Seeking the Water Margin after reading the two points .

What is the secondary two point ......How long.

"Water Margin" is one of the four famous works in our country, its content is written about the social darkness at that time, the corruption of the government, the collusion between the local ruffians and the government, the oppression of the common people, the officials forced the people to rebel, and the peasants were forced to burst out of their own strength and go to the road of resistance. The plot of the story describes the ups and downs, and the characters are vividly portrayed, which is a masterpiece of a generation.

The storyline in Lu Zhishen's Havoc in the Wild Boar Forest and "Lin Jiaotou Fengxue Mountain Temple" depicts that Lin Chong was assigned to Cangzhou at that time, and was almost killed by two servants. I thought it was very safe, but the imperial court asked Lin Chong to take care of the mountain temple outside Cangzhou City, and Lu Yuhou and others also secretly followed him. In the mountain temple, it was snowing heavily and the wind was blowing, Lin Chong wanted to buy wine to keep his body warm, and on the way back, he occasionally heard Lu Yuhou and Fu'an designing a trap to harm himself, and finally Lin Chong was forced to kill them.

The plot arrangement of Wu Song's fight against the tiger is also very ups and downs, and there are many plots like this in the Water Margin.

The characters emerging in the Water Margin are also lifelike and have their own characteristics, Lin Chong turned out to be the head of the 800,000 forbidden army of the government, and he began to obey it, and was finally forced to go to Liangshan; And Lu Zhishen has the heroic spirit of seeing the road uneven and drawing a knife to help, he killed Zhen Guanxi with three punches; Shi Wengong will call for wind and rain; Song Jiang has strong leadership skills, Li Kui is brave and courageous, Lao Tzu is the first in the world, Wu Yong is resourceful, and everyone has different personalities. But they all have a common characteristic - that is, they talk about righteousness.

After reading the fifth chapter of the Water Margin, it is really gratifying, and I admire Lu Zhishen's wit and courage even more, and the noble quality of being enthusiastic about helping others. This time it is written about Lu Zhishen's courage and courage again, and the road is uneven, and the rescued person is a weak woman. In the dark society of that time, robbers were rampant, and the government was corrupt, women were the weakest group, and they were easy to become victims.

Lu Zhishen couldn't accommodate himself after making trouble with Buddhism, and was recommended by Elder Zhizhen to go to Xiangguo Temple in Tokyo to ask for a background, and encountered this incident on the way, with Lu Zhishen's situation at that time, he could completely ignore this matter, because he didn't solve the matter of his own life, but Lu Zhishen is Lu Zhishen, and when he encounters such an injustice, he has to take care of it, and he will manage it to the end, even if he loses his future because of the unevenness of the road. In the process of teaching Zhou Tong, it also reflects Lu Zhishen's wisdom, which makes me really admire, he is not as reckless as Li Kui, but he carefully designed a trap by himself, so that he can not only teach Zhou Tong a lesson, but also not affect other innocent people, and beat the robber Zhou Tong who bullied men and women, I not only feel comfortable and happy when I see this.

Not bad! The process in between is impressive, and it is all your real feelings. The heaviest thing in one hundred and eight generals is "righteousness", I think it would be better to write "righteousness" after saying "filial piety"!

There is also a fly in the ointment that the beginning is too rigid and there should be some innovation. For example, he wrote about how much influence the Water Margin had in history, and criticized the corruption of feudal society. You can also write a poem as a beginning, noting that some rhyme.

List a poem: One hundred and eight heroes gathered, and told the government to crawl away.

Heaven and earth are not afraid of ghosts and gods, and heroes are full of righteousness!

Some places are a bit repetitive, such as There are many people like this, like... That's not great, if you're willing to wait, I'll help you fix it tomorrow, but overall it still looks good, just modify the subtleties.

I would venture to ask, what grade are you?

I'll be straightforward, the idea is good, but not specific enough, not vivid, should be combined with their own reality to talk, so that the introduction of the connection, but the 5th grade is not bad.