum". So, I folded the test paper into an airplane and flew to the opposite side, Li Ping couldn't bear to fold the test paper like that, so she flew the test paper directly, only to see the test paper fly into the air, and then it fell leisurely on my desk.

The teacher gave her a blank look and began to talk about the ...... of the test papersHee-hee, I've won a big battle in this battle.

The smell of gunpowder between me and Li Ping is getting stronger and stronger. I always threw the paper dump in her seat and said to her, "I'm sorry, I accidentally threw the garbage over, and now I can't go beyond this 'desperate line', so please help me throw it away!"

At first, Li Ping had to help me throw it, but then she got smart and threw the paper ball back, saying, "Isn't this back to you?" "From now on, if you stare at us for half an hour, you will see many little white balls flying between us.

On this day, Li Ping didn't bring an eraser, and asked people everywhere to borrow an eraser, I couldn't stand it, so I threw half an eraser there, who knew that she threw the eraser back like throwing a paper ball, and kindly said: "Be careful of overstepping the line!" ”

Hey, it's hard to wipe this "desperate line"!

Instructor: Cui Jie.

It was thought that the ruthless facts would make Galileo lose face, but now the ruthless facts show that the great philosophers like Aristotle are not all right.

Practice brings true knowledge, and the truth is often in the hands of a few.

Know that practice is the only criterion for testing truth.

This is all from the first half of '08 and can't be found.

If you want to use flowery language, it is useless to just look at it as a document, and you should try to read the article as well as possible. You have to be able to read and think at the same time. while thinking.

To read a good article, you have to read it three times. Read it well for the first time and understand what the article is about. Understand the main idea of the article a second time and see what techniques are used in the article.

The third time go through some of the more important sentences in the article and see what you can learn from the article. After reading, you can also write about your feelings after reading or write an essay in imitation of the article. Stick to it for a long time, and your writing level will improve by leaps and bounds.

Yu Qiuyu's Prose is good.

If you want to improve your composition, you should read more extracurricular books.

It is necessary to read more documents, read them thoroughly, and understand them.

Be able to apply what you have learned.

Yu Qiuyu's Prose".

1.It's useful, but you can't memorize the language, you just have to memorize the story, so that your idea will be easier, and there will be more material.

2.Yes, but it is more important to write and be sure to write more. Moreover, you can't just read the book once, with the exception of boredom, it's best that you fit into the story, like you're the main character, so it's more resonant and shocking.

3.Language: There are many compositions with full marks in the middle school entrance examination, and there are many quotations of poetry.

4.Read more books, you can't memorize the material, so you don't understand and don't have a deep feeling, you don't feel what you write, how can you ask others to have feelings?

5.No!!! I've been making stories since I was in sixth grade, and now that I'm older, there's a certain amount of truth in my fabrication, but in general, we're not big, we don't have a lot of experience, so that's why I'm going to memorize this story, so that it's easier for you to have ideas, and there's more material.

Yes. Of course, the more celebrities, the better, and teachers love those.

6.And of course, that's not all, but mental depictions are very important for a character. Whether it can succeed or not depends on your description, personal opinion. Because I'm only in the third year of junior high school, I feel the same way.