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Look at this poem and write it by comparison. Use your brain a little bit too. It can definitely be written.

The water surface of a rainy pond is flat, and the mirror is lightly polished.

The east wind suddenly danced with the weeping poplars, and made a sound of ten thousand hearts.

The rain stopped, the wind stopped, and the weeping willows by the pool were verdant. Suddenly, a gust of wind rose, and thousands of willow branches fluttered. The willows seem to know, wash away the dirt in the wind and rain, and dance in the wind in joy. When dancing, a body of water droplets was shaken off and sprinkled on the lotus leaves in the pool, and there was a clicking sound.

After a heavy rain, the pond is full of water and very calm; The clear surface of the water is like a gently polished mirror, reflecting the reflection of the houses on the shore. Suddenly a gust of east wind blew, the long willow danced with the breeze, the rain on the trees was shaken down by the wind, sprinkled onto the pond, and the lotus leaves made a crackling sound

This poem shows the reader a picture of the pond after the rain, from the east wind, weeping poplars, lotus flowers and other objects written in the poem, the background is spring, therefore, more precisely, it is a picture of the spring scene of the pond after the rain, giving the reader a beautiful artistic enjoyment.

The first sentence shows the static beauty of the spring scene on the pond after the rain. The first sentence describes the calmness of the pond surface after the rain, and only faintly says the word "flat". If you only read this sentence, you will feel that it is too ordinary, but immediately after this sentence, it is followed by "light grinding mirror to shine on the eaves", but the realm is suddenly out.

The word "light grinding" is quite interesting. The giver is the spring rain, the recipient is the pool surface, the pool surface washed by the spring rain is like a mirror that has been gently polished and wiped, compared to the comparison, and the comparison has an anthropomorphic person, which makes the vulgar metaphor of "water like a mirror" have a fresh feeling. It can not only make the reader feel the unusually calm and clear state of the pond after the spring rain, but also can further associate the light and soft posture of the drizzle with the breeze blowing on the surface of the pool.

Light grinding mirror to shine on the eaves", creating an artistic realm that is not the pond after the spring rain. In line with this, these two sentences are gentle, and none of them are unclear, and even the word "light grinding", which is slightly driven and slightly careful, is also as literal, giving readers a light psychological feeling, which seems to be unfocused.

Three or four sentences move from stillness, further writing the dynamic beauty of the pond after the rain. The east wind suddenly rises, dancing the weeping poplars by the pool, blowing down the raindrops on the soft branches and thin leaves of the weeping poplars, and sprinkling on the lotus leaves stretched in the pool, making a crisp and dense sound. Here, the poet's pen ripples with the east wind, the dancing weeping poplars, and the 10,000 voices of the lotus heart, all of which have a flowing rhyme and full of business, which is not interesting compared with the first two sentences.

Along with this, the rhythm of the speech also changed from flat to rapid, and the words flew up. The word "suddenly" first creates an abrupt trend, showing the instantaneous change of the scenery from static to moving, giving people a strong sense of movement; Later, the word "change" is used as a echo to create a rapid melody, so as to connect the above-mentioned tangible and intangible, dynamic and harmonious scenes, forming an artistic picture with both form and sound.

Moving: Cliffs, stone crevices, spring water and rainwater mixed together, down the slope, into the mountain stream, the sound of trickling water into the thunder. Sometimes the wind blows through the clouds, and you can see the Nantianmen at the bottom, and the shadows are full of shadows, towering on the mountain.

In our lives, there are some scenes that seem to be stationary, such as fields, mountains, small bridges, houses, etc. We say that these are static scenes. Some of the scenery seems to be moving and changing, like floating clouds, flying birds, babbling water, waving flags, etc.

We say these are things in motion. When writing scenes, we should not only pay attention to depicting static scenes, but also write dynamic scenes.

How do I write about a static scene? The first is to write concretely, that is, to write the location, shape, size, color, etc. of the scene. The second is to write in a still and moving manner.

Some scenes are static for a long time, lacking movement and vitality, and we can use anthropomorphic or figurative techniques to write them very lively. For example: "The rows of tall and straight willows, like tall and powerful soldiers, stand neatly and majestically on both sides of the road"; "The sunset shines on the canal water, half green, half red, green like flawless jade, red like a burning flame" and so on.

For a dynamic scene, it is necessary to write about the state of the scene's activity or development. Like the rising red sun, the trees that keep changing new clothes in the four seasons, and the thawing rivers ......All are full of life and energy. With the change of time or the change of observation angle, we need to write about the different states of the scenery in succession, and draw a living picture.

