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"Back" appears four times in the article. The first time is the beginning of the article, and the opening point is the topic, so that a strong emotional atmosphere envelops the whole text. The second time is in the farewell scene at the station, the author made a specific description of the "back": the fat body, wearing a black cloth coat.
In a dark green cotton robe, he walked with difficulty, and staggered across the railway to buy oranges for his son. This scene shows the father's deep affection for his son, which moved "me" to tears. The third time was after the father and son said goodbye, "I" watched the father's back disappear in the crowd, parting with feelings, and tear-jerking.
The fourth time is at the end of the article, when "I" read my father's letter, my father's "back" resurfaced in tears, and my longing could not help myself, echoing the beginning.
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The full text of "Back" can be divided into three parts:
1. The first part (the first to the third paragraph): I miss my father, and the most unforgettable thing is his "back", which is the beginning of the topic.
2. Part 2 (4th to 6th paragraphs): Reminiscing about the past, recounting the scene of parting with his father at the station, and expressing the sincere feelings of his father's beloved son.
3. Part 3 (last paragraph): Write about my father's thoughts after saying goodbye. It ends with the reproduction of the "back" in the tears, directly expressing the deep nostalgia.
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4 Appears four times. It is written in **, from the obvious to the hidden, from the near to the far. It focuses on the back of buying oranges, highlighting the father's love for his son, the most concentrated expression of father's love, the most important thing, and the key to the best expression of father's love.
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4 times The sincere, deep, and touching love between father and son written by the author is not only a traditional innocent and noble feeling that conforms to our national ethics and morality, but also that father and son are considerate of each other, especially the father's father's love between father and son, which blends bitter and sad emotions, contains the struggle in the face of bad luck and the struggle against the old world of weak human affection. Although this is only a resentful but not angry resistance, it will also arouse people's sympathy, sighs and even strong resonance.
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On the whole, it feels good, but my personal feeling is that the back of the end and beginning should be better written, which makes people think about it.
I think the words in the middle that describe the action are the best, especially the part that describes the author's father giving oranges to his son on the platform impressed me the most, and every word in that paragraph is used so naturally and in line with the author's feelings. More than 20 years later, these impressions are still in my mind.
The opening sentence points to the theme: I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and the thing I can't forget the most is his back. (Narrative).
Middle: I saw him wearing a black cloth hat, a black cloth coat, and a dark blue cotton robe, staggering to the side of the railway. This paragraph can be seen very well The author's good writing skills:
Action words (wear, wear, etc.), words that describe colors (black, black, dark cyan, etc.). The text is concise, concise, and plain.
Conclusion: When I read this, in the crystal tears, I saw the back of the fat, green cotton robe and black cloth horse coat. (Narrative description).
Of course, the benevolent see the benevolent, the wise see the wise, and the above is just a little personal talk about it.
This is a very suitable prose for careful reading, Zhu Ziqing's prose has a very strong personality, from his essay you can read his various feelings, to describe himself, Zhu Ziqing is a Dacheng essayist.
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The second time is the most moving, why read the content of the text and imagine it yourself, I'm sorry, because I don't know...
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A total of four were written.
1.Opening: The "back" of my father in my memory, "The thing I can't forget the most is his."
2."The back of my father when he bought oranges", "I saw his back at this time, and my tears quickly flowed".
3.The "back" when he was separated from his father, "when his back blended in with the people who came and went, he couldn't find it anymore".
4.After saying goodbye, he recalled the "back", "In the crystal tears, I saw the back of the fat, green cloth cotton robe and black cloth horse coat.
Tears of sorrow Seeing my father, seeing my family, and thinking of my grandmother.
Tears of emotion Hope father buys oranges and father and son part.
Tears of farewell, father and son part.
Tears of sadness reappear in the back, tears shining.
It doesn't matter, they don't go well. The father was anxious to find a job at that time, and under the great pressure of survival, he was worried, but his son was above everything else in his mind, and he was afraid that his son would make a mistake on the road, so he finally decided to send it himself.
I'll buy a few oranges to go. You're right here, don't move. The father had already put his son in the car and taken good care of him, and the son persuaded him to go, but the father still felt that he had not done enough, and when he saw that there were oranges selling at the station, he wanted to buy oranges for his son.
It's not easy to cross the railway, and he is a little tired, so that his son can be used, he is willing. He was also afraid that his son would come out with him and forget his luggage. My father's care is really meticulous.
I'm leaving, I'm going to write over there! I am worried about the safety of the road, and I can only rest assured when my son returns to Beijing and writes to report his safety.
Go inside, there's no one inside. After walking a few steps, he turned back, and it can be seen that he is still thinking about his son in his heart, and he is reluctant. Thinking of his son's luggage, he told his son to be careful, and to think about everything for his son's sake.
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.How many times is the father's back written in the text? Please find it from the text. Which of them"Back"The most specific and touching thing to write?
The sixth natural paragraph: "I saw him wearing a little black cloth hat......My tears soon flowed. ”
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