English correction, if it s the queen of the fairy, come to help!

Change to try: why not, followed by the verb archetypal surf to (in)surfing spend time in doing sth

Change to things : many modify the countable noun to change to while: This question is not a transition but a juxtaposition, and the actions are carried out at the same time.

Change to a :useful The first phonetic transcription is not a vowel, so the indefinite article A is used

not （try） to finish your homework first every day and then spend a little time (surfing) the internet.

ll find many other (things) that are also very interesting such as visiting cool websites.

the latest news (and) listening to the music.

m sure you'll become (a) useful person in the future.

It's all changed in parentheses for you.

And I'll tell you about it.

Spend plus doing sth

why not add verb primitive.

And that's the only one that's important, and you can just take a look at the rest.

Still satisfied.

why not do sth=why don't you do sth

surf-->surfing

spend +time+ doing

2. things

The front is many other, so the back + plural.

There is no turning point between the two things before and after 3and.

try why not do sth.

things many + plural.

and are tied.

The first note of a useful phonetic transcription is not a vowel.

many-much

but-and

some-any

sisters-sister

is-are

Hope to be able to help the landlord.

1) After toughs is wrong, tough means "difficult, tough" is an adjective, when used as a noun is "rough person, **", so it cannot be used here. It can be changed to "hardships".

2) The end of the term "endure" means "to give, give, give", which is not very appropriate here, and can be changed to "endure" (endure, endure, endure, tolerate).

Changed to has has a lige-long

Changed to an. the stage 1.On stage 2Be an actor.

in the stage. stage, in. Period, here it means in high school, so the original text is correct.

the best use of,is the deformation of make good use of(make good use),remove the insertion in the first place,make is connected to the must,so make is the original form,so the original text is correct。

It is followed by an singular number, so minute is right, so the original text is correct.

8.In minute plus to, this is a match to make good use of sthto do sth: to use something to do something; And you look at the sentence make and get, these two verb forms are placed directly here, which is not grammatical.

There is a "common" meaning, which itself has the meaning of an adjective, so there is no need for deformation, so the original text is correct.

Changing to and, to understand the meaning of the sentence, this sentence means: our common goal is to go to university, and studying hard can help us achieve academic success. So there is no turning relationship, but a progressive relationship.

change important to more importantly.

in, yes. Included, here it means to include, so remove in.

Changed to whatever

Add SOriginally, it has the meaning of "future, future", and the first sentence mentions future success, and there is future development later, so the original text is correct. If you encounter this kind of unsure when correcting mistakes, you can see if there is a similar form and collocation in the previous article, because it is impossible for an article to have three or four identical mistakes for you to revise.

Changing it to as is syntactic to changing a comma to that.

visit--visited

warmly--warm

them--us

what--how

or--and

had picnic lunch--had a picnic lunch

told--telling

Sorry, I can only find these few errors %>

The tense is not right, absolutely, I can change it for you, but you have to tell me, what tense you want to use.