Consider the author's description of the citrus of his hometown: "In spring, the orange tree stands slim, stretching its dark green, oily branches and leaves, looking from afar, like a girl in green. In late spring and early summer, the orange trees bloom, and clusters of tiny white flowers are hidden among the green leaves, making it difficult for people to find, but the wisps of fragrance that come out make people love to smell more and more.

Soon, the flowers were gone, leaving small fruits slightly larger than rice grains, flat and green. Later, the oranges grew and became slightly darker. At the beginning of September, the oranges grew about the size of the rim of a shot glass.

Smell it, a strong orange fragrance refreshes people's hearts, so people can't help but want to pick one and taste it. Here, the little author writes about the growth process of citrus in chronological order, from spring to autumn, from flowering to fruiting, vividly depicted.

For example, in the lesson "Bird's Paradise", the author writes that he and his friends passed through the "Bird's Paradise" twice and saw different scenes: the first time focused on the big banyan tree at dusk, quietly "lying" on the river. The second time I wrote about the activities of the birds in the morning, some chirping, some flying, and some flapping their wings, which was very lively.

This is how dynamic and static are contrasted.

There are many kinds of flowers in the world, such as: magnolia, moon flower, rose, plum blossom, chrysanthemum, junzi orchid, camellia and so on. However, the flower with the most flowers and the most abundant colors is the sunflower.

As the saying goes: "Good flowers don't bloom often". Sunflowers are also good flowers, with red, yellow, white, purple, crimson, orange ......The petals of the sunflower are single-layered, shaped like plum blossoms, with red and black filaments with yellow dots on the core.

The stems of sunflowers are long, thin, soft, and curved. Its branches are very thin, the leaves are dense, and the flowers are quite numerous.

Sunflowers bloom only when they see the sun, and every day when the sun rises slowly in the east, the sunflowers scramble to open their smiling faces. When the breeze blows, Sunflower "shakes its head" and seems to be reciting poetry, and seems to nod to pedestrians. The bones of the sunflower are red and the size of a soybean.

Unlike other flower bones, they are short and round.

The flower seeds of the sunflower are surrounded by a few small leaves. The flower seeds are as big as sesame seeds, and when the small flower seeds are ripe, they are scattered in the arms of the grandfather of the earth, and after being moistened by the sun and rain, they can grow and bloom more beautiful sun flowers in the second year.

Static is his every move, showing that everything here is very.

In April, the catkins on the streets are flying all over the sky, as white as snowflakes, and it is a good "solution to the flying snow and the sun and the moon". We chase the flying catkins like chasing the dreams in our hearts. A piece flew in, and I couldn't help but reach out to pick it up, soft, soft, gently, like a gentle wind blowing on my face, very comfortable.

Looking closely, the layers of flower spikes are composed of delicate small flowers, each of which has four drop-shaped petals, two in a group like a pair of lovely wings, which looks more beautiful and elegant against the backdrop of green leaves. Close your eyes and take a deep breath, just like in a sea of flowers, when the wind blows, the wisps of fragrant fragrance are sent far away......(Lilacs).

Cacti grow in sandy soil, unlike other plants that grow on my way. The sand is very dry, so why does it survive? It's spirit!

It is a spirit of unremitting self-improvement and tenacious struggle! In the desert, as long as it rains a little, then the cactus ball will not hesitate to seize the opportunity, work hard to grow, burst out of amazing vitality and motivation, it is by this spirit that it can survive! (Cactus).

Bamboo is a common plant, and although its branches are not very thick, they are very tough, and they are constantly broken. Therefore, bamboo has been loved by people since ancient times. Some people praise bamboo as "humble bamboo, there are thousands of bamboos"; Someone also wrote a poem specifically for bamboo: "Insist that the green mountains are not relaxed......And bamboo is also an important member of the "Three Friends of the Year"!

Because the appearance of bamboo is very beautiful. One by one, the bamboo knots, the slender and long bamboo leaves, evergreen all year round, full of vitality, bring people a kind of beauty enjoyment. Therefore, bamboo is not only the object of praise of poets and writers, but also the object of many painters' brushes.

Bamboo) small petals, thin and strong branches, a faint pink white, wrapped around the fragrance of the body. It is a flower that blooms proudly in winter, a flower that looks more pure white in the snow, and a flower that cannot be suppressed by snowflakes. Yes, that's plum blossoms.

A flower that stands proudly in the winter snow. In May, the season of spring and summer. The sun is shining, and the sun is shining.

Spring flowers and magnolia flowers have just bloomed, small buds have emerged in the moon season, strings of pink peach blossoms, green grass, all of this, as people say, yes, I also agree, spring is indeed a season of recovery. She gives people the feeling of tender green, light green, boundless green, and in summer, the green is deeper, it is emerald green, and the green is deeper. (Flowers).