400 word essay between us to write father and son

One night, it was raining heavily, and people were resting at home, with only a little pedestrians and vehicles on the road. Xiao Ming and his father walked out of the hotel, and saw that it was raining, it was not small, and it was still windy, and the two did not bring umbrellas, so they had to walk quickly home. There was still some distance from home, and there was a man walking slowly in front of them, this man was holding an umbrella.

Dad was a bald head, and he had just had a knife on his head recently, and the rain hit his head, which was cold and a little painful, so he quietly put his head under the man's umbrella. As he walked, the man's umbrella gradually tilted back, and Dad and Xiao Ming were about to lie on the ground. The man didn't notice it at all, and walked unhurriedly.

After a while, the gentleman spotted them, and he said to Xiao Ming's father, "Sir, what are you doing here?" "I'm sorry, you see, I'm bald, the rain hurts on my head, and I've just had a knife on my head recently, so I want to borrow your umbrella to block a little."

Dad said apologetically. "Oh, I see, yes, come on! The man said.

Well, an umbrella is not enough, you can sit on my shoulder, my volume is too big! Dad said. The man agreed.

Walking and walking, when he arrived at Xiao Ming's house, the man jumped down, and before leaving, his father said to the man: "Thank you, leave your ** number, can we be friends?" "No thanks, forget it!

I'll go first! With that, the man gradually disappeared into the night. "It's really a good deed without leaving a name, if people in the world can be as helpful as him, it will be a harmonious society, and I want to be like him when I grow up."

Xiao Ming looked at the man's back and said.

Key words: Father and Son Primary 4 400 words.

Word Count: 400 words essay.

Essay**: This essay is a 400-word essay on the fourth grade of primary school, titled: "Father and Son", everyone is welcome to contribute. Father and Son: Spring is a season of rejuvenation.

The grass is green, the flowers are red, the trees are taller, and everywhere is full of life. Grandpa and Xiao Ming take a walk in the park. When Grandpa saw the little tree grow taller, he thought:

The little trees have grown taller, and my Xiao Ming must have grown taller too!

So, he asked Xiao Ming to stand next to the tree, moved it with his hand and made a mark on the tree pole, and then quickly brought a nail and nailed it to the tree pole where he had made the mark. While disturbing the orange front nail, he said to Xiao Wu Hongming: "Look at how much taller you have grown next year."

The days passed day by day, and the cold winter ushered in. In winter, the north wind blows. The snowflakes flying all over the sky are like white elves.

All the leaves of the small tree have fallen off. The child took the tools and built a small snowman to accompany the little tree. Winter goes to spring, and the next spring.

Grandpa took Xiao Ming to measure his height again, Xiao Ming was stunned, how the nail was taller than himself, and grandpa couldn't figure it out. Class 21 Jin Shuyao April 2008 Famous Teacher's Comment: The text is very interesting, and there is also a moral in it.

However, the title of the essay is "Father and Son", but there is no father-son relationship in the essay. And the content of the essay doesn't seem to be very consistent with the title, which is the flaw of this article. Here, the author can change the title of the essay to "The Spring of Growth".

The short essay is more specific, but not expressive enough, nor vivid enough, it is suggested that the young author can appropriately increase the interest of the language, so that the short essay appears vibrant. (Scholastic China Distinguished Teacher: Mr. Ma Bin)2009-7-12 12:

On a sunny and blazing noon, the big yellow dog lay under the tree--- panting, and barked in the tree.

It's hot, it's hot! "And the small proprietor is very cool.

When the loving mother finished cooking, she cried out in a loud voice, "It's time to eat." ”

The fat bald and bearded father walked vigorously to the dining table and sat down, smelling the food on the dining table, "Ah! It smells so good! The bearded father couldn't help but say, "Really, what about my son?" ”

Xiaodong's mother said, "Maybe it's in the house!" Or I'll call him. Dad said, "I'll go and say hello."

Xiaodong's father walked to the front of Xiaodong's house, opened the door, and said, "What are you doing?" Hurry up and eat.

But Xiaodong put his chin on his shoulder, read on the ground with relish, didn't hear his father's words at all, said a few times like thirsty drinking salt ants teasing water--- in vain, anxious like ants on a hot pot, --- round and round, so, he screamed, and the house was about to collapse. Xiaodong faintly heard it and went out to eat, but Xiaodong's father thought: Huh?

What kind of book is my son reading, and it is so good?

And the mother and son, who had been waiting for a long time, said, "What is your father doing?" Why don't you come out to eat, the dishes are cold, and if you don't come out to eat, I will serve you with family law" It's really a set of mouths when you go out without a mask--- and you won't do this at all.

Xiaodong's mother called Xiaodong to call him father, and Xiaodong thought: It's really the same old way that a daughter wears ---her mother's shoes.

Xiao Dong walked to the door with a stool and vigorous steps, opened the door and said, "Dad, it's time to eat." And what I saw was that my father was reading his comic book, and my father was looking like a sleepy pillow--- just agreeing, if I called it, wouldn't I be scolded by my father, and if I didn't call it, I would be told by my mother, it was really a toast for the overlord--- and I had to do it if I didn't do it.

But after shouting a few times, my father was an old elm pimple --- couldn't move.

Xiaodong is really similar to his father, as the saying goes, "if there is a father, there must be a son". It's really "better to see than to hear".

I have a good father, he loves me very much, and if there is anything delicious, he has to leave it to me if he can't eat.

That day, my father came home late, and I ran over to him and said, "Dad, what did you bring me to eat today?" Dad said.

Aunt Jiang in the bureau gave me an orange and asked me to bring it to you to eat. "I saw that the orange was yellow and clear, crystal clear, and it definitely tasted good. I peeled a petal and put it in my mouth, and when I bit it gently, it was really sweet.

I thought: Why don't you let my dad taste such delicious oranges? But Dad must be reluctant to eat it.