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A little bit of verbose, verbose from a different angle.
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Use more punctuation, more paragraphs, and more sentences.
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Writing a narrative essay can quickly write a thousand words, an essay about the process of how things happened and how they ended, an essay describing a scene in a certain place, a story, a **, a fairy tale, a fable, some diary, etc. This is a narrative in the narrow sense.
Narrative is a very widely used expression. In addition to narratives that are mainly expressed in narratives, there are often fragments of memorization in discussions, expository essays, and practical essays.
The material is the fact reflected in the narrative. The scattered facts we get from observing life and reading books and newspapers are called "materials"; If the main idea is summarized from the material, and then the material is selected according to the central idea, the materials that have been processed and selected to have a memory connection with each other are called "subject matter".
Mastering a wealth of material is the foundation for writing a good narrative. Because the article is a reflection of objective things, the author should have a detailed understanding of objective things, if he knows nothing or does not know much about objective things (materials), how can he reflect objective things? As the saying goes, "it is difficult for a good woman to cook without rice"; If there is no rice, it is difficult or impossible to make rice.
If you carefully observe life, observe all kinds of people in life, and understand all kinds of things, not "turn a blind eye and listen but do not hear", but "see and hear", plus read all kinds of books and newspapers extensively, and accumulate all kinds of materials in your mind or in your notebook, you will be able to write articles left and right, and you will be handy. Therefore, it is completely impossible to say that collecting all kinds of materials is the premise of writing a good article.
The point of view reflected in the essay through the narration of people or things is the central idea. Please note that the central idea is a point of view, a kind of thought, and choosing a good subject matter and summarizing the central idea from the material is the basic skill of writing a narrative essay, and it should be trained in a down-to-earth manner. The refining center also has some thinking methods, such as generalizing the common points of things, comparing the differences of things, association, carrying out reverse associations, expressing one's own attitude, looking for causal connections, and so on.
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The role of the description of scenery in the narrative.
Texts in junior high school are mainly narratives, and narratives are inseparable from descriptions, so students cannot understand the expression of descriptions well, and often confuse the content of descriptions with their functions. Based on some texts in junior high school, I would like to talk about my personal role in the description of scenery.
The description of scenery is mainly to show the environment in which the characters are active, so that the reader is immersed in the scene. The preliminary analysis has the following functions.
1. Explain the time and place where the story takes place, and reveal the background of the work.
For example, the description of the layout of the hotel in Luzhen at the beginning of "Kong Jiji": "The layout of the hotel in Luzhen is different from other places: it is a large counter in the shape of a curved ruler on the street, and hot water is prepared in the cabinet, which can warm wine at any time. The laborers, who worked in the afternoon and evening, spent four pounds of copper to buy a bowl of wine.
The social background and specific humanistic characteristics of the time were explained.
Another example is paragraph 5 in "One Side": "Outside the door, the drizzle of smoke is twisted and rolled by the autumn wind, flying in no direction." The shop was as cold as a cellar, and the cold air drilled up from the trouser tube. It explains the time when the story takes place and the natural environment at that time, and also implies the social environment at that time.
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Giving you some ways to write, I hope it will help you:
1. Observe carefully.
Careful observation is the golden key to improving your writing. The article is the product of the reflection of objective things in the author's head and in the author, and in order to reflect the object, it is not necessary to make careful observation of objective things. Only by careful observation can we find broken gold and jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena, and grab the shining treasures from the mixture of mud and sand.
If you don't grasp it, "observation" is the golden key to open the door, and the "iron threshold" of composition will definitely not be able to be crossed.
2. Read more.
Familiar with three Tang poems, can not compose poems and chant. Mr. Lu Xun also advocated reading more, "You must be like a bee, picking many flowers, so that you can make honey, if you sting in one place, the income will be very limited, boring." "We emphasize that we should read more, read selectively, and read more importantly, to understand the structure, skills, and language characteristics of the articles we read, so that we can grasp the composition more profoundly and change more.
3. Skillful selection of materials.
Careful selection is an accelerator to improve your composition. The requirement of material selection is to be novel, the so-called novelty, is to choose the general people have not been contacted, or to turn a blind eye to the profound meaning. Once the author puts pen to paper, it is thought-provoking and inspiring.
The angle of material selection should be small, and the material should be small to see the big, and write about the material that everyone has in their eyes and everyone has in their pen. To this end, it is necessary to compare, analyze, and synthesize various materials in our minds, and carry out rough and refined extraction, transformation and processing, and only in this way can we make the materials novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated scrutiny is very helpful to improve the level of composition.
Fourth, often practice the pen.
Practicing your writing regularly is the key to improving your composition. If you want to enter the door of composition and seek continuous improvement, it is more important to practice more. As the proverb goes:
It is better to read ten articles than to write one. This shows the truth that the practice of composition produces true knowledge. After we have studied an article, understood the structure of the article, and figured out the writing characteristics of the article, we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice, to practice, and to make it our own writing ability.
In fact, we can practice writing after the first text. The fragment practice is a good way to practice the pen, and the fragment practice does not take a long time, and the purpose of practicing the pen is achieved. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing, and if you keep keeping a diary every day, you will have a solid foundation in Russian.
5. Frequent revision.
Repeated revisions are a catalyst for improving the level of your composition. Revision is an indispensable step in the composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of the composition. The predecessor said well, "The article is not tired of being changed a hundred times."
The article was changed. "Cao Xueqin wrote "Dream of Red Mansions" for ten years, adding and deleting five times, "Tolsqin's "War and Peace" has been revised seven times; Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after the decision is completed, and try to delete the dispensable words, sentences, and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the processing process from the first draft to the final draft.
Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, and we have to work on "revision".
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