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Here's an excerpt from the Notre Dame Cathedral environment:

The sun was just rising, the sky was shining, and all the towering buildings of the city of Paris, such as the spires, chimneys, and gables, seemed to be burning at the same time.

The sleepy city was empty, and all kinds of sounds were wafting around. The morning breeze tore clumps of white floc from the mist of the hills and threw them into the sky, driving them all the way to the east.

How peculiar the corner of the house was, like a low and filthy dark cloud, mottled and chaotic, and the moon went in and squeezed it to pieces, like an egg yolk thrown from a cracked eggshell of pure filial piety.

The whole of Paris is intertwined with light and shadow, and light and shadow are swaying. Some of Rembrandt's paintings take such backgrounds.

Excerpts from the depiction of the environment are listed below:

1. Looking up at Tianhu Mountain, I saw the sapa green mountains, the lush trees and the blue sky, and the ethereal clouds just constituted an elegant and interesting light ink landscape painting.

2. White snow, I love you, I love your purity. You have decorated the earth with a silvery white, and how beautiful you have dressed the earth.

3. There is a pavilion on the edge of the meadow, and the yellow cypress tree next to it has begun to shed its leaves, and the withered yellow leaves are like dancing yellow butterflies when the autumn wind falls from the trees, falling in the grass, as if sheltering the grass from the wind and rain. Next to the yellow cypress tree, there is a small-leaved banyan tree, still so green, as if it is not afraid of the cold at all.

4. Longshou Rock rises thousands of feet from the ground, the dangerous peak stands upright, the strange stone is phosphorus, a huge cliff stands upright, the other piece crosses it, straight into the mountainside of Tianchi, the momentum is like the head of the dragon, the momentum is extraordinary.

5. The distant mountains and mountains are confused and confused, looking forward to it, there are countless moths flying and shaking among the thousands of mountains and ravines, the world suddenly became gray and white, and the first excavation of the mountains and forests and a snow quietly and silently came all over the world.

Environmental depiction refers to the depiction of the specific social environment and natural environment in which the characters live.

Among them, the social environment refers to the buildings, places, furnishings and other scenery that can reflect the characteristics of society and the times, as well as folk customs. The natural environment refers to the scenery in the natural world, such as seasonal changes, wind, frost, rain and snow, mountains, rivers, lakes and seas, forests and fields, etc. Since 2015, suspense and reality have been added to the detailed environmental description.

Types of environmental depictions

1. The natural environment.

The most basic description of the environment.

The description of the natural environment includes: the time, place, season, climate and scenery of the characters' activities, etc., which plays an important role in expressing the identity, status, and actions of the characters, expressing the mood of the characters, and rendering the atmosphere. Zheng buried in the composition of elementary school, junior high and high school mainly plays a scene to explain and borrow, and can also be used for transition.

Second, the social environment.

Introduction to the era and background description of the characters.

The characteristics of social environment depiction refer to the description of a specific era background and the living environment of the characters. The scope of its description can be large or small, from the whole society and the entire era, to a family and a dwelling. The content of the description can be the interior furnishings, local customs and the atmosphere of the times.

The description of the social environment should be changed with strong regional characteristics.

Third, the details of the environment.

Advanced description, psychological suggestion is better.

It is more detailed than the description of the natural environment and the social environment, appearing in suspense and reality. The description feels more realistic, and it is also crucial to describe the details of no less than 300 to 700 words through space**, and to bring in the plot factor.

In reality, the details of literary language are portrayed through the real environment** (more realistic like the character description, which generally appears in the script and the rotation), and in the suspense theme**, it is mainly aimed at the detailed description of the scene of the investigation and chasing**. All in all, the stronger the sense of substitution, the greater the reader's response.

The environment is described as follows:

1. The moon is gradually rising, and she is dressed in a white gauze dress, demure and serene, gentle and generous. Her silver platter-like face, through the willows, left a gentle smile.

2. I saw a row of weeping willows from a distance, the willow silk had just returned to green, and the green shadow was like a layer of green yarn shrouded in the plum blossoms behind the willow trees under the breeze, which was very beautiful.

3. On the grassland after the rain, wildflowers are blooming, like a freshly soaked flower turban, and even the dewdrops are colorful!

4. A continuous plain, stretching out under the sky, without hills, as calm as the sea on a calm day.

5. The boundless plain is flat, and the vast and unbelieving brother is like a huge dark green jade disc, vast and vast, and the spirit is breathtaking.

6. Clear sky and bright sunshine. The spring girl was so sunburned that her eyes narrowed. The new green leaves, the mist and light smoke of the fields, like her garments. With the pace of her spring, the green grass broke through the ground, and she was about to stand up on her feet.

7. When the sun first appeared, I walked along the river to the village, and the faint clear mist, so moist and wet earthy smell, kept plopping on my face and burrowing into my nose.

8. The wind in the valley carries a heavy coolness, driving away the white mist and swinging down the mountain. And the shadow of the mountain peak, which fell on the village more quickly, grew thicker and thicker, and gradually blended with the night, but soon it was again silver-gray by the moon!

9. The dusk of late autumn always comes quickly, before the moisture evaporated by the sunlight on the mountains and fields dissipates. And the sun went down into the western mountains.

10. In the second half of the autumn night, the moon has gone down, and the sun has not yet come out, leaving only a dark blue sky. Sleep on everything except for the night tour.

The beautiful sentences of the environmental description plus the analysis are as follows:

At that time, in Nanjing, I had just begun to remember some bits and pieces, and there was often a beautiful countryside in the picture, I quietly walked away from the adults, sitting alone on the grass, and the sycamore leaves began to fall and fall, and many mysterious beauty fell into my heart together. I was suddenly confused, and my little mind could hardly bear the excitement. I picked up a fallen leaf in such a daze.

The leaves are yellowish-brown and curved, like a boat carrying dreams, and on the side of the boat there are two beautiful sycamores. Every gust of wind, I shuttle through the rain of fallen leaves, picking up sycamores from the ground. There must be a sycamore or two that I haven't picked up sprouting in that meadow, right?

Twenty years later, I can still hear the distant west wind, and the falling leaves in the wind. I can still see the boats carrying dreams, sailing in the grassland, sailing in the hope of a seed.

Resolution

This text expresses the love for the sycamore leaves with beautiful brushstrokes. The onomatopoeia of "簌簌" is vivid and expressive, allowing the reader to guess the scene as well. "Mysterious Beauty" writes the characteristics of the autumn sycamore, mysterious, graceful, sycamore leaves are full of infinite charm and beauty in the author's eyes, extremely infectious.

Using metaphors, the form of sycamore leaves is vividly depicted. The author described the color and shape of the leaves, and at the same time compared the leaves to a boat, and there was a boat side when he put it on, and the plane tree on the side of the boat made everyone who read the dan be fascinated and wanted to see this beautiful plane tree. The author has a rich imagination and expresses the beauty of autumn to the fullest.